Songwriting Advice
How to Write Lyrics About Speech
You want your song to sound like a conversation, not a clipboard of quotes. You want the lines to carry the weight of how someone says something, not just what they say. You want the listener to feel the throat clearing, the half laugh, the tiny lie, and the way a word lands like a dropped glass. This guide teaches you how to write lyrics about speech so that your songs sound lived in, messy, and true.
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Quick Links to Useful Sections
- What We Mean by Lyrics About Speech
- Why Write Songs About Speech
- Core Concepts and Glossary
- Step 1: Capture Real Speech First
- How to Transcribe Speech for Lyrics
- Notating Breath, Hesitation, and Pause
- Representing Stutter, Slur, and Laughs
- Dialogue in Lyrics: How to Write it Without Being Corny
- Rules for dialogue
- Prosody: Aligning Stress With Music
- How to check prosody
- Scansion and Syllable Mapping for Speechy Lines
- Rhyme With Speech in Mind
- Ethics and Legal Notes When Quoting Real Speech
- Performance Tips for Spoken Lines
- Production Tricks That Make Spoken Words Pop
- Editing Lyrics About Speech: The Crime Scene Pass
- Exercises to Write Better Speech Lyrics
- Exercise 1. The One Sentence Voicemail
- Exercise 2. The Fillers Pass
- Exercise 3. The Camera Microphone
- Before and After Lines You Can Steal
- Common Mistakes Writers Make and How to Fix Them
- How to Use Speech Lyrics in Different Genres
- Checklist to Finish a Song That Uses Speech
- Frequently Asked Questions
- Action Plan You Can Use Today
Everything here is written for songwriters who want tools, not theory lectures. Expect plenty of practical workflows, exercises you can do in ten minutes, and examples that turn an ordinary line into a moment you remember. We cover transcription, prosody, phrasing, how to notate breath and stutter, how to write dialogue, and how to keep ethics and context in mind when you quote real people. There are also production tips for making spoken parts feel like part of the song and not like filler.
What We Mean by Lyrics About Speech
When we say lyrics about speech we mean using the sound and shape of spoken language as a core part of the song. That can be a full scene that is mostly dialogue. It can be a chorus built from a text message. It can be a verse that mimics a lecture or a voicemail. It can be the way someone laughs in the middle of a sentence or the hiss of a whispered confession. The point is that the way the words arrive is as important as the words themselves. You are writing about how people speak and about what speech does to feelings.
Why Write Songs About Speech
Speech is where people live. A lyric that captures speech pulls a listener into intimacy faster than a lyric that tries to explain emotion. Speech shows personality, power dynamics, vulnerability, and habit in a single line. Songwriters who master this can create characters with three notes or tell a true story with a single voicemail.
Real life scenarios
- A fight in a group chat where one person types their truth and then deletes it. The deleted draft becomes the hook.
- A parent saying good night in a voice that no longer sounds like the same person. One line shows decades.
- A toast at a wedding that derails into something brutally honest. The stumble is the song.
Core Concepts and Glossary
Before we get practical here are the terms we will use and what they mean. If an acronym appears we explain it right away.
- Prosody means the rhythm, stress, and intonation of speech. In songs it is how the natural accents of words match the musical beat.
- Scansion means marking the stressed and unstressed syllables in a line to see how they fall against a rhythm.
- IPA stands for the International Phonetic Alphabet. It is a system that shows how words are pronounced. You do not need to learn it to write lyrics but it helps if you want to capture accents or unusual vowels.
- Slant rhyme or near rhyme means words that almost rhyme. It is useful when you want speech to feel natural and not songbook tidy.
- Delivery means how the vocalist speaks or sings a line. Delivery includes breath, tone, timing, and any ad libs like laughs.
Step 1: Capture Real Speech First
If you want to write believable lyrics about speech you must collect speech. You cannot invent real talk from your head alone and expect it to land. Record. Listen. Transcribe. Repeat. Here is a fast method.
- Record five real conversations in different places. Use your phone. Examples: a coffee order, a bar argument, a text read aloud, a voicemail, a family dinner snippet. Get consent if you are recording others. Consent means asking someone to record them and telling them where it might appear.
- Transcribe the bits that had texture. Do not aim for perfect grammar. Keep filler words, hesitations, and repeats. The messy punctuation is the point.
- Mark the moments that felt like performance. A laugh that takes over a sentence. A breath that became a line break. The word that landed wrong. These are your songwriting bones.
Quick tip
Use a voice memo app and label the clip with where you heard it. Later you will thank yourself for context. Context helps you write a precise detail that transforms a line.
How to Transcribe Speech for Lyrics
Transcription is not the same as quoting. You are choosing what to keep. Use this system to turn raw speech into a lyric ready draft.
- Raw pass. Write every word including ums, likes, and ohs. Do not edit. This is the soup.
- Highlight pass. Circle the nouns, the verbs, and the emotional verbs like I want, I am sorry, I do not care. These are anchors.
- Trim pass. Remove useless repeats. Keep purposeful repeats. For example if someone repeats you for emphasis keep it. If someone repeats because they are thinking delete it.
- Shape pass. Convert the transcript into lines that respect breath and cadence. Insert line breaks where the speaker breathes or where the music will breathe.
Example transcript to lyric
Raw: I was like um I do not even know man I just left my keys in the car again and the light was on and I was like oh my god.
Lyric shaped: I said I do not know I left the keys in the car again the dashboard lit like a small apology oh my god.
Notating Breath, Hesitation, and Pause
Notation matters. Use consistent marks so performers know what to do. Here are options and when to use them.
- Parentheses for breath or aside. Example: I love you (quiet) in that old way.
- Ellipses to show trailing thought. Example: I wanted to say we could... but I did not.
- Brackets for text that is whispered or a separate recorded cut. Example: [voicemail] Hey, it is me.
- Lowercase words on a new line to show a soft under breath. Example: i am fine
Do not over explain. A singer can interpret most simple marks. Too many instructions will make a performance sound lab coached. Let the notation guide not suffocate.
Representing Stutter, Slur, and Laughs
Effects like a stutter or a slur tell character. Use them sparingly so they have impact.
- Stutter. Repeat only a meaningful part of the word. Keep it musical. Example: I can t t talk to you like this. Do not stutter entire lines. It becomes a novelty.
- Slur. Use stretched vowels or pulled consonants. Example: we were gonna say forever but the o is long and the r drops off.
- Laughs. Write the laugh as a word not a notation if the laugh carries tone. Example: Ha ha that is the joke you told me. If the laugh interrupts, place it on its own line.
Real scenario
Imagine a voicemail from an ex who tries to be casual but fails. A single stutter on the word sorry then a laugh will tell you they are not sorry. That is better than writing I know they were not sorry.
Dialogue in Lyrics: How to Write it Without Being Corny
Dialogue is a powerful device. It gives multiple voices and lets you show a scene. The trick is to keep each voice distinct and to forget stage directions that interrupt the flow.
Rules for dialogue
- Give each speaker a sound. One might use short clipped lines. One might use long wandering sentences. Keep those textures consistent.
- Avoid large chunks of exposition inside a spoken line. Speech in songs should feel alive. Break long thoughts into two lines so the melody can carry them.
- Use contrast. If one voice is blunt, let the other be ornamental. That dynamic makes each line readable and singable.
Example
She: I am staying quiet.
He: You do not have to swallow it down.
That exchange shows who they are faster than a paragraph of explanation.
Prosody: Aligning Stress With Music
Prosody is the invisible referee between speech and melody. When a natural stressed syllable lands on a weak musical beat you will feel a misfit. Fixing prosody makes lyrics sound inevitable.
How to check prosody
- Speak the line at normal speed. Mark where you naturally put force with an asterisk on the word you stress.
- Tap the beat of the music. Write numbers 1 2 3 4 under the phrase.
- Match the stressed words with strong beats. If they do not match move the words or move the beats with syncopation. A small change can fix the feeling immediately.
Example
Line: I loved you more than I should have
Spoken stress: I loved you more than I should have
If the music places the word loved on a weak beat the line will sound wrong. Either move loved to a strong beat or revise the phrasing to shift stress.
Scansion and Syllable Mapping for Speechy Lines
Scansion means counting syllables and noting stresses. For lyrics about speech it is a map that keeps natural talk from becoming robot recitation. Here is a quick scan method.
- Write the lyric on a single line.
- Under each syllable mark S for stressed and u for unstressed.
- Group stresses into musical feet. Decide where musical downbeats will be.
- Adjust either the lyric or the melody until the pattern feels plausible when sung and spoken.
Do not over constrain yourself. Speech can sit against a complex rhythm. Sometimes a stressed syllable on an off beat creates tension you want. The goal is deliberate choice not accident.
Rhyme With Speech in Mind
People rarely speak in perfect rhyme. Use rhyme as a texture, not as a rule. Slant rhymes and internal rhymes will preserve the feel of natural talk while still giving musical payoff.
- Internal rhyme puts a small rhyme inside a single line. Example: I drove through rain and kept the lane.
- End slant rhyme keeps the ear happy without forcing speech to twist. Example: I said stay you said okay.
- Echo rhyme repeats a syllable or a vowel sound across lines for a speechy refrain. Example: I said hi and your hi hung like a hang up.
Real life use
Text message language often contains slant rhyme because people type how they speak. Use that to create a chorus that sounds like a group chat read back to you. It will feel modern and immediate.
Ethics and Legal Notes When Quoting Real Speech
Using real speech in a lyric has power and responsibility. If you quote someone outside your circle get informed consent or alter identifying details. Here is a brief checklist.
- Do not publish a private recording without permission.
- If the spoken words are defamatory or reveal private facts avoid direct quotes.
- When writing about marginalized speech patterns be respectful. Capture the human truth not the stereotype.
- Consider anonymizing by changing the name or location. The emotional truth can stay while the legal risk falls away.
Short explanation of consent
Consent means the person you recorded knows how the recording will be used and agrees to that use. Written consent is ideal. A simple text that says yes counts as consent in many practical situations but written and signed is better if a recording could be monetized.
Performance Tips for Spoken Lines
Delivery sells speechy lyrics. A badly delivered spoken word moment will sound like a podcast clip shoehorned into a song. Here is how to make it feel integrated.
- Record multiple passes. Try one conversational pass and one sung pass. Choose the one that gives the emotional truth first.
- Use breaths as punctuation. Short breaths can become rhythmic devices.
- Play with pitch. A spoken line does not have to be monotone. Slight pitch movement keeps it musical.
- Consider doubling the spoken line with a sung harmony quietly under it. The contrast creates warmth.
Example approach
Record the spoken line clean. Then add a soft sung synth pad that follows the contour under the speech. The speech sits in foreground and the pad gives context. The result is intimate and cinematic.
Production Tricks That Make Spoken Words Pop
Production can turn a clipboard quote into a character. Use these ideas to make spoken parts feel like a natural member of the arrangement.
- Filter and breath Use a high pass filter to remove muddy low end from a spoken voice. Add a small de esser when s sounds are harsh. Add a tiny reverb to place it in the same space as the rest of the track.
- Sidechain Duck the music slightly under the spoken line so the text reads clearly. Sidechain means routing audio so one signal lowers another automatically. That keeps clarity without cutting energy.
- Vocal chopping Slice the spoken line and place fragments rhythmically behind a chorus as texture. The chopped words then become musical punctuation.
- Tape or lo fi For old voicemail feel add a bit of saturation and a noise bed. Keep it tasteful. Too much vintage will become a parody.
Editing Lyrics About Speech: The Crime Scene Pass
Use a measured edit to keep the truth. The crime scene pass finds the line that carries a scene and removes anything that explains it away.
- Underline every abstract word that tells the emotion rather than shows it. Replace with a physical detail.
- Check every adverb. If an adverb restates the voice choose a specific action instead.
- Confirm each quoted phrase has a purpose. If a quote does not move tension or reveal character cut it.
- Keep one specific image per verse that anchors the scene.
Before and after
Before: He sounded sad and he said he missed me and I felt bad.
After: He left a voicemail humming the oven clock I could hear the shirt he wore when he left.
Exercises to Write Better Speech Lyrics
Exercise 1. The One Sentence Voicemail
Record a one minute voicemail from a fictional person. No music. Speak in character. Transcribe. Shape the strongest sentence into your chorus. Ten minutes.
Exercise 2. The Fillers Pass
Write a verse that includes regular filler words like um, like, you know. Then write the same verse again removing all fillers. Compare. Keep the fillers that tell character and remove the rest. Fifteen minutes.
Exercise 3. The Camera Microphone
Imagine a camera and a microphone placed in a living room. Describe what the mic picks up first. Turn that description into a five line verse where each line is a recorded layer. Record a spoken demo and listen. Twenty minutes.
Before and After Lines You Can Steal
Theme: A breakup voicemail that tries to be casual but is a trap.
Before: I am fine. I think it is best if we do not talk anymore.
After: [voicemail] Hey sorry wrong number I mean not sorry I mean I will leave the keys on the table.
Theme: A toast that goes off rails and reveals a secret.
Before: You are my best friend. Thanks for everything.
After: I toast to you I forget the speech halfway through and say the thing I promised not to say loud enough for the room to taste it.
Theme: A text message read aloud that becomes the chorus.
Before: You said you would come over. Now you are not here.
After: Text bubble lit you said come now you ghosted the door.
Common Mistakes Writers Make and How to Fix Them
- Too much completeness. Writers often explain feelings not show them. Fix it by cutting one sentence that explains emotion and replace with a small physical detail.
- Overusing filler words. If your lines are clogged with ums and likes they will sound fake. Keep only the fillers that reveal character.
- Forcing rhyme. Do not contort speech to rhyme. Use internal rhyme or slant rhyme instead. The listener wants honesty more than perfect couplets.
- Not marking breath. A singer who cannot find breaths will deliver a spoken line that trips. Notate breaths and practice pacing.
- Misaligned prosody. Stress that lands on a weak beat feels wrong. Scan and move stresses or change melody so the line reads like speech and sits in the music.
How to Use Speech Lyrics in Different Genres
Speech works everywhere. The way you treat it changes with genre.
- Indie uses dry deadpan spoken word and space. Let the silence breathe and keep the backing minimal so the words land.
- Pop turns a spoken hook into a chant. Use a clear ring phrase and repeat it like a chorus tagline.
- Hip hop integrates speech with rhythm. Spoken bridges and voicemail samples can become rhythmic material. Respect flow and cadence.
- Folk keeps it honest. Let the storytelling accent remain close to natural speech with just enough melody to lift important words.
Checklist to Finish a Song That Uses Speech
- Is every quoted phrase necessary? Remove the ones that do not reveal character.
- Do stressed syllables land on musical strong beats most of the time? Adjust prosody if needed.
- Is the permission or consent in place for any real recording used? Verify. Change details if consent is not obtainable.
- Does the delivery have a clear pitch contour even when spoken? Record different contours and pick the one that reads best with the track.
- Have you used production tools to make spoken parts fit the mix? Sidechain, filter, or add reverb as needed.
Frequently Asked Questions
How do I keep dialogue in a song from sounding like a script reading
Keep lines short and rhythmic. Use specific actions. Let the music give emotional context. Actors read like scripts. Singers and speakers in songs often compress and choose images that act as shorthand. Give each voice a unique cadence so the listener can feel character without stage direction.
Can I quote a real voicemail in my song
Yes if you have permission. If you do not have permission anonymize the voice and change identifying details. Written consent is safest. If the voicemail contains sensitive personal data avoid using it. Consent protects you legally and ethically.
Should I write fillers like um and like in lyrics
Sometimes. Use them when they reveal personality or rhythm. Do not use them to layer laziness into writing. If a filler makes a line feel more human keep it. If it only pads the line cut it.
How can I show an accent or dialect without being offensive
Study and listen rather than imitate. If you are writing a character from another community consult people from that community. Use small authentic details rather than broad caricature. Respect and accuracy beat imitation every time.
What is the best way to write a chorus from a text message or chat log
Take the most emotionally dense phrase and repeat it with a small change on the last repeat. Keep the language compact. A text chorus can be a title phrase and a repeating ring. Back it with music that gives it motor energy so the text reads like a chant.
How do I write a stutter without making it a gimmick
Use stutter sparingly and to reveal vulnerability not comedy. Repeat a single important syllable rather than entire words. Let the rhythm serve the emotion. If the stutter is authentic to a person in the song treat it with dignity and care.
Action Plan You Can Use Today
- Record one real spoken moment today. It can be a message, a barista, or a friend. Label the file and transcribe it raw.
- Do a highlight pass and keep three concrete images from the transcript. Those three images will become your verse skeleton.
- Write a chorus that uses one quoted phrase from the transcript. Repeat the phrase and change one word on the last repeat for a twist.
- Scan the chorus for prosody. Speak it, mark stresses, and align those stresses with beats in a simple drum loop.
- Record a spoken demo and a sung demo. Compare and choose the performance that reads truer to the moment.
- Run the crime scene pass. Remove anything that explains feelings instead of showing them.
- Play the demo for someone who did not hear the original tape and ask what line they remember. Keep the memory lines. Cut the rest.