Songwriting Advice

How To Write A Good Lyrics

how to write a good lyrics lyric assistant

You want lyrics that stick like gum on a sneaker but sound like poetry when you sober up. Good lyrics do several things at once. They make the listener feel something, they are easy to sing along to, and they read like a tiny movie if you close your eyes. This guide will teach you what that means in practice. Expect honest techniques, short drills that actually work, and stupidly clear examples you can steal and adapt.

Looking for the ultimate cheatsheet to skyrocket your music career? Get instant access to the contact details of the gatekeepers of the music industry... Record Labels. Music Managers. A&R's. Festival Booking Agents. Find out more →

This is written for artists who want results not excuses. We will cover idea selection, voice, prosody which is the match between words and music, rhyme that actually earns its keep, storytelling that avoids the yawns, editing passes that remove the trash, and legal basics so your work does not get stolen by some schlub with a spreadsheet and no shame.

What Makes Lyrics Good

Good lyrics are memorable and functional. They work with melody. They tell a story or set an emotional scene. They give listeners language to feel something and to share that feeling with others. Here are the core attributes.

  • Clear emotional idea that can be stated in one plain sentence.
  • Singability which means words sit comfortably on melody and are easy to vocalize.
  • Specific imagery that creates a mental picture instead of a vague confession.
  • Strong prosody so natural speech stress lands on strong musical beats.
  • A memorable hook or title that a friend could text back verbatim.
  • Editing which removes the boring stuff and leaves the interesting parts.

Key Terms You Should Know

Before we get toxic with examples, here are terms and acronyms explained like you asked your music teacher at 2 a.m.

  • Prosody. How words and music fit together. It is about stressed syllables matching strong beats. Bad prosody feels like shoe squeak in a ballad.
  • Topline. The sung melody and lyrics. If you wrote the vocal and someone else made the beat you wrote the topline.
  • Hook. The most memorable fragment of the song. Could be melodic, lyrical, or rhythmic. Hooks are what people hum in showers the next morning.
  • Slant rhyme. A near rhyme that sounds pleasing without being obvious. Think love and move. It keeps things modern and less sing song.
  • Internal rhyme. Rhyme within a line not just at the end. It spices up flow without sounding like a nursery rhyme.
  • Scansion. The practice of marking stressed and unstressed syllables to align words with music.
  • DAW. Digital Audio Workstation. That is the software where music gets recorded like Ableton, Logic, or FL Studio.
  • BPM. Beats per minute. Faster BPM feels urgent. Slower BPM feels heavy or intimate.
  • PRO. Performance Rights Organization. These organizations like BMI and ASCAP collect royalties when your song is played in public or on the radio. More on PROs later.
  • Sync. Short for synchronization license. That is the license needed when someone wants to put your song on a TV show or ad.

Start With One Clear Promise

Before you write a single lyric line, write one sentence that states the emotional promise of the song. This is your GPS. It keeps you from wandering into cliché fields and returning with a basket of mediocre lines.

Examples of promise sentences

  • I am leaving tonight and I will be fine.
  • I remember the way we laughed at public places when we had nothing.
  • I pretend I am over you but I still keep your hoodie.

Turn that promise into a short title. Short titles are easier to sing and easier to remember. If a friend can shout it in a bar and people join in you did it right.

How To Find Your Voice and Persona

Good lyricists write from a voice not from a diary entry. A voice has choices. It decides whether the speaker is bitter, playful, vulnerable, ironic, or manipulative. Choosing a persona gives you permission to lie for art.

Real life scenario

Imagine you are writing after a messy breakup. You can write as the raw person who cried in the shower last night. That is fine. Or you can write as the version of you that is three months sober and slightly smug. Both can work. Picking one keeps the song focused.

Exercises to find a persona

  1. Write a paragraph as yourself. Then rewrite the same paragraph as someone who has a secret they will never tell. Compare the images and tones.
  2. List three adjectives that describe the voice. Example playful, sharp, regretful. Use those words to guide imagery and sentence rhythm.
  3. Imagine a film character who would sing this. That character has a backstory. Give them one line that reveals that backstory.

Show Not Tell Like You Are an Indie Film Director

Telling says I am sad. Showing says I sleep with the lights on because the dark remembers your name. The second line gives detail that paints a picture and lets the listener infer the emotion. That inference is the currency of great songwriting.

Before and after examples

  • Before I miss you so much.
  • After Your coffee mug still sits like a bodyguard on the counter.
  • Before I am tired of lying to myself.
  • After I tell the bartender my mattress is spare. He writes sympathy on a napkin.

Write Choruses That Feel Inevitable

The chorus is the thesis. It states the core promise plainly and memorably. It should be singable on the first listen and repeatable in group chats later. A chorus that tries to say everything ends up saying nothing.

Chorus recipe

  1. One line that states the emotional promise in plain speech.
  2. Repeat or rephrase it once for emphasis.
  3. Add a twist in the last line that reveals consequence or attitude.

Example chorus

I will not call you tonight. I will not call you tonight. My hand practices empty pockets until morning.

Learn How to Write Songs About Lyric
Lyric songs that really feel built for goosebumps, using arrangements, bridge turns, and sharp lyric tone.
You will learn

  • Pick the sharpest scene for feeling
  • Prosody that matches pulse
  • Hooks that distill the truth
  • Bridge turns that add perspective
  • Images over abstracts
  • Arrangements that support the story

Who it is for

  • Songwriters chasing honest, powerful emotion writing

What you get

  • Scene picker worksheet
  • Prosody checklist
  • Hook distiller
  • Arrangement cue map

Why this works

The chorus repeats the promise for memory and then adds a concrete image that shades the line.

Rhyme Without Being Cheesy

Rhyme is a tool not a religion. Use rhyme to create momentum and closure. But avoid forcing perfect rhymes that make the line read like a greeting card from 1998. Modern songwriting blends perfect rhymes, slant rhymes, and internal rhymes.

Types of rhyme explained

  • Perfect rhyme where vowel and ending consonant match. Example cat and hat. Use sparingly at emotional turns.
  • Slant rhyme where vowels or consonants almost match. Example home and same. It sounds modern and natural.
  • Internal rhyme where words within a line rhyme. Example She left at noon with a tune. It adds flow without predictable structure.

Rhyme exercises

  1. Write a four line stanza using only slant rhymes. Notice how it feels less sing song.
  2. Take a chorus with perfect rhyme and rewrite it replacing the perfect rhymes with slant rhymes. Which reads better out loud?

Prosody and Scansion Are Your New Best Friends

Prosody is the art of making words and music speak the same language. Scansion is the act of marking stresses in your line so you can put them on the right beats in the melody. Bad prosody is why a perfect lyric looks amazing on paper and terrible on stage.

How to do a prosody check

  1. Read the line out loud at conversational speed. Mark the naturally stressed syllables. These are your anchors.
  2. Count the syllables that fall on strong beats in your melody. Do they match the anchors? If not rewrite.
  3. Swap short function words like and, the, to weaker positions. Put content words on strong beats.

Example

Line on the page My heart is heavy like tomorrow

Spoken stress MY heart is HEAVy like toMORrow

If your melody gives long notes to MY and HEAVy the line will feel natural. If the long note is on is or like the line will sound wrong.

Melody Friendly Lyrics

Words can be friends or enemies to a melody. Pick vowels and consonants that are easy to sing. Long open vowels like ah and oh are great for sustained notes. Consonant heavy words are good for rhythmic spots and quick lines.

Practical tips

  • Put open vowels on long notes. Example use oh, ah, ay for long sustained chorus notes.
  • Place consonant endings on quick rhythmic lines. They help with articulation and groove.
  • Test everything on a simple melody. If a perfectly crafted line chokes under the melody change it.

Structure That Makes Lyrics Shine

Structure is the frame that tells your listener where to look. If you give the chorus the most space and repeat the hook in predictable places the listener can learn the song faster. Streaming culture rewards short payoffs. That means deliver the hook early without losing substance.

Learn How to Write Songs About Lyric
Lyric songs that really feel built for goosebumps, using arrangements, bridge turns, and sharp lyric tone.
You will learn

  • Pick the sharpest scene for feeling
  • Prosody that matches pulse
  • Hooks that distill the truth
  • Bridge turns that add perspective
  • Images over abstracts
  • Arrangements that support the story

Who it is for

  • Songwriters chasing honest, powerful emotion writing

What you get

  • Scene picker worksheet
  • Prosody checklist
  • Hook distiller
  • Arrangement cue map

Common forms with lyric goals

  • Verse pre chorus chorus verse chorus bridge chorus. This format builds tension and gives you space to show details.
  • Verse chorus verse chorus post chorus bridge chorus. Use a post chorus for a chant or tiny repeated hook.
  • Intro chorus verse chorus bridge chorus. Hitting the chorus early hooks listeners fast. Great for playlists.

Editing Passes That Actually Work

Write messy. Edit smart. Every line should survive one of these checks or die.

The Crime Scene Edit

  1. Underline abstractions like love, pain, heart. Replace with specific images.
  2. Circle every being verb like is, am, are. Replace with action verbs where possible.
  3. Delete any line that explains rather than shows.
  4. Find the two best images and highlight them. Keep both. Everything else should orbit them.

The Prosody Pass

Do the prosody check we described earlier. If a strong word does not land on a strong beat rewrite the line or change the melody.

The Sing Test

Record yourself singing the topline over a simple loop. Playback with earbuds. Does it feel awkward to sing? If yes fix the words not your face.

Examples You Can Steal and Adapt

Theme I pretend to be okay

Verse The apartment smells like your shampoo. I light one candle and call it lighting the mood.

Pre chorus I practice not calling you. I practice knives on bread. Tiny repetitions for survival.

Chorus I will not call you tonight. I leave the phone in the sink so it learns to be quiet.

Theme New confidence

Verse I button the jacket you said I never could wear. Subway lights give me a fake approval.

Chorus I walk in like rent is paid. I claim the room with a crooked grin.

Common Mistakes and Fast Fixes

  • Too many ideas. Fix by stripping to one promise sentence and removing details that do not feed that promise.
  • Vague language. Fix by swapping abstractions for objects and actions.
  • Bad prosody. Fix by speaking lines and moving natural stress to musical strong beats.
  • Forcing perfect rhymes. Fix by using slant rhyme and internal rhyme to keep freshness.
  • Writing like a diary entry. Fix by choosing a persona and tightening perspective.

Real Life Scenarios And How To Apply This Guide

Writing on the subway at 9 a.m.

Use the object drill. Pick one object you can see like a coffee cup. Write four lines where that cup performs an action that reveals emotion. Ten minutes. The grind of the commute gives you concrete images that beat abstract melodrama.

Stuck after a breakup

Do the memory audit. List three specific scenes where you lived with that person. Pick the smallest object in one scene and write a verse around it. Small objects anchor emotion better than broad statements.

Writing for a pop single

Shorten the intro and hit the chorus within the first 45 seconds. Make sure the title is in the chorus and it is easy to shout. Keep the chorus melodic and simple enough for fans to sing at a show when their phone lights make you feel like a deity for a moment.

Quick Drills To Improve Fast

Object drill

Pick a random object. Write four lines where the object performs or receives an action. Ten minutes. Use sensory detail.

Time stamp drill

Write a chorus that includes an exact time and a day. Five minutes. It anchors the listener in a tiny movie.

Dialogue drill

Write two lines as if you are answering a text. Keep it natural. Five minutes. This builds conversational prosody.

Constraint drill

Write a verse using only ten words. Constraints force choices and reveal the strongest images.

How To Work With Producers And Co Writers

Communication is the secret sauce. Producers are not telepaths. Tell them what you want emotionally and sonically. If you think the chorus needs to feel huge say huge not just louder. If you have a specific vocal wiggle mark it in the lyric sheet.

Co writing etiquette

  • Bring one clear idea and one demo snippet to the session.
  • Be generous but firm on the parts that matter. If your title is core do not give it away without a reason.
  • Use a split sheet to record who wrote what. A split sheet is a simple document that lists contributors and percentage splits. Fill it out during the session before you leave the room.

Your work is a small business. Here are the essentials without getting lawyers involved more than necessary.

Your lyric and melody are automatically copyrighted the moment you fix them in a tangible format like a voice memo or a written document. That said register your copyright with the official body in your country to make enforcement easier. In the US you register with the US Copyright Office.

PROs explained

Performance Rights Organizations collect money when your song is performed in public. BMI and ASCAP are two well known PROs in the US. If your song plays on the radio, at a bar, or in a streaming session you can earn performance royalties. Register your songs with a PRO and with your publisher if you have one. Publisher here means the person or company that helps collect royalties and place songs in media. If you are independent you can act as your own publisher but make the paperwork tidy.

Sync

Sync or synchronization license is what you need when your song is used in TV movies ads or games. Sync fees can be large. If your goal is to get placements send clean stems and a short lyric sheet plus a one sentence description of the song mood.

Split sheets and agreements

Always document who wrote what and the percentages. It avoids drama later when money shows up and lawyers smell lunch. A simple email with credits and percentages can serve as a temporary split sheet but a signed document is better.

Finish Workflow That Helps You Ship

  1. Lock the title and promise sentence.
  2. Run the crime scene edit. Remove abstractions and passive verbs.
  3. Do the prosody pass. Speak every line. Mark stresses and align with melody.
  4. Record a quick demo. Even a phone voice memo counts.
  5. Get feedback from two people who will tell you the truth. Ask them which line they can still hum the next day.
  6. Finalize split sheet and register with a PRO and copyright office if needed.

Frequently Asked Questions

How long should my lyrics be

There is no fixed length. Song length is dictated by the idea and the genre. In streaming culture shorter songs often perform better but do not force brevity at the cost of meaning. Aim to deliver the hook early and keep the sections purposeful.

Do I need perfect rhyme to write good lyrics

No. Slant rhyme and internal rhyme are often better choices. Use perfect rhyme for emotional payoffs. Mix rhyme types to keep things fresh and avoid sing song predictability.

How do I avoid cliches in lyrics

Replace abstract statements with specific objects and actions. Add a time or place detail. Use a tiny twist in the last line of a verse to reframe the image. If a line could be a greeting card throw it out and try again.

What if I am not a good writer

Writing is a skill. The fastest paths to improvement are frequent practice, good editing, and listening to songs that move you and analyzing why. Use the drills in this guide daily for a month and you will notice measurable improvement.

Should I write lyrics first or melody first

Both workflows work. Melody first helps prosody because the melody sets the stress pattern. Lyrics first gives you a strong narrative. Try both. If you write lyrics first sing them on vowels over a simple loop to find a natural melody.

How do I write lyrics for other artists

Understand their voice and catalog. Write a demo that fits their world but adds one fresh element. Deliver a clean demo, a short lyric sheet, and a one sentence pitch that explains the emotional core. Be prepared to let them change lines. That is normal in this business.

Learn How to Write Songs About Lyric
Lyric songs that really feel built for goosebumps, using arrangements, bridge turns, and sharp lyric tone.
You will learn

  • Pick the sharpest scene for feeling
  • Prosody that matches pulse
  • Hooks that distill the truth
  • Bridge turns that add perspective
  • Images over abstracts
  • Arrangements that support the story

Who it is for

  • Songwriters chasing honest, powerful emotion writing

What you get

  • Scene picker worksheet
  • Prosody checklist
  • Hook distiller
  • Arrangement cue map


Get Contact Details of Music Industry Gatekeepers

Looking for an A&R, Manager or Record Label to skyrocket your music career?

Don’t wait to be discovered, take full control of your music career. Get access to the contact details of the gatekeepers of the music industry. We're talking email addresses, contact numbers, social media...

Packed with contact details for over 3,000 of the top Music Managers, A&Rs, Booking Agents & Record Label Executives.

Get exclusive access today, take control of your music journey and skyrocket your music career.

author-avatar

About Toni Mercia

Toni Mercia is a Grammy award-winning songwriter and the founder of Lyric Assistant. With over 15 years of experience in the music industry, Toni has written hit songs for some of the biggest names in music. She has a passion for helping aspiring songwriters unlock their creativity and take their craft to the next level. Through Lyric Assistant, Toni has created a tool that empowers songwriters to make great lyrics and turn their musical dreams into reality.