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How To Write A Deftones Song

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You want a song that feels like it crawled out of a dream and then smashed a car window for dramatic effect. You want heavy guitars and fragile singing at the same time. You want lines that are gorgeous and weird and sound like they were whispered over static. This guide gives you the exact tools to write a song that captures the spirit of Deftones without copying their songs. Think texture over tricks, mood over showboating, and contrast over predictable moves.

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Everything here is written for musicians who want results and are not scared to get their hands dirty with pedals, weird tunings, and metaphors that make people uncomfortable. You will get a songwriting workflow, chord and tuning suggestions, vocal strategies for Chino like dynamics, lyrical prompts, production and arrangement maps, live playing tips, and exercises you can use today. We explain every acronym and term so you do not need to be a gear nerd to follow along.

What Makes a Deftones Song Sound Like Deftones

Deftones are not a formula. They are an approach to sound and mood that mixes heavy and delicate, clear and smeared, loud and intimate. When you listen to them you feel both crushed and held. To write in that style you must balance a few core elements.

  • Contrast between heavy guitar aggression and ethereal ambient sections. The push and pull creates tension.
  • Atmospheric textures from effects, samples, and synths that sit over or under the guitars like fog.
  • Dynamic vocals that move from whisper to scream to falsetto. Emotional honesty matters more than perfect pitch.
  • Minimalist melodic hooks that are memorable without being obvious. Often a repeated motif does the job.
  • Poetic, ambiguous lyrics that use sensory detail and metaphor instead of literal storytelling.
  • Rhythmic subtlety in the drums and bass. Groove and pocket matter as much as heaviness.

Start With a Mood Not a Riff

Deftones songs frequently feel like a small movie scene. Before you write a single note spend five minutes painting a mental mood. Ask a simple question and answer it with images.

Prompts

  • What color is the air in your song? Pick one word like violet or petrol.
  • Is the temperature hot, cold, sticky, or clean?
  • Who is in the room? A ghost, a lover, a stranger you used to know.

Write one sentence that captures the mood. Example: The room smells like burnt sugar and memory and the light is the color of bruises. Turn that sentence into a sonic goal. If your goal is bruise colored light you will choose low guitar frequencies and a vocal that sounds wounded and soft.

Choose a Tuning and Tone That Breathe

Tuning affects vibe more than a nice amp. Deftones have used various lower tunings to get weight and space. Lower tuning also creates more natural harmonic smear when you use effects like chorus and reverb.

Common tunings to try

  • Drop C. This is low and heavy and still lets you power chord easily. It gives the riff a big chest voice.
  • Drop C sharp. Slightly darker and tighter feeling than drop C. If your guitar is squeaky in C try this.
  • Standard tuned down one step. This keeps chord voicings familiar but gives a darker sheen.

Quick tuning explanation

Tuning is how you set the pitch of each string on the guitar. Drop C means you tune the lowest string down to C so power chords are played with one finger. People often call a tuning a prescription like a mood. You can change it later but pick one and live in it for the session.

Tone tips

  • Use a big amp or a well modeled amp. You want thickness more than clipping fuzz. Think saturated not smashed.
  • Stack effects. Try a subtle chorus before the amp and a plate style reverb after. Then add a little fuzz or overdrive to taste.
  • Add an octave effect on certain riffs. This creates that trembling, huge low harmonic that Deftones use.
  • Reverb that sits long but is dark. Bright big reverb creates shimmer. Darker reverb creates weight and sadness.

Guitar Ideas and Voicings That Create Space

Deftones guitar work often uses open string drones and sparse note choices to make room for vocals and texture. Chord voicings matter more than complex progressions.

Voicing recipes

  • Use a root or a fifth with an added open string drone. Let the open string ring under the chug.
  • Add major second or suspended second notes on top of heavy chords for a dissonant shimmer.
  • Play simple triads with big delay so the echoes become part of the chord.
  • Use single note melodic lines with tremolo and chorus under a heavy riff. The contrast sells the melody.

Example chord progression in drop C

Try C5 to G5 to Bbmaj7sus2 to F5

Explanation: C5 and G5 are power chord shapes that anchor the riff. Bbmaj7sus2 gives a slightly sweet and uneasy color. F5 brings it back. Play these with a slow attack and let reverb bloom. You just made an arena sized cloud.

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Riffing Like Stephen Carpenter Without Sounding Like Stephen Carpenter

Stephen Carpenter is an architect of heaviness. His riffs are crunchy, rhythmic, and physically heavy. To channel that energy avoid copying exact notes. Focus on approach.

Carpenter approach checklist

  • Play with long note values interspersed with tight palm muted chugs.
  • Make the low notes form a heavy anchor. Let higher notes add color not complexity.
  • Use syncopation. Place accents off the beat to create unease.
  • Layer rhythms. A simple riff on top of a different rhythmic palm mute can sound like two instruments.

Practice jam

  1. Set metronome at 85 beats per minute for mood. Slower tempos let the heaviness breathe.
  2. Play a low drone on the tonic for four bars. Add a palm muted chug on every off beat for four bars. Then drop everything and play a single ringing note that hangs for two bars. Repeat and record.
  3. Listen back. Pick the moment that made your spine tingle. That is the seed.

Bass and Drums: The Quiet Engines

Bass in a Deftones influenced song often supports space and texture. It can be melodic but it rarely fights the guitar. Drums are patient and groove oriented.

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Bass tips

  • Use a round tone with some mid cut. Let bass sit under the guitar rather than on top.
  • Follow root notes with occasional small melodic fills. Use slides and sustaining notes to add warmth.
  • When guitars are sparse, the bass can play a counter melody to give the chorus momentum.

Drum tips

  • Play grooves that breathe. Avoid constant double time unless the song needs adrenaline.
  • Use ghost notes and syncopated hi hat patterns to add forward motion without shouting.
  • Accent small fills. One well placed fill matters more than a parade of flams.

Vocals That Move From Broken to Victorious

Chino Moreno is known for dynamic range and emotional delivery. You do not need to scream all the time. You need to sell the feeling. Focus on control, texture, and timing.

Vocal states

  • Whispered intimacy. Close mic, low air, tiny vowel shapes.
  • Clean melodic singing. Comfortable chest voice with breath control.
  • Falsetto or head voice. Thin and haunting, used for shimmer.
  • Rage or scream. Use only when the song peaks. Safety matters. Learn proper technique.

Practical vocal workflow

  1. Record a conversational read of the lyrics first. This shows natural stresses and rhythms.
  2. Sing over the groove in a comfortable register. Commit to one emotional state per pass.
  3. Record a breathy close mic take for intimate lines and a bigger mic take for chorus lines. Layer them in the final mix for depth.
  4. Save screams for one or two moments. The contrast makes them hit harder.

Safety note

Screaming incorrectly can harm your voice. Learn distortion and scream techniques with a coach or reliable online resources. If you are sick or feel strain, do not force it. Use production tricks like saturation, doubling, and reverb to give aggression without wrecking your throat.

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Position songs that really feel built for goosebumps, using arrangements, images over abstracts, and sharp lyric tone.
You will learn

  • Pick the sharpest scene for feeling
  • Prosody that matches pulse
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  • Images over abstracts
  • Arrangements that support the story

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Lyrics That Are Poetic and Creepy in the Best Way

Deftones lyrics tend to be impressionistic. They are not a grocery list of feelings. They hint. They show. They leave space for interpretation. The voice often sounds like someone remembering the end of a dream.

Lyric rules

  • Use sensory detail. Smell and texture are underrated. Mention heat, sugar, rust, glass, silk.
  • Be specific but ambiguous. Name a plant, a room, a time of day. Let the meaning remain slippery.
  • Use metaphor and simile sparingly but well. A single strong image can carry an entire verse.
  • Repeat a phrase as a hook. Repetition here becomes mantra not cliché when used with music.

Real life relatable scenario

You are at home at three in the morning scrolling through a voicemail you never wanted to hear. The chorus says: Your voice is a room I do not know. That line is simple but it maps to a thousand scenes. Listeners who have felt alienation will project their own memory into that line. That is power.

Prosody and Melody: Let the Words Breathe

Prosody means matching the natural rhythm of spoken words with the rhythm of the melody. If you make a hard word land on a tiny note it will feel off even if the lyric is brilliant.

Prosody checklist

  • Speak the line out loud at conversation speed. Mark the stressed syllables.
  • Place stressed syllables on stronger beats or longer notes. This feels natural to listeners.
  • Use vowels that sing well on sustained notes. Open vowels like ah and oh carry air and emotion.
  • Reserve consonant heavy lines for rhythmic sections or short stabs. Let consonants drive groove not sustain.

Arrangement Map: Build Tension Through Space

Deftones songs use arrangement to tell the story. Dynamics are not only volume. They are density of instruments, reverb tails, and silence.

Arrangement blueprint

  • Intro with ambient texture and a single motif. Give listeners a hook of mood.
  • Verse with sparse guitar and intimate vocal. Use close mic and dark reverb.
  • Pre chorus with slight rhythmic lift and a hint of melody. Introduce a counter vocal or pad.
  • Chorus with fuller guitars, doubled vocals, and a clear melodic statement. Let the low end breathe.
  • Verse two with added texture or reversed guitar sample to keep momentum.
  • Bridge or breakdown that removes one or two elements to create tension. Could be ambient or percussive.
  • Final chorus with extra layers, a big drum fill, and possibly a vocal scream or extended falsetto. End with a long reverb tail or a sudden cut to silence.

Production Tricks That Create the Signature Fog

These are not secret voodoo spells. They are deliberate choices you can make to create space and mystery.

  • Parallel processing for vocals. Send the vocal to a chain that is crushed with compression and heavy saturation. Blend it under the clean vocal to add aggression without losing clarity. Parallel processing means making a copy of the track, processing the copy, and blending it with the original.
  • Reverb layering. Use a short plate for intimacy and a long dark hall with pre delay at low wet level for atmosphere. Two reverbs create depth.
  • Reverse reverb swells to lead into vocal lines. Reverse a vocal phrase, apply reverb, then reverse back to create a sucked in shimmer that cues the ear.
  • Gated ambient textures that breathe with a sidechain to the kick. The ambient pads duck slightly when drums hit creating a pumping sense without obvious compression.
  • Subtle pitch modulation like chorus or tremolo on background guitars. Keep it slow and tasteful.
  • Use space as an instrument. Let long tails trail out. Silence and decay are as important as loud parts.

Songwriting Workflows That Actually Finish Songs

Writing a Deftones inspired song can spiral into endless tinkering. Use a workflow with clear stops to ship something that feels complete.

  1. Idea seed session. Spend one hour recording anything that feels interesting. Create three sketches. Label them A B and C.
  2. Pick the mood. Choose one sketch and set a mood sentence. This reduces second guessing.
  3. Riff lock. Spend another hour developing one riff and one ambient motif. Keep both under two minutes each.
  4. Topline lab. Record one pass of melody over the riff. Do not overthink lyrics. Use vowel passes first to find melody shapes.
  5. Lyric pass. Write a verse and chorus with the crime scene edit. Replace abstracts with concrete objects.
  6. Demo quick. Record a basic demo in three hours. Vocals do not need to be perfect. You want arrangement and mood locked.
  7. Feedback loop. Play the demo for two people and ask one question. What line or moment made you feel something. Fix that first.

Exercises and Prompts To Become Dangerous With Mood

Vowel melody pass

Play the riff on loop. Sing only vowels for three minutes. Mark the gestures you want to repeat. These are your topline seeds.

Texture swap

Take one guitar part and replace its tone with a synth, a field recording, or a reversed sample. See what changes in emotion. Do this three times and pick the version that surprises you most.

Image ladder

Write five images that fit your mood. Then write five verbs for each image. Use combinations to make lyric lines. For example image: cracked window. Verbs: breathe, whisper, collect, refuse, swallow. Line: The cracked window breathes your perfume back at me.

Two minute chorus

Give yourself two minutes to write a chorus. No edits. If it stinks, do it again. Speed forces instinctual choices and those feel true.

Examples and Before After Lyric Rewrites

Theme: Loss that is also desire.

Before: I miss you and I cannot sleep. This is too basic and tells rather than shows.

After: Your shadow makes the lamp tilt. I wake to find its shape still warm on the pillow. This gives a sensory image and a strange physical presence.

Theme: A beautiful destructive relationship.

Before: You hurt me and I cannot move on. Boring and literal.

After: You pull the curtain and the room forgets daylight. My hands learn the map of your absence. This implies harm and the weird intimacy of remembering.

Live Tips and Performance Notes

Deftones live feels both massive and intimate. If you are playing these songs live remember small details that translate to stage energy.

  • Make room for dynamics. If you play the soft parts too loud you lose the payoff of the heavy parts.
  • Use in ear monitors or foldback to hear subtle pads. Ambient elements collapse without reference mixes on stage.
  • Time your vocal breaths. The intimacy of soft singing is ruined if you run out of air after the first phrase.
  • Bring spare strings and a backup guitar tuned to the same tuning. Lower tunings break strings more often.

Common Mistakes and How To Fix Them

People try to copy Deftones by over stacking guitars and screaming constantly. That is not the point. Here are common traps and quick fixes.

  • Too many guitars and clashing textures. Fix by choosing one dominant texture for each section. If guitars are full in the chorus, simplify in the verse.
  • Lyrics that explain instead of imply. Fix by trading abstractions for concrete images. Replace feelings with objects that hold feeling.
  • Vocal consistency. If the singer is loud the whole time the quiet moments do not land. Fix by recording separate passes for intimate lines and using distance and small mic technique.
  • Over compressed drums. Heavy compression kills room and dynamics. Fix by parallel compression on drums instead of full bus smash.
  • Forgetting to leave silence. Silence is dramatic. Fix by intentionally creating bar long gaps to let reverb and decay do emotional work.

Publishing and Credit Tips

If you write a song inspired by Deftones you should honor influence while keeping your song original. Do not copy melodies or lyrics. If a riff heavily mirrors a known song get legal advice if you plan to release commercially.

Credit everyone who contributed to the final shape. Give clear splits early if you co wrote. It keeps ego out of the studio and your rent paid.

Action Plan You Can Use Today

  1. Pick a mood sentence and a color. Write it on a sticky note.
  2. Tune your guitar to drop C or one step down and jam a slow heavy riff for 15 minutes. Record everything even the stupid bits.
  3. Create an ambient motif using a pad or a reversed sample. Place it under the riff to make a bed of air.
  4. Do a vowel pass for melody. Record one verse and one chorus. Do not edit for now.
  5. Write a short verse with one concrete image and one verb. Do the crime scene edit. Remove abstract words.
  6. Make two vocal passes for the chorus. One intimate whisper and one bigger belt. Blend them in a rough mix to hear the contrast.
  7. Finish a demo and play it for one friend. Ask them what line stuck. Nail that line in the final record.

Frequently Asked Questions

What tuning do Deftones use

Deftones have used various tunings over their career. Common choices are drop C and standard tuned down by a step. Lower tunings give a heavy low end and allow open string drones that sound massive. Try both and pick the one that matches your vocal range and song mood.

How do I get the big Deftones vocal sound

Blend a close mic intimate take with a slightly distant airy take. Use parallel saturation to add grit and a long dark reverb on a send for atmosphere. Keep dynamics intact. The contrast between soft close vocals and larger than life chorus vocals is the secret.

Can I write a Deftones style song without heavy guitar gear

Yes. The essence is in the arrangement and mood not gear. If you only have an acoustic guitar you can create heavy feeling with low playing, palm muted strums, and layered ambient pads from a phone app or small synth. Use vocal texture and production to simulate the heaviness. Creativity matters more than the perfect amp.

How important are effects pedals for this sound

Effects pedals are very useful but not mandatory. Chorus, delay, fuzz, and reverb are commonly used. If you do not own pedals you can use plugin effects or amp modelers. The important thing is how you use effects to create space and texture not the specific brand of pedal.

What is the best way to practice dynamic vocals

Practice three states: whisper for intimacy, clean singing for melody, and aggressive edge for peak moments. Record each state separately over the same section and listen back to hear how they sit together. Work with a vocal coach or online lessons if you want to scream safely. Hydration and warm ups help a lot.

Learn How to Write Songs About Position
Position songs that really feel built for goosebumps, using arrangements, images over abstracts, and sharp lyric tone.
You will learn

  • Pick the sharpest scene for feeling
  • Prosody that matches pulse
  • Hooks that distill the truth
  • Bridge turns that add perspective
  • Images over abstracts
  • Arrangements that support the story

Who it is for

  • Songwriters chasing honest, powerful emotion writing

What you get

  • Scene picker worksheet
  • Prosody checklist
  • Hook distiller
  • Arrangement cue map


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About Toni Mercia

Toni Mercia is a Grammy award-winning songwriter and the founder of Lyric Assistant. With over 15 years of experience in the music industry, Toni has written hit songs for some of the biggest names in music. She has a passion for helping aspiring songwriters unlock their creativity and take their craft to the next level. Through Lyric Assistant, Toni has created a tool that empowers songwriters to make great lyrics and turn their musical dreams into reality.