Songwriting Advice
How to Write Soul Lyrics
You want lyrics that make people stop scrolling, put their headphones back on, and feel something in their chest they did not expect. Soul music is about truth delivered with feeling. It is not about clever lines pretending to be deep. It is about the kind of line that smells like last night and looks like sunrise. This guide gives you the tools to write soul lyrics that sound lived in, singable, and impossible to forget.
Quick Links to Useful Sections
- What Soul Lyrics Actually Are
- Start With the Feeling Not the Phrase
- Choose a Point of View That Keeps It Intimate
- Make Imagery Do the Heavy Lifting
- Prosody for Singers
- Rhyme With Taste
- Use Repetition Like a Prayer
- Write Verses That Move the Camera
- Write a Chorus That Feels Like a Return
- Gospel Influence and Call and Response
- Melisma and Vocal Ornamentation
- Prosody Example and Fixes
- Bridge and Emotional Pivot
- Songwriting Exercises for Soul
- One Object Story
- Three Moments Map
- Vowel Pass
- Topline and Lyric Interaction
- Vocal Tone and Delivery Notes
- Arrangement Awareness for Writers
- Common Lyric Problems and Fixes
- Before and After Edits You Can Steal
- Co Writing and Arranging Credit Notes
- Publishing and Metadata Basics
- Finish the Lyric With a Repeatable Workflow
- Songwriting Tools and Terms Explained
- Examples You Can Model
- Production Notes That Make Lyrics Shine
- How to Know When the Lyric Is Done
- Practice Plan for the Next 30 Days
- Common Questions About Writing Soul Lyrics
- Do I need a lot of life experience to write soul lyrics
- How specific should imagery be
- How do I write lyrics that singers can interpret differently
- Is it okay to borrow from gospel or church music
- Soul Lyric FAQ Schema
Everything here is written for artists who want to act, not study forever. You will get practical steps, exercises you can do in the shower or on public transit, examples that show the change, and a checklist for finishing a lyric so it breathes like a real human being. We will cover emotional focus, point of view, imagery, phrasing, prosody, melodic interplay, gospel and R&B influences, rhyme strategy, vocal techniques, production awareness, and a repeatable writing workflow.
What Soul Lyrics Actually Are
Soul lyrics are honest in voice and specific in detail. They carry heartache, joy, longing, or salvation in a way that feels immediate. Soul borrows from gospel, rhythm and blues, jazz, and sometimes hip hop. The common thread is that the lyric serves the feeling first and the cleverness second. Soul lyrics are not a list of feelings. They are a scene that creates a single emotional consequence the listener can inhabit.
- Emotion first Say the emotional truth and then show it.
- Concrete image Replace abstract vocabulary with a tactile image.
- Vocal phrasing Think like a singer not a poet. Leave room for breath, runs, and feeling.
- Musicality of words Use prosody so stress meets beat.
- Call and response Use echo lines, backing vocals, or internal echoes to create conversation.
Start With the Feeling Not the Phrase
Before you write a line write one sentence that explains the feeling you want the listener to leave with. This is your emotional brief. Say it in plain speech to someone in the kitchen while pouring coffee. No metaphors. No lyrical trying. Just the feeling.
Examples
- I am still holding on though I know I should let go.
- I am grateful and surprised that I made it here at all.
- I love you and I am terrified to tell you that.
Turn that sentence into a short title or a repeated line that will act as your chorus anchor. Soul thrives on repetition used like incense. The right repeated line can change meaning every time it returns. Keep it simple and true to the emotional brief.
Choose a Point of View That Keeps It Intimate
First person puts the listener inside a body. Second person can feel like confession or confrontation. Third person gives distance. Soul works best close. Pick one voice and stick to it for the song. Switch only if the change carries emotional information.
Relatable scenario
Imagine texting your ex at three a m with the lock screen still warm from your thumb. First person gives the details. Second person reads the text. Third person describes the scene like a documentary. Each delivers a different kind of pain or redemption. Choose the one that gives you the punch you want in the chorus.
Make Imagery Do the Heavy Lifting
Abstract lines like I am sad do not work in soul. Replace them with objects actions and sensory details. The goal is to show the feeling rather than name it. Use objects that reveal character. A burnt out lighter. A sweater stained with perfume. A voicemail left at midnight. A coffee mug with lipstick on the rim. These are props that make a listener remember a scene.
Before
I miss you so much and I cannot sleep.
After
The night light fades to blue and your hoodie still hangs on the chair. I kiss the sleeve like I am kissing you goodnight.
The After version gives an action. The action implies the emotion without naming it. That is the heart of soulful writing.
Prosody for Singers
Prosody is how the natural stress of spoken words matches the musical stress of a melody. Prosody matters hugely in soul because singers bend words and fall into runs. If your strongest word falls on a weak musical beat the line will feel like a shoe that does not fit. Say everything out loud at conversation speed before you set it to music. Mark which syllables you naturally stress. Those syllables should land on strong beats or sustained notes.
Quick prosody checklist
- Speak lines at normal speed. Circle the natural stresses.
- Place long vowels on sustained notes for emotional weight.
- Avoid cramming many stressed syllables into a single short phrase unless the music supports it.
- Make room for breaths. Singer breathes tell you where to place commas and line breaks.
Rhyme With Taste
Soul can use rhyme but it does not need to bow to it. Avoid obvious rhymes just for the sake of rhyming. Use internal rhyme consonance and family rhyme to keep the texture rich without sounding like a nursery rhyme. Family rhyme means words share vowel or consonant qualities without an exact match. This keeps lyrics musical without sounding forced.
Example family chain : name, same, shame, awake. Use a perfect rhyme where you want an emotional hit and family rimes elsewhere to keep the listener engaged.
Use Repetition Like a Prayer
Repetition in soul works like a mantra. Repeat a phrase to increase feeling. Change one word on the last repetition to give it new weight. Repetition can be lyrical or melodic. A riff that repeats under different lines makes the lyric feel ritualistic and necessary.
Example
I forgive you I forgive you for the way you left. I forgive you now with the cold coffee in my hand.
Here the repeated phrase becomes less an excuse and more an act. The concrete image after the repeat gives the line its honesty.
Write Verses That Move the Camera
Verses are where you add narrative detail. Each verse should show a new camera angle. The first verse sets the scene. The second verse raises stakes or reveals a consequence. Keep sentences short enough to sing and long enough to breathe. Use verbs. The singer is doing something not simply feeling something.
Verse map
- Verse one: Place time and location. Use one object that matters.
- Verse two: Show a consequence or memory that changes how the first verse reads.
- Verse three or bridge: Reveal a secret or a change in intention.
Write a Chorus That Feels Like a Return
The chorus is the emotional center. It states the song s main claim. Make it singable on the first pass. Short repeated lines work. Put your title on a note that carries. Keep vowels open for big notes. The chorus should feel like an exhale compared to the verses. If the verse breathes in the chorus should let air out.
Chorus recipe
- One short sentence that states the emotional truth.
- Repeat or echo it once for emphasis.
- Add one concrete detail or consequence as a final line.
Example chorus
I kept your sweater in my closet like a quiet shrine. I light it up at two a m to pretend you are still mine.
Gospel Influence and Call and Response
Soul borrows from gospel with call and response patterns. Call and response is simply a line that asks or states something followed by a short reply. The reply can be backing vocals a band response or an instrumental lick. Use it to underline key lines. It creates a sense of community and can make a small club feel like a cathedral.
Real life scenario
Picture a small church night where the singer says I need you and the choir answers I got you. That exchange tells you everything about dependence comfort and belonging without additional lines. This device translates well into secular soul when used sparingly.
Melisma and Vocal Ornamentation
Melisma is when a single syllable stretches over many notes. Singers often use melisma for added emotion. Leave space for melisma in your phrasing. Do not write lines that box the singer into a monotone. Long vowels and open vowel choices like ah oh and oo are friendly for runs. Short closed vowels like i and e are harder to stretch and can sound clipped unless that is the effect you want.
Note : Melisma is not decoration only. It can change meaning. A stretched word becomes a plea. Use it where you want the listener to hang on a feeling.
Prosody Example and Fixes
Problem line
I have been trying to forget everything about what you did.
Say it out loud and notice how the natural stress falls. Now simplify and place stress points on musical beats.
Rewritten for prosody
I tried to forget the night you left the light on.
The new line has fewer stressed syllables clustered together and ends with a concrete image. It also places the emotional word left on a natural cadence which a singer can hold.
Bridge and Emotional Pivot
The bridge is your opportunity to change perspective or raise stakes. It should do one of three things. Shift the point of view reveal a secret or change the action. Keep it shorter than the verses. Musically you can alter chords or bring in a minor key to color the change.
Bridge examples
- Confession : I never told you that I stayed just for your laugh.
- Decision : I packed the sweater and put your name on the line.
- Reveal : The letter in my pocket never made it to the table.
Songwriting Exercises for Soul
These drills build instinct faster than overthinking.
One Object Story
Pick one object in the room. Write a three line verse where that object performs an action only your lover would notice. Ten minutes. Do not edit. This forces specificity.
Three Moments Map
Write three one sentence moments that occur before during and after an argument. Use them as the skeleton for two verses and a bridge. This builds narrative momentum.
Vowel Pass
Sing nonsense vowels on a simple chord for sixty seconds. Mark where your voice wants to linger. Place a short truthful phrase on that spot. This creates a melody friendly line and gives you singable vowels for runs.
Topline and Lyric Interaction
Topline is a songwriting term meaning the vocal melody and lyrics that sit on top of a track. If you write lyrics first keep them flexible to fit a topline. If you write melody first let words follow the melody so prosody stays intact. Soul often begins with a melody idea because singers think in phrasing. Record quick vocal ideas with your phone and write around those phrases.
Tip : When you record an idea label it with the emotion and the time of day you were in. These small notes help you remember why you wrote what you wrote when you return to edit.
Vocal Tone and Delivery Notes
Lyric is only half the job. Delivery sells the meaning. Decide what your vocal tone is for each section. Verses can be conversational. Choruses can be larger. The bridge can be raw and unvarnished. Note moments for gentle vibrato or a raw break in the voice. These production choices should be written into your demo notes so the performer knows what to do.
Relatable scenario
You are on a bus and a song comes on that makes you cry. It is not the words only. It is the way the singer breaks on one word then clutches the next. That break is a deliberate performance choice. Write places in your lyric where a voice could break and gain meaning.
Arrangement Awareness for Writers
Even if you do not produce you can write with arrangement in mind. Picture the instrumentation around your words. Spare verses call for intimate instruments like acoustic guitar or piano. Choruses with big statements invite strings or a Hammond organ. Leaving space before the chorus makes the entry more powerful. Note where you want a choral swell or a single piano note under a line.
- Intro motif : a short melodic idea that returns as a witness to the lyric.
- Space before chorus : a one bar rest or a single note holds attention and makes the chorus land harder.
- Instrumental response : a horn or guitar lick that answers the vocal line like a call and response.
Common Lyric Problems and Fixes
Problem : Too many ideas in a single song.
Fix : Go back to your emotional brief and remove any line that does not support that single feeling.
Problem : Vague language that sounds like a fortune cookie.
Fix : Replace each abstract word with a concrete object or action. If a line could be sent as a text to a friend and make sense then it is probably specific enough.
Problem : Lines that are hard to sing.
Fix : Speak the line naturally. Move stressed syllables onto strong beats. Choose open vowels for the sustained notes.
Problem : Overwriting with too many modifiers.
Fix : Remove the first adjective you wrote. If the image still sings then you are fine. If not then add one stronger sensory word.
Before and After Edits You Can Steal
Theme : Regret about leaving.
Before
I feel terrible for leaving you and I cannot apologize enough.
After
The porch light flickers off at the same time I pull away. The radio forgets your favorite song and I start to cry in traffic.
Theme : Quiet gratitude.
Before
I am thankful for you and all the things you did.
After
You make coffee the way the old record player clicks the end of side one. That tiny ritual saved my whole week.
Co Writing and Arranging Credit Notes
When you collaborate know what you bring. If you write melody or topline you are likely entitled to a share of the song. If you suggest a melodic vocal hook that becomes central you deserve credit. Be explicit early. Talk money and splits before the song is finished. This is not romantic but it keeps relationships intact. Use plain language. Name the percentage range you expect and let negotiation happen quickly.
Publishing and Metadata Basics
Metadata is the information attached to your song like writer names publisher and ISRC codes. ISRC stands for International Standard Recording Code and it is an identifier for recordings. Register your songs with a performing rights organization so you can collect royalties when your song is played. These details do not make your lyric better but they make sure you get paid for it.
Finish the Lyric With a Repeatable Workflow
- Write your emotional brief in one sentence and keep it where you can see it.
- Draft a chorus that states that brief in plain language and make it singable.
- Write verse one with one object a time crumb and an action.
- Write verse two to reveal a consequence or memory that changes the first verse.
- Draft a bridge that pivots the song emotionally by changing perspective or action.
- Do a prosody pass. Speak everything aloud and place stresses on strong beats.
- Make a quick demo with a phone. Sing naturally and record any melisma or breaks you want to keep.
- Run three trusted listeners and ask one question. What line did you remember first. Fix only what improves clarity or emotional delivery.
Songwriting Tools and Terms Explained
Prosody This is how spoken language stress aligns with musical emphasis. It ensures words land on beats that make sense to the ear.
Topline The vocal melody and lyrics that sit above the instrumental track.
Melisma Singing one syllable across multiple notes. Used for emotional emphasis.
Call and response A phrase followed by an answer. It creates dialogue and community feel.
ISRC International Standard Recording Code. An identifier for recordings used for tracking plays and payments.
R&B Rhythm and Blues. A genre that heavily influences soul with rhythmic phrasing and emotive vocals.
Whenever you see an acronym explain it the first time. That keeps readers who do not live in industry jargon from feeling lost. Remember that a quick explanation helps your song get sung by more people.
Examples You Can Model
Theme : Breaking free with sadness underneath.
Verse one
The bus breathes out the city like a ghost. Your name sticks on my tongue like a penny. I throw it under my shoe and pretend it does not shine.
Pre chorus
Streetlights wink like witnesses. I tuck my hands into pockets that still smell like you.
Chorus
I said I am alright I said I am all right and the ceiling answered back with one thin light. I am walking home without your hand but I keep you in the shape of my jacket.
Bridge
The map of us sits folded in the glove box like a sin I cannot name. I burned the corner for luck and the smoke tasted like goodbye.
Production Notes That Make Lyrics Shine
- Space before chorus A single piano note or a one bar rest gives the chorus more weight.
- Organ swells Use a warm organ under the chorus to create a gospel feel without clashing with vocals.
- Backing vocal placement Have backing vocals echo the last few words of a chorus line to create call and response effect.
- Dynamic control Bring instruments down in the bridge to expose raw voice and raise them in the final chorus for catharsis.
How to Know When the Lyric Is Done
Your lyric is done when the listener can hum the chorus and can picture one memorable image from each verse. If a line does not help the listener feel or picture something remove it. Stop rearranging for style over truth. Soul prefers honest language done well over cute language done often.
Practice Plan for the Next 30 Days
- Day one to five : Do the vowel pass and write a chorus each day. Aim for singable short lines.
- Day six to ten : Write verses using the object drill. Two verses per day minimum.
- Day eleven to fifteen : Record short topline demos on your phone and listen back for prosody problems.
- Day sixteen to twenty : Work with a singer or sing yourself focusing on deliveries and breaks.
- Day twenty one to twenty five : Arrange a simple instrumental and test backing vocals and call response.
- Day twenty six to thirty : Pick your best song finish it and get feedback. Ship the demo.
Common Questions About Writing Soul Lyrics
Do I need a lot of life experience to write soul lyrics
No. You need emotional honesty and attention to detail. You can write from empathy or observation. The key is to pick one real image that communicates the feeling. Real life experiences help but good imagination with a single concrete touch can feel just as lived in. Think like a witness and choose one truth to amplify.
How specific should imagery be
Specific enough to feel unique but flexible enough for listeners to place themselves inside the scene. Names and very personal details can work if they reveal a universal feeling. Use objects that can be seen felt or heard. Time crumbs and bodily actions ground the lyric in life.
How do I write lyrics that singers can interpret differently
Write with emotional clarity but not literal explanation. Leave space for the singer s own history. Use lines that contain both statement and question so the singer can lean into vulnerability or defiance. A line like I called your name and the night swallowed it can be sung as regret or as liberation depending on delivery.
Is it okay to borrow from gospel or church music
Yes if you treat it with respect and understanding. Learn the phrasing and the cultural history. Call and response and certain chord moves are part of the shared musical vocabulary. Use them to honor not to mimic without feeling. If you borrow a lyric or melody from a specific song get clearance or credit the source.