How to Write Lyrics About Specific Emotions

How to Write Lyrics About Song

How to Write Lyrics About Song

You want to write a song that sings about songs. You want lines that wink at the listener without sounding smug. You want a chorus that makes people hum and a verse that feels like backstage gossip. Writing lyrics about songs is a tall order because you are asking an audience to hear music about music. That double view can be brilliant when it is simple and sly and terrible when it becomes a lecture.

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This guide is for artists who want to write meta lyrics that land. You will learn why songs about songs work, the common traps to avoid, practical templates, and exercises that get you writing fast. Everything is written for millennial and Gen Z artists who want sharp lines, laugh out loud moments, and emotional truth that does not feel like homework. Expect jokes, real world examples, and no nonsense editing tricks.

Why Write Lyrics About Songs

Songs about songs are a mirror. They let you talk about the act of loving, losing, hearing, and remembering through the thing that triggered it. They can be playful, introspective, nostalgic, or biting. When a lyric mentions a record, a radio, a playlist, or a hook it creates layers of connection. The listener recognizes an object they already know and feels smarter for getting the joke or the nod.

Real life scenario

  • You are on the subway and a familiar chorus plays. That chorus becomes the background for a breakup thought. Writing about that chorus gives you a fast ticket to specificity.
  • You see someone you love and the exact song from your first date is playing in a bar. Mentioning the song in your lyric will bring back sensory data that no generic line can match.
  • You write an inside joke about a terrible demo you recorded at 2 a.m. The listener who has recorded at 2 a.m. will laugh because they have been there. Shared experience breeds loyalty.

Types of Lyrics About Songs

There are several useful ways to write about songs. Each has advantages and traps. Pick one for a song and then commit to it fully.

Event lyric

These lines describe a moment where a song shows up. The lyric uses the song as a prop. Example image: the jukebox in a greasy spoon plays the exact chorus and you measure your life with that chorus. This approach grounds the lyric in sensory detail and makes the song feel like a scene.

Meta lyric

These lines are self aware about songwriting itself. They might sing about writing a chorus, choosing a rhyme, or dying on stage. Meta lyrics can sound clever but avoid bragging by staying humble or self mocking. If the lyric sounds like a tutorial, you are in danger.

Reference lyric

These lines explicitly name other songs, artists, or lyrics. You must be careful with direct quotes because of copyright. A tiny nod or paraphrase is usually safer and can be more poetic. Explain the reference so listeners who do not catch it still feel the emotion.

Earworm lyric

These lines mimic elements of the very song you are singing about. They can echo a melodic fragment or repeat a hook like a mosquito that will not leave the room. Use this when you want the audience to literally hum along and feel the recursion.

Which Type Fits Your Song

Quick checklist to decide

  • Do you want nostalgia as the main feeling? Choose event lyric.
  • Do you want to make the listener laugh about the craft? Choose meta lyric.
  • Do you want to build a network of allusions to other songs? Choose reference lyric but be careful with quotes.
  • Do you want the audience to sing a recurring line with you? Choose earworm lyric.

Core Tools You Will Use

Before we get into templates and lines, learn the simple terms you will use often.

  • Hook. This is the musical or lyrical idea that lodges in the ear. A hook can be words, melody, or a rhythmic figure. Hooks make songs sticky.
  • Prosody. This means the fit between words and music. Make sure the natural stress of spoken words lands on strong beats in the music.
  • Topline. This is the vocal melody and lyric together. If someone says topline they mean the sung part you can hum. It is the vocal identity.
  • Intertextuality. This is the practice of referencing other texts, in our case other songs. It creates resonance. You explain the referenced item so non experts can follow.
  • Earworm. A stuck song fragment. In lyric craft earworm can be literal or metaphorical. You might call someone an earworm if they repeat in your head like a chorus.

Five Principles That Make Meta Lyrics Work

Apply these to every line you keep.

  • Be concrete. Replace the phrase my heart with something your listeners can picture like the rusted amp in my old room.
  • Be economical. Meta writing tempts you to over explain. If a line does not earn its place, cut it.
  • Make the meta serve an emotion. Are you using a song reference to hide, to reveal, or to brag? Let the underlying emotion own the line.
  • Use a single frame. Keep the listener looking through one camera at a time. If you switch to an album review mid verse the listener will blink.
  • Keep the joke humble. Self mockery connects. Bragging repels. Let the lyric laugh with itself more than at others.

How to Start Writing a Song About a Song

Here is a short process that works whether you write with guitar, piano, or a laptop in a coffee shop.

  1. Pick your trigger. What song or sound are you writing about. It can be a famous single, a voicemail of a demo, or a ringtone that never dies.
  2. Write one concrete image. Not a line about feeling, but an object or moment. Example image: the mixtape in my glove compartment with a coffee stain on Track six.
  3. State the emotional bone. One sentence that says why this song matters to you. Keep it simple. Example: That mixtape is my evidence that we were real for six perfect minutes.
  4. Choose the angle. Are you nostalgic, angry, playful, or embarrassed? Angle decides your voice and choice of words.
  5. Draft a chorus that repeats a simple phrase. The chorus is the place to say the song title or the name of the tracked song you are referencing. Repeat only if it strengthens memory.
  6. Edit with prosody in mind. Speak the lines out loud. Mark the stressed syllables and match them to strong beats.

Chorus Templates and Examples

The chorus should feel obvious. Here are templates you can steal and adapt.

Template 1 Title Call

Say the song title or a paraphrase and then state a consequence. Keep the title on a long vowel if possible.

Example

I played our song on repeat until my room knew the lines I could not say

Template 2 The Jukebox Moment

Describe a concrete moment where a song appears and then tie the feeling to it.

Example

The jukebox spat our chorus in neon and everything I knew about leaving changed

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Template 3 The Earworm Confession

Admit that the song is a problem. Use humor or dread.

Example

It stuck like gum on my brain I wake up singing you and blame the radio

Template 4 The Song as Proof

Use the song as testimony of a life event. This works well for nostalgia songs.

Example

That vinyl has fingerprints that match our laughing hands it knows we were here

Verse Craft: Make the Scene Specific

Verses are where you show not tell. If the chorus names the motif the verse should give camera shots.

  • Use objects with attitude. A scratched CD means different things than a new streaming queue.
  • Add tiny time crumbs. The third chorus on a Tuesday tells the brain something about mood and routine.
  • Include sensory verbs. Hear, taste, scratch, stick. These verbs pull an abstract song memory into real life.

Before and after example

Before: We played that song a lot and I remember it.

After: The CD chewed at the same line and we timed our breaths like the pause before the chorus

Pre Chorus and Bridge as Setup and Tilt

Use the pre chorus to lean toward the chorus idea without stating it. Use the bridge to flip the perspective in a fresh way.

Pre chorus idea

  • Make it build by using shorter words and a rhythmic push. Example: ten seconds to the chorus makes your heartbeat sync up with the drum.

Bridge idea

  • Ask a question or reveal a private detail that reframes the whole song. Example: I kept the demo because I could not stop thinking the version where I said yes.

Directly quoting lyrics from another song can trigger copyright issues. Paraphrase instead. Mention the title and the feeling. Describe the beat or a melodic gesture without writing its melody into your lyric. If you want to quote a line you must clear it with the publisher which can be costly. For most songs a clever paraphrase is enough and it allows you to keep your creative money for production and videos.

Practical rule

  • Do not quote more than a short phrase of an existing lyric unless you can clear it.
  • Name the song or artist when the reference matters to the meaning.
  • Offer the listener an explanation if the reference is obscure. A single line can help. Example: long song title in parentheses with a small descriptor.

Rhyme and Rhythm Tricks for Meta Lines

Rhyme can feel smart or school essay. Use internal rhyme and family rhyme. Family rhyme uses near sounds rather than perfect matches. These keep lyrics modern.

  • Use internal rhyme to keep flow. Example: I press play and the past plays back
  • Family rhyme example: time rhyme with fine and rhyme with behind. Not perfect but tasty.
  • Alliteration can create a hook like a mini beat. Example: cassette in the corner keeps calling me.

Rhythmic trick

  • Repeat a short syllable cluster to make a chant. Example: la la la works because it mirrors how people hum when words fail.

Prosody Checklist

Every line you keep must pass this test.

  1. Read the line out loud at normal speech speed.
  2. Mark the stressed syllables. They must match the strong beats in your melody.
  3. If a long vowel falls on a weak beat the line will feel wrong. Rewrite it so the vowel lands proudly.
  4. Ensure the sentence works when spoken to a friend. If it sounds like an essay, rewrite it like a text.

Studio Friendly Tips for Songs About Songs

These are production aware choices a writer can use to elevate meta lyrics in the final mix.

  • Use a recorded artifact as a sonic texture. A scratched vinyl pop at the start tells the listener they are in a memory.
  • Drop to an intimate vocal for a line that reveals. Bring the drum back when you want perspective to expand.
  • Layer a subdued sample of the referenced song if you have clearance. Even a fragment can make the audience feel the reference viscerally.

Funny and Outrageous Lines You Can Use as Inspiration

These are not finished lyrics. Use them as seeds or to make your friends snort into their coffee.

  • I keep your demo in my fridge next to the expired milk
  • The chorus is louder than your crush I sing it like a dare
  • We kissed to a ringtone and then argued about the plan
  • The DJ knows my skeleton song and plays it like a threat

Exercises to Write Lyrics About Songs

Exercise 1 The Trigger List

Set a timer for ten minutes. Write a list of songs that feel like weather to you. For each song write one concrete detail. For example: song A has a cigarette smoke ribbon. Song B has a cheap glitter sticker. Use one detail as a verse seed.

Exercise 2 The Demo Confession

Record a terrible demo on your phone. Sit down and write the first ten lines that come after listening once. Keep the mess. After ten minutes pick three lines and line edit them into one verse that keeps the rawness but trades one lousy image for one strong concrete object.

Exercise 3 The Title Swap

Write the title of a famous song you love. Now change one word to make it personal. Example: instead of "Yellow" try "My Yellow Jacket." Write a chorus around the swapped title that uses the original song only as a mood rather than as a quote.

Exercise 4 The Radio Scene

Imagine you are in a car. The song on the radio is the bridge between two characters. Write a four line verse from each perspective. Make the song the shared language that each uses to hide or expose the truth.

Editing Pass That Saves Songs

When you finish a draft run this pass. It is short and brutal but fair.

  1. Delete lines that explain the emotion rather than show it.
  2. Replace any abstract phrase with one object or action.
  3. Cut the first line if it tells the premise. Start in the middle of the scene instead.
  4. Make the chorus shorter if the listener remembers it after one listen. If not, chop again.
  5. Record a short demo within forty eight hours of finishing the lyric. Hearing your words sung will show problems you cannot see on the page.

Examples From Famous Songs That Talk About Songs

We will use paraphrase to analyze how others do it. No long quotes.

  • Song that mentions a record player to summon memory. It uses an object to hold an entire relationship.
  • Song that admits to singing along to a radio while pretending to be okay. The admission works because the act is private and human.
  • Song that uses a chorus from another track as a punchline. It avoids quoting the lyrics directly and instead describes the chorus and the moment.

Common Mistakes and How to Fix Them

  • Too clever by half. If your lyrics sound like a puzzle the listener will skip. Fix by grounding with a sensory image.
  • Meta without emotion. Meta content must serve a feeling. If it does not, remove it.
  • Over referencing. Listing other songs reads like name dropping. Choose one or two references and build around them.
  • Forgetting prosody. If a line is lyrical on the page but awkward to sing, rewrite the rhythm. Singability matters more than cleverness.

How to Perform These Songs Live

Playing a song about a song is a performance puzzle. You want the audience to feel like they are in on the joke.

  • Tell a quick one line intro. A tiny context helps. Example: this next one is about the worst mixtape I ever loved.
  • Use a small stage trick like an old tape deck prop that you do not have to play. The visual sells the lyric.
  • Invite the crowd to sing a simple repeated phrase. A communal earworm seals the moment.

When to Use a Literal Approach and When to Be Symbolic

If you want to be widely relatable choose symbolic language. If you want to be a cult favorite and your story is weird and specific go literal. Both can succeed. The difference is delivery. If you are literal own the weirdness with a smile. If you are symbolic give the audience enough detail to attach a memory to the song.

Publishing and Credits Tips

If you reference a song and the reference becomes a central hook consider credits. If you paraphrase and borrow melodic material you may still need to discuss publishing with a music lawyer. When in doubt talk to a rights expert. For most casual references naming a track or an artist in your lyric will not require permission. Directly sampling or using a recognizably unique melody does.

Action Plan You Can Use Today

  1. Pick one real song that means something to you right now. Listen to it twice and write the first ten images that come to mind.
  2. Choose one image and write a one sentence emotional statement that explains why the song matters to you.
  3. Write a chorus using one of the chorus templates above. Keep it to one or two lines and repeat only if it improves memory.
  4. Draft two verses that show the scene with objects and time crumbs. Use the demo confession exercise to keep rawness.
  5. Record a quick demo with phone vocals. Listen and adjust prosody. If a line does not sing, rewrite it immediately.

FAQ

Can I write a song about a song without referencing a specific track

Yes. You can write about the idea of a song as an object. This allows broader relatability. Describe the behavior around songs like rewinding, looping, or hiding a demo. The emotional core can be the same while the detail is universal.

Is it okay to sing about another artist in my lyrics

Yes but consider tone. If it is praise it is safe. If it is mocking be careful. Legal issues are unlikely unless you quote lyrics or use protected melody. Still keep in mind that public commentary can provoke reactions from fans. Make the mention matter to the story.

How do I reference a melody without copying it

Describe the melody or the feeling and replicate the rhythmic idea rather than the pitch content. Use words that mimic the effect like stutter or lift. If you must echo the melodic contour change a few notes so the line becomes an homage rather than a copy.

Can meta lyrics be funny and serious at the same time

Yes. The trick is to let humor soften the edge of an honest feeling. Many meta songs pair a ridiculous image with a hard truth. The contrast makes both elements stronger. Deliver with a voice that can move from mocking to tender in a single breath.

How do I make a chorus about a song feel emotional rather than clever

Melt the cleverness into a small sacrifice or reveal. Instead of saying I played the chorus like a joke explain what it cost you. Example: I played the chorus until my rent was late is funny but also says something about priorities and longing.


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About Toni Mercia

Toni Mercia is a Grammy award-winning songwriter and the founder of Lyric Assistant. With over 15 years of experience in the music industry, Toni has written hit songs for some of the biggest names in music. She has a passion for helping aspiring songwriters unlock their creativity and take their craft to the next level. Through Lyric Assistant, Toni has created a tool that empowers songwriters to make great lyrics and turn their musical dreams into reality.