Songwriting Advice
Write A Metal Song
You want to create a metal song that punches the chest, flips the bird, and still lives in the listener head after one spin. You want riffs that feel unfair, drums that sound like artillery, vocals that make souls vote, and lyrics that sting or inspire. This guide gives you a complete path from blank page to a demo you can be proud of. No fluff. Just tools you can use right now.
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Quick Links to Useful Sections
- Why Metal Is a Songwriting Language
- Metal Subgenres and What Each Wants
- Classic heavy metal
- Thrash
- Death metal
- Black metal
- Metalcore and modern heavy
- Progressive metal
- Step One: Decide the Core Idea of the Song
- Step Two: Build a Riff That Carries the Song
- Power chord stomp
- Chromatic march
- Modal spice
- Interval motif
- Riff Writing Exercise
- Structure Templates That Work For Metal
- Template A Classic metal anthem
- Template B Breakdown heavy
- Template C Progressive journey
- Rhythm and Drum Language
- Vocals: How to Choose and Execute Delivery
- Harsh vocal techniques explained
- Clean vocals
- Backing and gang vocals
- Lyrics for Metal That Stick
- Common themes and how to make them fresh
- Lyric Writing Exercise
- Harmony, Scales, and Lead Work
- Arrangement and Dynamics
- Production Essentials for Metal
- Guitar tone
- Bass role
- Drum production
- Vocal recording
- Mixing tips
- Common Metal Songwriting Mistakes and How To Fix Them
- Finish Faster With a Workflow That Works
- Songwriting Hacks and Tricks
- Riff inversion
- Metric modulation
- Call and response
- Collapse into silence
- Examples: Before and After Lines
- Practice Routines to Get Better Fast
- How to Test a Metal Song Live Friendly
- Releases and Demos
- Collaboration Tips
- Common Terms and Acronyms Explained
- Action Plan You Can Use Today
- Metal Songwriting FAQ
This is for musicians who like caffeine, late night jam sessions, and the smell of burnt gain. If you are a singer, guitarist, bassist, drummer, or bedroom producer reading this, you will find workflows, exercises, and real life examples that make the process faster and more fun. Expect practical templates for structure, riff design, lyrics, vocal delivery, and production so you can finish songs and not just collect riffs like trading cards.
Why Metal Is a Songwriting Language
Metal is not a single thing. Metal is a toolbox. It includes speed and groove, melody and harshness, brutality and nuance. When you understand what your chosen style asks for, you can deliver power while staying memorable. At its best, metal balances raw energy with clear musical statements that let listeners feel both the impact and the meaning.
- Riff first thinking means you build the song from a memorable guitar or bass hook.
- Contrast matters because the loudest moment only lands if quieter or different moments come first.
- Rhythm is the weapon in metal. Groove and syncopation hit harder than endless speed.
- Production is tone crafting because the right guitar and drum tone make the parts feel intentional rather than noisy.
Metal Subgenres and What Each Wants
Not all metal songs are created equal. Choosing a style focuses your decisions.
Classic heavy metal
Think melody plus crunchy guitars plus confident vocals. Riffs are memorable and singable. Use diatonic scales with occasional chromatic flavor. Solos can be long and expressive.
Thrash
Speed and aggression. Palm muted chugs, quick alternate picking, and fast double kick drums. Lyrics often political or confrontational. Structure is direct.
Death metal
Low tunings, blast beats, and vocal growls. Riff complexity is high and rhythm is king. Use chromaticism, diminished shapes, and sudden tempo changes to create menace.
Black metal
Atmosphere and tremolo picked textures. Open chords and reverb create coldness. Vocals are shrieked or raspy. Production can be raw or cinematic depending on intent.
Metalcore and modern heavy
Merges melody and breakdowns. Clean vocals meet screams. Emphasis on songs that work live with singalong choruses and pit friendly breakdowns.
Progressive metal
Odd meters, long forms, and technical displays. Songwriting needs balance so complexity does not become boring. Motifs and recurring themes hold listener attention.
Step One: Decide the Core Idea of the Song
Before you crank amp volume, write a single sentence that states the song feeling and the main lyrical angle. Keep it blunt. This is your north star.
Examples
- We watch the city burn and we do not regret it.
- I survived the worst night and I am still laughing.
- I am done forgiving myself for being small.
Turn that sentence into a short title you could shout at a show. The title will guide your chorus and the energy of your riffs.
Step Two: Build a Riff That Carries the Song
In metal the riff is often the chorus of rock music. A great riff is simple enough to stick and interesting enough to hold attention for four bars or eight bars. Use these riff creation methods.
Power chord stomp
Start with a palm muted open chord to create groove. Make the rhythm interesting with rests and syncopation rather than constant attack. Try this approach in a rehearsal room and the groove will catch you fast.
Chromatic march
Use adjacent frets in sequence to create menace. Chromatic runs work great for closing a phrase and then resolving to a heavy root note. Think marching tanks not piano students.
Modal spice
Phrygian and harmonic minor are classic metal flavors. Phrygian gives a Spanish or dark vibe. Harmonic minor makes for exotic, dramatic melodies. Use them in short fragments not entire verses unless you want a specific atmosphere.
Interval motif
Write a short three note motif using a wide interval like a fourth or fifth and repeat it with small rhythmic variation. The interval creates an identity that listeners can latch onto instantly.
Riff Writing Exercise
- Pick a tempo in BPM. If you do not know BPM it is beats per minute. For thrash try one hundred sixty to two hundred. For doom try fifty to seventy five.
- Set a two bar loop with drums or a click. Record one minute of improvisation on guitar using only four notes.
- Listen back and mark the moments that make your neck hair stand up. Extract the best measure and loop it.
- Modify the rhythm so the motif ends with a rest. A well placed silence makes the hit feel heavier.
Structure Templates That Work For Metal
Here are three reliable structures depending on your goal. Use them like recipes.
Template A Classic metal anthem
- Intro riff with a short lead hook
- Verse one with reduced arrangement
- Pre chorus to build tension
- Chorus riff that repeats
- Verse two
- Chorus
- Solo over chorus riff or bridge
- Final chorus with doubled guitars and gang vocals
Template B Breakdown heavy
- Intro with ambient or tremolo picked section
- Verse one with chugging rhythm
- Chorus with melodic clean vocals or shouted title
- Build into breakdown for full release
- Bridge with tempo change and technical riffing
- Final breakdown and outro riff
Template C Progressive journey
- Intro motif
- Verse one
- Instrumental passage
- Verse two in new meter
- Chorus returns as motif with variation
- Extended solo and theme return
- Outro that echoes the intro
Rhythm and Drum Language
Drums are the heartbeat of metal. Decide whether the track will ride on groove or on sheer density. Blast beats communicate extreme aggression. Half time drumming makes a riff feel massive. Syncopated snare placements create tension and groove.
Learn these drum templates
- Blast beat is continuous snare and kick with fast subdivided hi hat or ride. It screams intensity.
- Double kick drive uses the bass drum to create rolling low end. Useful for fast riffs and transitions.
- Half time stomp moves the snare onto beat three in common time creating slow heavy push.
- Syncopated groove places accents on off beats and creates a swinging menace.
Real life scenario
Imagine you are writing a song about being betrayed. A slow half time verse with open low strings makes the lyrics feel heavy and personal. When the chorus hits use a double kick assault to convey the rage of confrontation. The change in drum feel makes the chorus hit harder emotionally.
Vocals: How to Choose and Execute Delivery
Metal vocals range from clean melodic singing to throat shredding gutturals. Pick a delivery that serves the song. You can mix styles. Many modern bands alternate clean chorus vocals with harsh verses to create contrast.
Harsh vocal techniques explained
- Scream refers to higher pitched harsh technique common in punk influenced styles. It is abrasive and emotive.
- Growl is a low guttural technique used in death metal. It produces a rumbling sound that anchors brutality.
- Fry scream is a method that uses vocal fry to create distortion without damaging cords if done correctly. Learn proper breathing and placement and consider coaching.
For all harsh techniques get a coach or use reliable tutorials focusing on healthy technique. Bad technique leads to real damage. If you are drained after one take you are doing it wrong.
Clean vocals
Clean singing in metal should be strong. Use chest voice for melody and mix voice for higher notes. Register shifts should be intentional. Doubling the clean vocal with a slightly distorted layer can make it blend with the guitars without getting lost.
Backing and gang vocals
Gang vocals are when multiple people shout or sing a line together. They are simple to record and amplify the live feel. Stack multiple takes with varied mic distance and panning for width.
Lyrics for Metal That Stick
Metal lyrics can be poetic, confrontational, narrative, or symbolic. The best metal lyrics are specific and honest. Avoid vague metaphors that sound like a fortune cookie. Use striking images and a sense of place. People remember lines that would look good on a jacket or that make them nod hard in the car.
Common themes and how to make them fresh
- Anger can be given life by naming objects and small actions. Do not just scream anger. Show a detail like a cracked watch or a burned ticket.
- Loss feels real when anchored in daily scenes. The last cup of coffee in a broken mug works better than the abstract phrase I miss you forever.
- Rebellion becomes interesting when you name the system and the minor victories. Small acts of sabotage feel more cinematic than slogans.
Real life scenario
Instead of writing about feeling betrayed at a vast cosmic level, write a verse about the smell of someone perfume that still lingers on a leather jacket. That detail will make a chorus about betrayal cut deeper because the listener can see and smell the scene.
Lyric Writing Exercise
- Write your one sentence core idea.
- List five physical objects connected to that idea. For example keys, ashtray, mirror, boots, ticket.
- Write four lines each including at least one object and one action. Do not explain emotions directly.
- Turn one line into a chorus hook. If it reads like a meme rewrite it with a stronger image.
Harmony, Scales, and Lead Work
Guitar solos and lead lines are where melody lives in metal. You want leads to sing over aggression. Pick scales that match your mood. Use simple motifs and repeat them with small variations. Fast note runs are impressive but do not replace melodic sense.
- Minor pentatonic is a rock and metal staple for bluesy leads.
- Natural minor is emotive and dark without feeling exotic.
- Harmonic minor introduces an augmented second interval that gives an eastern or classical flavor.
- Phrygian is dark and modal with a lowered second that creates tension.
Lead tip
Write a two bar melody that repeats. Add a small ornament like a bend or trill on the second repeat. The contrast between first hearing and the ornament makes a solo memorable.
Arrangement and Dynamics
Arrangement is the art of making heavy feel meaningful. Metal needs breathing space. Use dynamic contrast to make the loud moments feel massive. Pull instruments back before a chorus. Add a single guitar line in a verse and let it swell into full band. Silence or near silence before a drop is a trick that works every time.
- Intro motif returns in the outro to give the song a circle feeling.
- Use frequency carving so guitar, bass, and vocal each have their own space.
- Add small textural elements like a distant choir or a reversed cymbal to create tension before a hit.
Production Essentials for Metal
Good production can make a mediocre performance sound great and a great performance sound legendary. Here are essentials to lock in a modern metal sound.
Guitar tone
Dial in a tight low end. Use a combination of amp modeling or real amp with a quality cabinet mic. High gain is about tightness not mud. Use a scooped low mid not a total absence. A focused mid range helps riffs cut through the mix.
Bass role
The bass should support the guitar but also provide body. Use a DI for clarity and a miked cabinet blend for grit. Sometimes a slight compression makes the bass more consistent under heavy picking.
Drum production
Kick drum needs a click and body. Triggering can help when you need consistency but do not over quantize human performance unless the song asks for relentless machine feel. Snare should be punchy and sit slightly ahead of the guitars in the mix for attack.
Vocal recording
Use a mic that flatters the vocal type. For harsh vocals a dynamic mic that can handle high SPL is useful. Capture multiple takes and comp the best parts. For live feel add subtle room mics or parallel saturation to give grit.
Mixing tips
- High pass guitars so the bass and kick have space. Around ninety to one hundred hertz is common but listen to the song.
- Use bus compression on drums to glue the kit together.
- Parallel distortion on guitars can fatten tone without losing clarity of low end.
Common Metal Songwriting Mistakes and How To Fix Them
- Too many ideas confuses listeners. Fix by choosing one main riff or melodic idea to return to.
- Riff fatigue happens when a riff repeats with no variation. Fix by changing dynamics or adding a counter melody every second repeat.
- Lost vocals occurs when the guitars fill the vocal range. Fix by scooping mids slightly or using placement and EQ to carve space.
- Technical show off that bores is common in progressive songs. Fix by tying technical passages to a clear motif and then returning to the hook.
Finish Faster With a Workflow That Works
- Lock the core riff and record a guitar scratch. Do not waste time on perfect tone yet.
- Write the chorus title and the one sentence core idea. Make the chorus a repeatable phrase that works shouted and sung.
- Record a scratch vocal to map phrasing. Play with harsh and clean deliveries to see what fits.
- Record a basic drum take or program a realistic pattern. Capture the feel not the perfection.
- Arrange the song with clear contrast points and leave spaces for the listener to breathe.
- Track proper takes focusing on emotion. Edit and comp with taste. Less is more when it preserves energy.
Songwriting Hacks and Tricks
Riff inversion
Take your main riff and move every note up or down by the same interval to create a new section that feels related but different.
Metric modulation
Use the same rhythmic motif but count it in a new meter to create a sudden shift in feel without losing motif identity.
Call and response
Have guitar play a line and vocal answer it. This interaction makes the song feel like a conversation and is great for live moments.
Collapse into silence
Stop everything for one bar before a chorus and then let the chorus arrive like a physical impact. Silence makes sound hit harder.
Examples: Before and After Lines
Theme rage and liberation.
Before I am angry and I will take it out on you.
After I slam the cup into the sink and watch the cracks map my name across the ceramic.
Theme betrayal.
Before You betrayed me and I am hurt.
After Your lighter still sits face down on the dashboard like it is waiting for permission.
Theme apocalypse vibe.
Before The world ends and I feel small.
After Traffic lights blink like broken teeth while we drive the bad route home.
Practice Routines to Get Better Fast
- Riff day Spend an hour creating six riffs. Do not finish them. The point is quantity. Later you will pick the best.
- Vocal day Record ten minutes of harsh vocal improvisation. Mark three lines you can use later.
- Arrangement day Take one riff and make three arrangements using the templates above. Compare which one works live.
How to Test a Metal Song Live Friendly
Metal thrives on energy. A song that works recorded might not kill live. Try this test.
- Play the song loud to a friend who is not part of the band and watch their body language.
- Ask them what line or moment made them want to move or shout. If they cannot name a moment you lack a clear payoff.
- Shorten long instrumental passages. Live audiences want payoff within two to three minutes. Leave space for a long epic but make sure the crowd can latch onto one or two signature moments fast.
Releases and Demos
A demo is not a production. A demo is a document that proves the song works. A good demo has the riff, a solid vocal performance, and a drum take that sells the groove. Later you will produce and polish. Do not overproduce demos. Keep them crisp and honest.
Collaboration Tips
Working with others is how many bands create their best work. Keep these rules.
- Bring an idea to the room not a finished product. Ideas are easier to adapt than defenses.
- Document every take. A forgotten riff in a jam can be a chorus later.
- Be precise when giving feedback. Say what to change and why it matters musically.
Common Terms and Acronyms Explained
- BPM is beats per minute and it measures tempo. A higher BPM is faster energy.
- DI stands for direct input. It is a clean signal from a bass or guitar before amp processing. It helps when reamping later.
- EQ equals equalization and it means shaping frequency content so instruments do not fight each other.
- DAW stands for digital audio workstation. It is the software you record and mix in. Examples include Pro Tools Ableton FL Studio and Reaper.
- MIDI is a control signal for virtual instruments. You can use it to program drums or synth parts that complement guitars.
Action Plan You Can Use Today
- Write one sentence that states the feeling and turn it into a short title.
- Pick a tempo and make a two bar riff loop. Record three riff ideas in thirty minutes.
- Choose the best riff and decide on a structure template. Map the song on paper with time targets.
- Write a chorus line that is easy to shout. Keep it under ten words when possible.
- Record a quick demo with scratch drums and vocals. Play it for two friends and ask which moment hit the hardest.
- Finish by tracking a proper guitar tone and an honest vocal take. Keep the mix lean and powerful.
Metal Songwriting FAQ
What tempo should a metal song use
There is no correct tempo. Choose a tempo that serves the emotion. For high energy use one sixty BPM or above. For doom and heavy atmosphere use fifty to seventy five BPM. The important part is how drums and riffs interact. Pick a tempo that allows the riff to breathe and the vocals to land with impact.
How do I write a memorable metal riff
Start simple. Use strong rhythmic identity and repeat a short motif with slight variation. Use rests and palm muting to make accents hit harder. Consider using wide intervals and modal notes that are not expected to create surprise. Practice riff construction by making many ideas and choosing the one that makes you move without thinking.
Can I mix clean singing and harsh vocals in one song
Yes. Many modern metal songs use contrast between clean melody in choruses and harsh vocals in verses. Use this to create dynamic range. Make sure the melody is strong enough to stand alone and that harsh lines have clear diction. Doubling clean vocals or adding slight grit helps them cut through distorted guitars.
What scales should I learn for metal
Start with minor pentatonic and natural minor. Add harmonic minor for exotic tension. Learn phrygian for a darker modal color. Practice these scales at different positions so you can write riffs and solos that sound natural on the fretboard.
How do I avoid my mix sounding muddy
High pass guitars to remove unnecessary low end. Carve space for bass and kick with EQ. Use panning to separate rhythm guitars left and right with a central bass and lead. Control low mids that cause build up by cutting gently around two to four hundred hertz. Use reference tracks to compare clarity.
Should I quantize drums and tight edit guitars
Tight editing can help heavy music land but do not remove feel. Quantize only when it improves groove. Over quantizing can make a song mechanical. Keep some human timing and slight tempo fluctuations for emotion unless the song requires machine like precision.
How do I make a breakdown that works live
A breakdown needs contrast and a hook. Reduce elements first then introduce a strong low riff with half time drums. Let the crowd hear the groove and then add layers. Keep the rhythm simple enough for fans to clap or chant along. A memorable vocal call works well over a breakdown.
How important is tuning for metal
Tuning defines the low end. Drop tunings give more heft but require tighter playing and better string tension management. Use heavier gauge strings if you tune low to maintain string tension and clarity. Intonation and setup work are crucial to prevent flabbiness.