How to Write Lyrics

How to Write Dub Lyrics

How to Write Dub Lyrics

You want lyrics that sit under a tidal bass and bounce off echo like a message in a bottle. You want words that feel raw and ritualistic. You want phrasing that gives space for delay repeats to do half the heavy lifting. Dub is more about texture than long explanation. This guide gives you history, technique, and practice drills to write dub lyrics that sound heavy in a club and intimate on a pair of headphones.

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This article is written for artists who want to make their words work inside the space of bass and effect. We explain terms so you are never left guessing. We give real life scenarios that feel like your late night session. We include practical exercises you can do in a bedroom setup or on a festival stage. You will leave with a clear method to write dub lyrics that are memorable, flexible, and sonically clever.

What Is Dub and Why Lyrics Matter

Dub began in Jamaica in the late nineteen sixties as an offshoot of reggae. It started as instrumental mixes with producers taking a multitrack tape and removing vocals then reshaping the track with heavy bass, drums, echo, and reverb. The first dubs were experiments by people like King Tubby, Lee Scratch Perry, and later Scientist and Mad Professor. Those producers treated the mixing console like an instrument. They created space for the listener to feel the rhythm deep in the body.

Lyrics in dub are different from pop or rap lyrics. They are often sparse. They are meant to interact with delay and reverb. They can be political and spiritual. They can be toasts and chants. Think of dub lyrics as ingredients rather than a menu. A short line repeated with echo can become a mantra. A single shouted word can become a hook when echoed through space.

Key Dub Terms Explained

  • Dub A style of music that emphasizes the studio as instrument using effects like echo and reverb. It often strips vocals and rearranges parts to create a new mix.
  • Toasting Vocal style where an MC or DJ speaks rhythmically over a riddim. Toasting is the Jamaican root of modern rap. It is rhythmic speech more than melodic singing.
  • Riddim The instrumental backing track. In reggae and dub, the riddim is the heart of the song. Producers reuse riddims for many vocalists.
  • Sound system A mobile DJ crew and their speakers. Sound system culture shaped dub. It values bass, presence, and crowd reaction.
  • Delay An effect that repeats a sound. In dub delay is used like a second voice. It can be timed to the tempo or set free.
  • Reverb An effect that creates space. In dub reverb can be short and bright or long and cavernous.
  • Echo Often used interchangeably with delay in dub but refers to pronounced repeating tails that bounce in the mix.
  • Dubplate An acetate record used historically by sound systems to play exclusive tracks. A dubplate might carry a special vocal or version for a specific crew.

Before You Write: Choose Your Dub Identity

Dub takes many forms. You could make spiritual dub, militant dub, psychedelic dub, digital dub, or modern bass music dub. Decide on the emotional center first. The voice of your lyrics should match the weight of the bass and the mood of the effects. Here are identities to choose from.

  • Ritual Slow tempo, meditative vocals, repeated phrases that become hypnotic.
  • Political Direct, punchy lines that land like slogans in a crowd.
  • Playful Toasting with swagger and call back chants for the dance floor.
  • Psychedelic Surreal imagery and spaced out delivery with long echoes.
  • Bass heavy club Short vocal stabs timed to drops and subs.

Pick a lane. Dub rewards focus not variety. If you try to be all things at once the mix will confuse the ear. Commit to one identity for a track and place small elements from other lanes only if they serve the pocket.

Principles of Dub Lyric Writing

Dub lyrics obey fewer words and more space. They lean on repetition. They favor rhythm over dense syntax. Keep these principles as rules you break intentionally.

  • Make space Say less so effects have room to answer. Silence is a tool not a mistake.
  • Use rhythm first Treat words like percussion elements. The placement of a syllable can feel like a rim shot.
  • Choose strong vowels Open vowels like ah oh and ay carry longer when held and when processed by delay.
  • Repeat with variation Repeat a line but change one word or the delivery to create forward motion.
  • Leave hooks short One to four words often work best as dub hooks.

Writing Techniques That Work in Dub

One Line Mantras

Write a short line that states the idea. Make it easy to chant. Good example lines fit in a single breathing cycle and survive echo repeats. Think of your mantra like a tattoo that can be read from a distance.

Examples

  • Stand firm
  • Roots inna blood
  • Sound keeps moving

Call and Response

Write a call and a short response. The response can be the echo effect or another voice. When you create vocal lines with call and response you give the mix a conversation. This is perfect for live sound system play and for remixes.

Example

Call: Who hold down the place

Response: We hold it down

Toasting Lines

Toasting is rhythmic speech. Write punchy one liners that can be delivered like a DJ. Toaster lines often use internal rhyme and swagger. Keep the syllable count consistent so the flow locks with the riddim.

Example

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Feet on the floor feet never slip, heavy bass make your heart skip

Space as Part of the Lyric

Plan pauses intentionally. Note where delay repeats will occur. A blank bar can be louder than a bar full of words. Think like a producer. If the echo trail will sing your hook twice, you do not need to sing it twice. Let the effect sing back for you.

Prosody and Timing for Dub

Prosody means how your words fit the music. In dub you are often working with slow tempos and heavy tempo feel. That gives you room but also demands precision. The wrong stress on a word can make a phrase wash out in the bass. Do this quick test.

  1. Speak the line at the tempo of the track. Clap the beat with your foot.
  2. Mark which syllables feel strong when spoken. Those are the syllables that should land on drums or bass hits.
  3. Adjust the line so the natural spoken stress matches the rhythm of the riddim.

If a key word is weak in speech rewrite the line. Dub thrives on consonant snaps landing against kick and snare. Long vowels can sit in reverb while consonant attacks cut through the mix.

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Vowel Choices and Echo

Effects love vowels. Delay repeats blur consonants faster than vowels. If you want echo tails to sing, choose words with open vowels. Test on a simple delay. Sing on pure vowels into the effect and listen for the tail. If the result is musical you are onto something.

Try swapping words to favor vowels

  • Replace dark with deep when you want longer tails.
  • Replace fight with fire if you want the echo to sustain.

Writing With Effects in Mind

Write lines that intentionally leave room for echo and reverb. Not everything needs to be processed the same way. Plan moments for dry delivery and moments for soaked delivery. In the studio mark sections you want heavy echo with an E or with the word soak so you remember.

Practical guide

  • Use dry for the first line so the listener hears the message.
  • Use soaked on the repeat so the echo becomes a secondary voice.
  • Use half wet where you want both clarity and atmosphere.

Examples with Before and After Edits

Theme Getting free from a bad situation

Before

Learn How to Write Dub Songs
Make honest songs that hit. In How to Write Dub Songs you’ll shape chaos into choruses, built on memorable hooks, story details, that read like a diary and sing like an anthem.
The goal: repeatable songs that feel true and travel.
You will learn

  • Melody writing that respects your range
  • Turning messy feelings into singable lines
  • Structures that carry emotion without padding
  • Imagery and objects that beat vague angst
  • Revisions that keep truth and drop filler
  • Simple release plans you’ll actually follow
    • Artists who want repeatable, pro‑feeling results without losing soul

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    • Templates
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    • Prompt decks
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I am done with you. I will not stay. I am walking away from this life.

After

Done with you

Done

Why this works. The after version gives space. The echo on done can repeat and become a drum. You release the drama and let the bass and delay do the heavy lifting. The listener fills in the rest. This is classic dub move.

Theme Community and sound system pride

Before

We have the best speakers and we bring the people together and we keep the party going all night long.

After

Speakers up

People come

Night move

Why this works. Short fragments are easier to toast. They are also easy to echo. The words become instruments rather than paragraphs.

Writing Exercises for Dub Lyricists

The Echo Drip

Set a simple delay at tempo with three repeats. Sing nonsense vowels into the delay for five minutes. Mark any vowel gestures that create a pleasing tail. Turn those vowel gestures into a two word hook. Repeat the hook and test different vowel shapes to change the mood.

The One Bar Mantra

Write one line that fits in one bar of the riddim. Repeat it six times and only change the last word on the final repeat. Record and listen. Does the shift create meaning? If not rewrite. This trains you to write tight dub hooks.

Call and Crowd

Write a call line and a crowd response line. Practice delivering both with different intensities. Record with delay on the response only and listen to how the call sets the response up. Use this for live performance and for arranged vocals in a mix.

Performance Tips for Delivering Dub Lyrics Live

On stage you are often playing with sound engineers. Communicate where you want effects and when you want dry voice. If you work with a regular engineer build hand signals for soak and for slap back echo. If you play with a self contained sound system be ready to tweak on the fly.

  • Bring dynamics Start soft then get loud then drop back. Movement hooks the crowd.
  • Use space Stop singing for a bar. Let the echoes fill the void and watch the crowd lean in.
  • Scout the sound Test the bass pockets early so you know where your words will sit.
  • Be conversational Talk between lines. Dub loves low intimacy so a whispered tag can be lethal.

Production Awareness for Writers

You do not need to become a mixing engineer. Still, a working vocabulary helps you write better parts that live in the mix. Below are simple production concepts and how they relate to your lyrics.

  • Low end The bass fills the chest. Avoid lyrics that clutter the same frequency range. Use short syllables when singing over a bass push.
  • Mid range This is where the voice lives. Carve space by removing competing instruments in the mid band when the vocal enters.
  • Saturation Mild distortion on the vocal can help the voice cut through without increasing volume. Try a tape style saturation to warm a toast.
  • Delay timing Common settings are synced to the tempo at quarter, dotted eighth, or triplet. Dotted eighth delay gives a swing feel that is common in reggae and dub.
  • Ping pong delay Sends repeats across the stereo field. Great for creating movement in call and response lines.

Arrangement Maps You Can Steal

Classic Dub Map

  • Intro: Bass motif and a spare vocal tag
  • Riddim enters with minimal keys and drums
  • First vocal mantra dry
  • Second vocal mantra soaked in delay and reverb
  • Break: remove drums leave bass and echo tails
  • Instrumental dub section where effects are playful
  • Return of mantra with call and response and stronger bass
  • Outro: vocals fade into echo

Sound System Club Map

  • Cold open with heavy sub bass and a vocal sample loop
  • Toasting section with short punchy lines targeting drops
  • Drop to bass solo with vocal echoes as rhythm
  • Reprise with group chant and a live mic toasts
  • End with a dubplate shout out and banana split echo

Common Mistakes and Easy Fixes

  • Too many words Fix by cutting every second word and testing for clarity. If the line still reads, cut more.
  • Bad prosody Fix by speaking the line on the beat and aligning strong syllables with strong drum hits.
  • Effects burying the message Fix by starting dry then adding effects on the repeat or using high pass filters on delay returns.
  • Clashing vowels Fix by changing a vowel to a more open one so the echo rings tastefully.
  • Trying to explain everything Fix by leaving space and trusting the crowd to feel rather than follow every detail.

Real World Scenarios and How To React

Late Night Bedroom Session

You are alone with a cheap audio interface and a subwoofer that rattles the upstairs neighbor. You have a two bar loop and a reverb plugin. What do you write at three a m? Start with one word that sums the mood. Repeat it. Put a vowel on the long note. Send that track through the reverb plugin and ride the mix fader. Hear what the echo sings back. Let that be your chorus.

Busking with a Small PA

You are in a park with a small speaker. You cannot rely on massive bass. Write a chant that sits in the midrange. Choose consonants that cut and vowels that can be heard. Use call and response so the crowd can participate. Avoid lines that depend on subs for effect.

Studio Session with a Producer Who Loves FX

Your producer wants to drown everything in reverb. Protect the key lines by asking for a dry vocal bus or a send that you can control. Record two passes. One for effect and one for clarity. The clarity pass becomes the anchor and the soaked pass becomes the atmosphere.

Collaborating with Producers and Engineers

Communication matters. Use plain language. Say dry when you want no effect. Say big soak when you want long reverb. If you want a slap back say short echo. Learn to describe emotion not only technical setting. Say I want this to feel like a late night conversation in an empty hall. That paints a picture better than saying set reverb to two seconds.

Dub grew from a specific cultural moment in Jamaica. Respect the origin. If you borrow specific phrases from patois or reference spiritual or political ideas from another culture, do so with knowledge. Collaborate with artists who live in that tradition when possible. Give credit in liner notes and shout outs. Sound system culture is generous and rewards respect.

Finishing Workflow to Lock a Dub Lyric

  1. Write a one line mantra that states your idea in plain language.
  2. Test different vowel shapes with a delay on a practice track. Pick the best sounding version.
  3. Map where you want dry and soaked delivery. Write marks in the score or in your session notes.
  4. Record at least two passes. One dry and one with free performance choices. Keep both.
  5. Mix with the producer. Listen to the vocal in headphones and on speakers. Adjust delay tempo and low cut on echoes until the vocal sits well in the riddim.
  6. Play for a small audience. Dub is social music. The first live reactions tell you if the chant works as a call for a crowd.

Dub Lyric Examples You Can Model

Theme Resilience

Verse: Ground hold me

Repeat: Ground hold me

Response: Ground hold me o o

Theme Night sound system

Verse: Bass pull the heart

Repeat: Bass pull the heart

Tag: Sound check one two

Theme Political edge

Verse: Eyes wide the truth is here

Repeat: Truth is here

Echo tag: Truth is here here

FAQ

What makes dub lyrics different from reggae lyrics

Dub lyrics are often shorter and more repetitive. They are written to interact with studio effects. Reggae lyrics can be more narrative. In dub the mix and the echo are co writers. Keep lines short and sonically interesting so the effects can transform them live or in the studio.

How many words should a dub hook have

One to four words is a good range. The goal is something chantable and easy for echo to pick up. A single strong word can become a musical motif once the delay repeats it.

Do I need to use Jamaican patois to write dub lyrics

No. Patois is part of dub history and it can add authenticity but you should not use it as an affectation. If you are not part of that culture do your research and collaborate with artists who are. Use language you can deliver authentically and respectfully.

Should I rhyme in dub lyrics

Rhyme helps but it is not required. Internal rhythm, vowel choice, and repetition matter more. If you use rhyme keep it loose and natural so it does not fight the echo.

How do I make my dub vocal cut through the mix

Use clear consonant attacks for syllables that should cut. Add mild saturation to give the voice harmonic content. Place a short high pass on the delay return so the echo does not muddy the bass. Also record a dry anchor vocal in case you need clarity in the final mix.

Learn How to Write Dub Songs
Make honest songs that hit. In How to Write Dub Songs you’ll shape chaos into choruses, built on memorable hooks, story details, that read like a diary and sing like an anthem.
The goal: repeatable songs that feel true and travel.
You will learn

  • Melody writing that respects your range
  • Turning messy feelings into singable lines
  • Structures that carry emotion without padding
  • Imagery and objects that beat vague angst
  • Revisions that keep truth and drop filler
  • Simple release plans you’ll actually follow
    • Artists who want repeatable, pro‑feeling results without losing soul

    What you get

    • Templates
    • Tone sliders
    • Prompt decks
    • Troubleshooting guides

Action Plan You Can Use Today

  1. Pick a mood and write a one line mantra that fits it.
  2. Load a two bar riddim and set a delay to dotted eighth or triplet. Sing vowels into the delay and listen for tails you like.
  3. Turn the best vowel gesture into a two or three word hook. Test different rhythms for delivery.
  4. Record a dry and a soaked pass. Mark where you want the echo to be heavy and where you want silence.
  5. Play the draft to two friends and ask what word they remember. Tweak until the crowd remembers the hook.


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About Toni Mercia

Toni Mercia is a Grammy award-winning songwriter and the founder of Lyric Assistant. With over 15 years of experience in the music industry, Toni has written hit songs for some of the biggest names in music. She has a passion for helping aspiring songwriters unlock their creativity and take their craft to the next level. Through Lyric Assistant, Toni has created a tool that empowers songwriters to make great lyrics and turn their musical dreams into reality.