How to Write Lyrics

How to Write Hauntology Lyrics

How to Write Hauntology Lyrics

You want a lyric that feels like a ghost texting you from another decade. You want the song to carry the weight of a lost future while sounding like it came from a scratched cassette found in a thrift store. Hauntology is the vibe where memory becomes the lead instrument. It is spooky without an actual ghost and nostalgic without a greeting card. This guide will teach you how to write hauntology lyrics that feel uncanny and true. You will get practical writing steps, relatable examples, and exercises that help you conjure spectral songs without sounding pretentious.

Everything here is written for musicians who want songs that hold an atmosphere and a story. We will cover what hauntology means, key lyrical themes, language tricks, structure tips, melody and prosody advice, production aware writing, legal notes about sampling, and real life exercises you can finish in an hour. Expect weirdness, honesty, and a little bit of glorious gloom.

What Is Hauntology

Hauntology is a theory term that originally came from philosopher Jacques Derrida. He used it to describe how the past keeps coming back to influence the present. In music and culture critics like Simon Reynolds and Mark Fisher used the word to describe art that feels haunted by lost possibilities. Artists who work in hauntology write like they are listening to the future that never arrived.

In everyday terms hauntology is nostalgia with a weird edge. It is not just remembering. It is remembering what could have been and feeling the absence of that thing like a chill. Think old public service announcements, late night TV idents, analog tape artifacts, and children singing from the back of an abandoned shopping mall. Hauntology songs are often built from fragments of memory and lo fi textures. They invite the listener to fill in gaps like a ghost story told in static.

Quick glossary for readers who like to skim

  • Hauntology A vibe where past and present overlap and missing futures are felt like ghosts.
  • Lo fi Short for low fidelity. A production style that embraces tape noise and imperfections like a visible seam in time.
  • Sample A short piece of recorded sound reused in a new song. This can be a vocal clip a TV jingle or a radio announcer.
  • DAW Digital audio workstation. This is software where you record and arrange music. Examples are Ableton FL Studio and Logic Pro.

Hauntology Themes To Steal

Great hauntology lyrics live in a small list of related moods. Pick one to anchor the song and let related images orbit it. Here are reliable themes that read as haunted without needing special effects.

Lost future

Write like you can feel the plans that never happened. Example image: an incomplete model of a city made from cardboard. It sits under dust. You remember drawing the skyline and then never finishing the project.

Public memory

Use detritus of mass culture. Bingo music, school announcements, safety films, signage, corporate slogans. These objects carry an uncanny authority. A sardonic line about a faded government logo can hit harder than an entire stanza about heartbreak.

Domestic uncanny

Small ordinary places feel wrong. The kitchen tile remembers someone who left. The thermostat blinks exactly like a distant memory. Domestic details make the eerie feel intimate. The listener can smell the room.

Childhood myths

Stories you half believed at eight stick like glue. The thing under the bed might be a train schedule or a promise. Use rules from childhood to describe present emptiness.

Temporal slippage

Near past and near future merge. A line set in 1987 can feel like it is happening next Tuesday. Let dates fold into each other. Make the listener unsure whether they are reading a postcard or an obituary.

How Hauntology Lyrics Are Different From Regular Lyrics

Hauntology lyrics prioritize atmosphere and implication over explicit narrative. That does not mean you write nonsense. It means you write with gaps. The listener will fill those gaps with memory. Use fragments of concrete images and let the rest be felt.

  • Focus on objects that age visibly. Old radio dials broken toys ticket stubs faded labels.
  • Prefer indirect emotion. Do not tell the listener you miss someone. Show a radio playing their song through a thin wall.
  • Repeat motifs like a chorus but make small variations. Repetition becomes incantation.

Start With One Haunted Image

If you try to write a whole story you will float into generic gloom. Start instead with one strong image and treat the lyric as its orbit. Pick a thing that tells time when you touch it. Examples: a fluorescent clock that is always wrong a VHS tape labeled never again a kettle that clicks at midnight. Now write a scene around it.

Real life prompt

Walk into your kitchen and pick one object. Describe how it would sound if memory lived inside it. Give it a line of dialogue. Ten minutes. You will have a verse.

Learn How to Write Hauntology Songs
Craft Hauntology that really feels tight and release ready, using hook symmetry and chorus lift, groove and tempo sweet spots, and focused section flow.
You will learn

  • Groove and tempo sweet spots
  • Hook symmetry and chorus lift
  • Lyric themes and imagery that fit
  • Vocal phrasing with breath control
  • Arrangements that spotlight the core sound
  • Mix choices that stay clear and loud

Who it is for

  • Artists making modern, honest records

What you get

  • Groove and phrasing maps
  • Hook templates
  • Scene prompts
  • Mix and release checks

Language Tools For Hauntology That Actually Work

Language in hauntology tends to be simple but layered. You want lines that are plain on the surface and strange when you think about them. Use these devices.

Second person memory

Addressing you makes the lyric intimate and accusatory. A line like you left the kettle on reads like a domestic crime and a ritual. Second person is a direct line into the listener body. Use it with restraint.

List with escalation

Three objects that get stranger each time. Start mundane and end uncanny. Example: the bus ticket the receipt from a phone call a child sized raincoat folded into a radio.

Temporal crumbs

Add small timestamps to anchor illusions. Not a whole date. Try Tuesday 3 a m or the summer you learned how to lie. Those crumbs make the illusion feel specific.

Words like maybe could might seem weak but in hauntology they open doors. They make memory provisional. Use them to imply uncertainty rather than report fact.

Echo lines

Repeat a single short phrase in different contexts across the song. Each repeat shifts the meaning like an echo down a hallway. The phrase acts like a ghost.

Prosody And Singability For Hauntology

Prosody means how the words sit on the music. In hauntology you want speech like singing rather than dramatic belting. The voice should feel like a memory recorded on old tape. That suggests constrained range and spoken cadence with small melodic leaps.

  • Use short stressed syllables on strong beats. If you read the line aloud and the natural stress lands on a weak beat change the wording.
  • Let vowels breathe on sustained notes. Open vowels like ah oh and ay are friendly when you want to hang a phrase on a long note.
  • Avoid too many perfect rhymes. Near rhymes and internal rhymes keep the lyric uncanny and less nursery.

Structure Options For Haunted Songs

Hauntology works with many forms. The secret is to keep space for repetition and slight changes that create unease.

Fragment chorus model

Make the chorus a repeated fragment that changes meaning each time. For example repeat a line like the signal is gone then add a new qualifying image each chorus. The repeat anchors the song like a pulse and the changes create a story arc.

Loop verse model

Write several short verses that sit on the same music and differ only by imagery. The repetition of form puts attention on subtle lyric changes.

Learn How to Write Hauntology Songs
Craft Hauntology that really feels tight and release ready, using hook symmetry and chorus lift, groove and tempo sweet spots, and focused section flow.
You will learn

  • Groove and tempo sweet spots
  • Hook symmetry and chorus lift
  • Lyric themes and imagery that fit
  • Vocal phrasing with breath control
  • Arrangements that spotlight the core sound
  • Mix choices that stay clear and loud

Who it is for

  • Artists making modern, honest records

What you get

  • Groove and phrasing maps
  • Hook templates
  • Scene prompts
  • Mix and release checks

Narrative vignette model

Tell a single small scene from different angles. Verse one is the physical scene verse two is the memory behind the scene chorus is the implied missing future. This model is closer to a short film than a pop song.

Write Hauntology Lines That Stick

Here are patterns you can steal and adapt. Use them as micro prompts when you get stuck.

  • The [object] keeps the [time] in its mouth. Example the clock keeps Tuesday in its mouth.
  • I called the number and only your voicemail answered like a museum guide. Replace museum guide with any institutional voice for creep factor.
  • We used to say the name as if it was a streetlamp. This turns a name into a public object.
  • Your photograph still owes me the future. This turns an object into a creditor and creates a strange accountability.

Before And After Examples

Theme: The apartment remembers a housemate who left

Before: I miss you and the place feels empty.

After: Your coffee mug is still warm at midnight. I leave it on the sink and it sighs when I walk away.

Theme: A city with a lost future

Before: The city feels like it gave up on us.

After: The skyline shows a blueprint pinned to a billboard. The cranes are dinner for pigeons now.

Theme: A phone that keeps ringing

Before: I do not answer your calls anymore.

After: The ringtone climbs the radiator every night. I listen to the pipes learn your number.

Imagery Swap Exercise

  1. Write a plain line that expresses an emotion like I am lonely.
  2. List five household objects in ten seconds.
  3. Pair the emotion with an object and write a new line that shows the emotion through action and detail.

Example

Plain line I am lonely.

Objects pencil coat hanger kettle postcard record player.

New line The kettle whistles at dawn like a train that will never stop here.

Production Awareness For Hauntology Writers

Even if you do not produce your own music, knowing how production choices frame lyrics will make you a better writer. Hauntology depends on texture and space. When you write imagine the sound next to the words.

  • Lo fi textures like tape hiss vinyl crackle and slight wow and flutter make lyrics feel old and fragile.
  • Use low low mixing of background samples to suggest presence without clarity. A child's voice that is muffled behind a filter will be more haunting than a clear snippet.
  • Sparse instrumentation gives the words room to breathe. A reverb tail that sounds like a church bathroom can give domestic lines a cathedral scale.
  • Reverse reverb or tucked echoes create the feeling of memory arriving in pieces. Place a short reverse swell before a vocal phrase to make it feel predicted.

Quick tech note for non technical writers

DAW stands for digital audio workstation. It is the program where producers work. If you are sending demos to a producer include notes like heavy tape feel or low fidelity and mention specific artifacts like tape hiss or radio sample. These short descriptors help the producer get your aesthetic fast.

Hauntology often uses found audio. That can create legal problems. If your song uses a recognizable sample from a TV announcement a commercial or a copyrighted song you may need clearance. Clearance means permission from the original rights holder. Permission sometimes costs money. If you cannot clear a sample consider these options.

  • Recreate the sound with your own performance or a hired actor and then process it to sound aged.
  • Use royalty free sample libraries that include old radio loops and public domain clips. Public domain means not protected by copyright but confirm the source date and region.
  • Transform the sample by chopping and recontextualizing so it becomes a new work. This is risky. Legal outcomes depend on many factors.

Real life scenario

You find a public service announcement clip on YouTube from 1979. The voice is perfect. Before you chop it into a chorus sample check whether it is in the public domain. If not contact the archive or the broadcaster. If the cost is too high you can have an actor perform the line and then add tape noise and EQ to make it sound vintage.

Vocal Delivery For Hauntology

Think of the vocal as a memory taking a breath. You want intimacy and fragility not theatrical projection. Here are practical tips.

  • Record dry and close. A close mic gives room for early reflections and breath noise which feel personal.
  • Use a slight vocal double in the chorus that is slightly out of time. That micro timing creates a ghost layer.
  • Add whispered ad libs recorded very softly and place them in the left or right channel to mimic the sound of a room corner speaking.
  • Keep extreme vibrato out unless it is ironically placed. Natural small vibrato and a steady breath create believable memory voice.

Arrangement Maps You Can Steal

Minimal Memory Map

  • Intro with an obtained sample or field recording on low volume
  • Verse with a single instrument and close vocal
  • Chorus that repeats a fragment and introduces a second texture like tape hiss or a pad
  • Verse two adds a percussion element and a small variation on the repeated fragment
  • Final chorus adds a counter vocal and a low synth that shadows the melody
  • Outro returns to the original sample faded into silence

Archivist Map

  • Cold open with a spoken announcement delivered as if from a radio
  • Verse with a sparse guitar or piano and a memory line
  • Pre chorus that narrows the rhythm and adds a recorded room tone
  • Chorus with an echoed phrase and reversed ambient swell
  • Break that isolates the sample and stretches it like a tape loop
  • Return with added strings or synthetic choir to give the final chorus a slight lift

Editing And The Crime Scene Pass For Hauntology Lyrics

Edit differently when you write hauntology. The goal of editing is to create readable gaps not to fill them with more explanation. Try this crime scene pass.

  1. Circle every abstract word like love lonely memory. Replace at least half with a concrete image.
  2. Underline every time you explain rather than show. Cut the explanation and keep the image.
  3. Mark every repeated phrase. Keep at least one repeat but change one word each time.
  4. Check prosody. Speak the line in normal conversation and make sure stressed syllables land on strong beats.

Micro Prompts To Generate Hauntology Verses Fast

  • Object map Write a list of objects in the room and then write one sentence that gives the object a small memory. Five minutes.
  • Sound collage Close your eyes and name five sounds you heard today. Write a four line verse that includes those sounds as metaphors. Ten minutes.
  • Time warp Pick a year between 1960 and 2000. Write a letter as if you had just received a postcard from that year. Use one dated detail. Ten minutes.

Examples You Can Model

Theme: A phone number that keeps ringing in the walls

Verse: The wallpaper remembers the numbers you taught it. I press my ear and the pattern reads you back like a weather forecast.

Chorus: The line is busy and the light under the door hums. We used to be listed like an address. Now the city keeps your voicemail for display.

Theme: A playground that became a parking lot but remembers being loud

Verse: The hopscotch squares still glow under car oil. I count them with my foot and feel eight summers fold into one.

Chorus: We left our names in chalk and a council memo erased them with a mop. The swings say your name into the concrete at noon.

Common Mistakes And How To Fix Them

  • Too much jargon If your song sounds like an academic essay drop the big ideas and add one concrete image. The listener wants sensation not a thesis.
  • Being vague Replace abstractions with objects and small actions. Instead of the word regret write the sound of a shoe on a wooden staircase at three a m.
  • Over explaining If you explain the emotion you will kill the mystery. Allow a line or two to be ambiguous and trust the listener to feel it.
  • Too many samples A single suggestive sample is more powerful than a collage that competes with your lyric. Use restraint.

Finish Your Haunted Song With A Repeatable Workflow

  1. Pick the haunted image and write a one line core promise that the song will deliver. Example The apartment keeps a list of the people we left.
  2. Choose a structure. Map the sections with time targets. Keep the first hook within the first minute.
  3. Draft three short verses that use different sensory angles on the same image. Keep each verse under eight lines.
  4. Write a chorus that is a short repeated fragment and change one word each time it returns.
  5. Record a simple demo with a voice a single instrument and a low sample if you want. Treatment options like tape hiss or light reverb will sell the vibe.
  6. Play it to three people who are not your friends in the project. Ask one question. What image did you remember after walking out?
  7. Make only one change based on feedback. If it improves the image keep it. If it tries to explain the image cut it.

Hauntology Songwriting FAQ

What makes lyrics feel haunted

Haunted lyrics are built from specific objects and small times that imply a missing story. They avoid direct statements of feeling and rely on repetition small changes and production texture. The voice should sound intimate and slightly brittle. The music should leave space and include artifacts that sound like memory. Together these elements create the feeling of a ghost without naming it.

Can any genre do hauntology

Yes. Hauntology is an attitude not a genre. You can write a haunted folk song a haunted electronica track or a haunted punk song. The key is to make the lyric and the production point to memory and absence. The arrangement choices will change by genre but the writing tools remain the same.

How do I avoid sounding pretentious when I reference theory

If you mention Derrida or Mark Fisher keep it short and necessary. Most listeners do not care about the theory. They care about the image. Use references only if they explain a creative choice or if your audience knows the context. Otherwise let the lyric stand alone.

Is sampling required for hauntology

No. Sampling is a common tool but not required. You can create the same feel with instrumentation processing and vocal techniques. If you do use samples respect the legal realities and be ready to recreate anything you cannot clear.

How do I sing hauntology lyrics without sounding autopious

Autopious is not a word. If you meant auterous or overwrought sing like you are remembering something private and slightly embarrassed. Keep dynamics low in the verses and allow small gains in the chorus. Slight vocal doubles and breath sounds will make the performance feel human not heroic.

Learn How to Write Hauntology Songs
Craft Hauntology that really feels tight and release ready, using hook symmetry and chorus lift, groove and tempo sweet spots, and focused section flow.
You will learn

  • Groove and tempo sweet spots
  • Hook symmetry and chorus lift
  • Lyric themes and imagery that fit
  • Vocal phrasing with breath control
  • Arrangements that spotlight the core sound
  • Mix choices that stay clear and loud

Who it is for

  • Artists making modern, honest records

What you get

  • Groove and phrasing maps
  • Hook templates
  • Scene prompts
  • Mix and release checks

Action Plan You Can Use Today

  1. Pick one object in your room and imagine the memory it holds. Write a single line that describes that memory using one sensory detail.
  2. Use the object as a chorus fragment. Repeat it three times with one small change each time.
  3. Draft two verses of four lines each that expand the scene. Use a temporal crumb like last Tuesday or the summer before we moved.
  4. Record a dry voice and add a low volume field recording and a light tape hiss. Listen back and remove any line that explains instead of showing.
  5. Send the demo to two listeners. Ask what image stuck. If they mention your chosen image you are done.


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About Toni Mercia

Toni Mercia is a Grammy award-winning songwriter and the founder of Lyric Assistant. With over 15 years of experience in the music industry, Toni has written hit songs for some of the biggest names in music. She has a passion for helping aspiring songwriters unlock their creativity and take their craft to the next level. Through Lyric Assistant, Toni has created a tool that empowers songwriters to make great lyrics and turn their musical dreams into reality.