Songwriting Advice
How to Write Drone Metal Lyrics
You want words that feel like molten concrete poured into a canyon. Drone metal lyrics are less about clever rhymes and more about atmosphere, ritual, and weight. Listeners do not need a three minute story arc. They want gravity, repetition, and a voice that stretches time like taffy. This guide gives you the tools to write lyrics that sit under layers of low end and feedback and still bite the listener in the chest.
Quick Links to Useful Sections
- What Is Drone Metal
- Why Lyrics Matter in Drone Metal
- Core Themes That Work for Drone Metal Lyrics
- Language Choices That Suit Drone Metal
- Structure and Repetition Strategies
- Mantra structure
- Layered reveal
- Call and response with texture
- Writing Process: From Concept to First Draft
- Prosody and Singing Long Notes
- Imagery Techniques That Translate to Massive Sound
- Scale shift
- Temporal collapse
- Material verbs
- Rhythm and Syllable Density
- Real Example: A Full Draft
- Before and After: Edit Examples
- Vocal Performance Tips
- Working With the Band or Producer
- Production Awareness for Lyricists
- Common Mistakes and How to Fix Them
- Exercises to Get Good Fast
- One image ten repeats
- Sustain vowel drill
- Space draft
- Room translation
- Publishing and Copyright Notes
- How to Keep Lyrics Fresh Across Long Songs
- Examples of Drills and Prompts You Can Use Tonight
- FAQ
- Action Plan You Can Use Tonight
This is written for musicians and songwriters who love heavy music, weird textures, and ideas that refuse to be summarized in one tweet. Expect practical workflows, real examples, and exercises you can finish between naps. We will cover what drone metal means, the lyrical DNA that makes it work, techniques for writing hypnotic lines, prosody tips for long notes, vocal performance advice, and a stack of exercises to build your muscle. We also explain jargon as we go so you do not need to be a gear nerd to write good words.
What Is Drone Metal
Drone metal is a subgenre of heavy music that focuses on sustained tones, minimal chord changes, sonic density, and a sense of ritual. The guitars and amps often hold notes for absurd amounts of time. The drums may be slow or absent. Songs can be long and patient. The emotional palette is usually dark, cavernous, and meditative.
Important names to know include Earth and Sunn O))). Earth is a band that helped shape the slow and heavy aesthetic. Sunn O))) took the idea further into extreme volume and immersion. These bands made a world where tone, texture, and length carry the argument of the song more than tempo or technical display.
Key features of the music you need to understand as a lyricist
- Sustain and texture The music holds notes and creates a mass of sound. Your words must breathe inside that mass.
- Minimal changes Chord or harmonic movement is often sparse. This gives repetition space to become ritual.
- Volume and dynamic shading Swells of loudness and quiet shape meaning. Lyrics land in the middle of those swells.
- Long form Songs can be ten minutes or longer. Your lyricism needs to support an extended attention span without running out of steam.
Why Lyrics Matter in Drone Metal
You might think lyrics are optional when everything is a wall of sound. They are not optional. The right words become a pulse inside the drone. They can convert the music from texture into a place to live. A single repeated line can become an incantation. A sparse verse can act like a window carved into the fog. Good drone metal lyrics give listeners a human anchor while the band melts reality outside of it.
Core Themes That Work for Drone Metal Lyrics
Drone metal is comfortable sitting with big, slow feelings. Here are themes that repeatedly work and why
- Ritual and repetition Ritual language turns repetition into meaning. Think of a repeated line like a prayer or a machine chant.
- Geology and scale Rocks, mountains, glaciers, and deep caves match low frequencies. Concrete nouns that imply scale help anchor the drone.
- Slow violence Emotional processes that unfold across years rather than moments fit naturally into long songs.
- Decay and ruin Rot, rust, ice, and corrosion are evocative because they suggest time and entropy.
- Non linear time Lines that compress past, present, and future create the dreamlike state drone music often aims for.
- Cosmic dread and awe The banality of everyday terror and the grandeur of cosmic emptiness both work because they match the tension between small human voice and huge sound.
Real life scenario: Imagine you are sitting in a car at 3 a.m. in a town that forgot daylight savings existed. The streetlight hums. The radiator ticks. That small domestic horror scales up into a lyric about tectonic plates moving under city streets. Drone metal lyrics do this scaling work all the time.
Language Choices That Suit Drone Metal
Some words cut through low frequencies better than others. Vowels with long sustain and consonants that do not choke the sustain are helpful. Use open vowels like ah, oo, and oh when you plan to hold notes long. Avoid heavy consonant clusters in the middle of a sustained syllable unless you want a percussive attack.
- Open vowels These are easy to hold. Examples include the sounds in words like "stone", "oath", "low", "void".
- Soft consonants before holds Letters like m, n, l can glide into a long note without breaking the air.
- Sharp consonants for accents Letters like t, k, and p can be used sparingly to punctuate a phrase against the drone.
Relatable moment: If you have ever held a note in the shower and felt it vibrate the mirror, you know the kind of vowel that wants to be in a drone song. Use those vowels in your lyrics deliberately.
Structure and Repetition Strategies
Drone metal lyrics often trade narrative progression for subtle variation. Think of your lyric like a sculpture that gradually reveals new faces as the light moves. The following structures are reliable.
Mantra structure
Pick a line that states the emotional core. Repeat it across the song with tiny changes or different deliveries. The repetition turns the line into ritual.
Layered reveal
Introduce a concrete image early. Repeat it. Add a second image later that reframes the first. Each repetition feels familiar and then slightly altered like a dream detail that shifts.
Call and response with texture
Use sparse lines that act as calls. Let the band answer with a swelling riff or noise. This creates an interplay of voice and texture.
Writing Process: From Concept to First Draft
Use this method whether you are writing in a notebook, on your phone, or in a shack with a single microphone.
- Find the anchor line Write one sentence that captures the entire mood. Make it concrete. Shorter is better.
- Pick one image Choose an object or place that supports the anchor line. Prefer things that suggest scale and time like "furnace", "fjord", or "coal seam".
- Experiment with vowels Speak the anchor line slowly. Hold the most important vowel long. Record your voice on your phone to hear natural sustain points.
- Set a repetition plan Decide how often the anchor line will return. Will it be every minute, every section, or only at the peak?
- Add micro variations Change one word on later repeats or shift tense. Tiny moves maintain interest across long durations.
Example anchor line choices
- The furnace remembers
- We measure time by falling ash
- The glacier does not answer
Prosody and Singing Long Notes
Prosody is the relationship between the natural rhythm of speech and the rhythm of music. In drone metal prosody matters because you will sing long notes where a single stressed syllable needs to carry meaning for many seconds.
Practical prosody checks
- Speak the line at normal speed first. Circle the syllable you naturally stress. That should be your sustain point.
- If the natural stress falls on a consonant cluster change the word so the stress lands on a vowel that you can hold.
- Test vowels for comfort. Hold each candidate vowel on a single note and pick the one that stays in tune without strain.
- Use short words before the held vowel. The fewer the moving parts the cleaner the sustain.
Real life tip: If you cannot hold a vowel for ten seconds in the kitchen without sounding like a dying whale you will need to train. Vocal exercises with a timer help. Take care of the voice when you are working with low register and volume. Hydrate and avoid screaming without support.
Imagery Techniques That Translate to Massive Sound
Because the music is heavy and slow the lyric images should scale up emotionally or physically. Small domestic details can work if you treat them as monuments. Large words alone do not create weight. Specificity does.
Scale shift
Start with a small image and connect it to something enormous. For example a rusted key can become a relic that unlocks a collapsed coastline.
Temporal collapse
Mix time frames. Have a present observation slide into a memory and then into geological time. That confusion of time supports the trance state of drone music.
Material verbs
Use verbs that suggest physical transformation like erode, calcify, liquefy, calcine. These verbs have texture. They feel tactile when spoken and when held.
Rhythm and Syllable Density
Drone metal often allows the lyric to breathe. That means low syllable density and spatial gaps. A line with eight words can be more effective than a crowded couplet that fights the music.
Guidelines
- Favor fewer syllables per bar
- Leave space between lines so the drone becomes another voice
- Use internal rhythm within a sustained line by placing soft consonants as internal beats
Real Example: A Full Draft
Theme: night work at a tunnel that will outlive you
Anchor line: The machine keeps what we leave
Verse
The lamp eats rain at three
My boots learn the echo of coal
We mark the walls with breath and oil
Refrain
The machine keeps what we leave
Bridge style
I count the teeth of the tunnel
One stone remembers my name
The machine remembers more
Note the use of a concrete image the lamp and the machine repeated anchor the lyric. The voice can hold the word machine for several seconds while the band swells. Tiny shifts in later repeats add layers of meaning.
Before and After: Edit Examples
Before: I feel like everything is falling apart
After: The plaster unwraps from the wall like thin paper
Before: The city is old and sad
After: The city rusts at the seams and counts the nights
See how the after lines use concrete images and verbs that materialize decay. They are easier to sing long and they interact with low frequencies better than vague emotional statements.
Vocal Performance Tips
Drone metal vocals vary from whispered chants to cavernous roars. Your lyrical choices should match the performance method.
- Chant style Use short repeated lines and deliver them close to the mic in a flat, almost spoken tone. This creates intimacy inside a wall of sound.
- Clean sustained notes Use open vowels and keep jaw relaxation. Record multiples of the same sustained line to stack and create a choir effect.
- Distorted or growled vocals These can break sustain. Use them sparingly for accents. Make sure the words you scream are the ones you want immediate impact from.
- Breathing Plan breaths between lines. The music will cover small inhales but not long ones. Place breaths where there is space in the arrangement.
Real life scenario: If you are recording in your bedroom with no vocal booth you will get room reflections. Use those reflections as texture. A close whisper stacked three times can sound gigantic when run through reverb and low end flourishes.
Working With the Band or Producer
Lyrics in drone metal are collaborative. The band will build swells that change the meaning of a repeated line. Communicate your intention and be open to sonic reinterpretation.
Useful communication points
- Mark which words are anchor words and need to be audible
- Indicate where you want the voice to sit in the mix for each repeat
- Discuss dynamics so the lyric does not vanish when the amps open up
- Talk about layering. A whispered line under a heavy swell can be more expressive than a shouted one on top of it
Production Awareness for Lyricists
You do not need to know mixing to write good drone metal lyrics but a few production terms help you make safer choices. We explain common acronyms and terms so you know what producers mean.
- DAW stands for digital audio workstation. It is the software where songs are recorded and edited. Examples include Ableton Live, Pro Tools, and Logic Pro. Real life comparison: DAW is like the document you write in for a podcast or essay.
- BPM stands for beats per minute. It measures tempo. Drone metal often uses very low BPM or no strict BPM at all. Think of tempo like the walking speed of the song.
- EQ stands for equalization. It changes the balance of frequencies. Low end can hide vocals. Ask for a vocal carve so your anchor words sit in the mix.
- dB shorthand for decibel. It measures volume. Drone shows can cause dB numbers to spike. Producers manage dB to avoid clipping which is distortion that is usually not intentional.
- Reverb adds space. A long reverb tail can make a single word bloom into a room. Reverb length is a creative choice not just a tool.
Relatable scenario: If your producer says the vocal is getting swallowed by the sub bass they mean the very low frequencies of guitars or bass are masking the vocal. Ask for a low cut on the vocal or a tiny dip in the guitar around the vocal frequency.
Common Mistakes and How to Fix Them
Here are mistakes writers make when moving into drone metal and how to fix them quickly
- Too many words A crowded line fights the sustain. Fix by cutting to the core idea and leaving space.
- Vocal melody that does not match the music If a melody wants to be fast and the band is slow rewrite the melody to suit long notes and open vowels.
- Abstract clichés Lines like nothing matters can sound weak. Fix by adding a small object or place that anchors the emotion.
- Overusing growls If everything is screamed nothing has power. Use vocal dynamics to create moments of impact.
- Forgetting prosody If the stressed syllable falls on an off beat rephrase so the stress matches a stable musical moment.
Exercises to Get Good Fast
These timed drills are designed to get you out of your head and into the right language and shapes
One image ten repeats
Pick an object like a furnace or a pillar. Write ten short lines that mention it. Each repeat must change one small detail. Time: 15 minutes.
Sustain vowel drill
Choose five anchor words with open vowels. Record yourself holding each for 8 seconds on a single note. Listen back to the recordings. Pick the two that sound best in tune and comfortable. Time: 10 minutes.
Space draft
Write a single page where you place two lines then leave a blank line intentionally. Fill the blank line later with a short variation. The aim is to practice breathing in the lyric. Time: 20 minutes.
Room translation
Describe your current room in language that could be used as a lyric. Do not be literal. Find the geological or ritual metaphor inside the room. Time: 10 minutes.
Publishing and Copyright Notes
Lyrics are creative works and are protected by copyright. If you plan to sell music or license tracks make sure your lyrics are properly registered with a performing rights organization. Examples of performing rights organizations include ASCAP and BMI in the United States. These organizations collect royalties when songs are performed publicly or broadcast. Registering protects your income and ensures you get paid when your song is streamed in a cavernous church or in a drone metal festival tent.
How to Keep Lyrics Fresh Across Long Songs
Long songs require sequence and small change. The goal is not to tell a three act story. The goal is to offer tiny narrative or tonal shifts that keep the listener in the same mood while rewarding attention.
- Introduce a new image every two minutes
- Change the delivery for a repeated line for instance whisper the second time and scream the third time
- Vary reverb and effects on your voice to imply distance
- Let instrumental sections reinterpret the last sung line. For example a guitar sustain can mirror the vowel of the vocal and reinforce the lyric
Examples of Drills and Prompts You Can Use Tonight
- Write a two line chorus that you can repeat for five minutes with a one word change on each repeat
- Find three objects in your bag and write one line about each object that connects it to time and weight
- Choose a geological process like erosion and write three lines that give it human intentions
FAQ
What is a drone in music
A drone is a sustained tone or chord that continues for an extended time. It can be produced by guitar feedback sustained keyboards or even vocal chanting. Drones create a stable sonic platform where small changes feel monumental.
Do drone metal lyrics need to rhyme
No. Rhyme is not required. Repetition and ritual are often more effective. If you use rhyme prefer internal or slant rhyme that feels organic rather than a rigid pattern that draws attention away from the atmosphere.
How long should drone metal lyrics be
Length depends on your song. Some drone pieces use a single repeated line for ten minutes. Others use short sets of lines that rotate. The key is to plan variation so the listener has small payoffs while staying in the same mood.
How do I perform vocal parts that last for minutes
Train with breathing exercises hold vowels for increasing durations and practice using diaphragm support. Hydrate and rest your voice. Use projection rather than strain. Record practice sessions to find sustainable techniques for your register.
Can drone metal lyrics be personal
Absolutely. Personal moments translated into ritual language can be profoundly affecting. The trick is to make the personal feel archetypal enough to scale into the music.
Action Plan You Can Use Tonight
- Write one anchor line that captures your emotional center. Keep it under seven words.
- Pick a single concrete image to support that anchor line. It can be a machine or a geological feature.
- Record yourself holding the anchor line on a single vowel for eight seconds. Test three vowels.
- Build a repetition plan. Decide where the anchor line will return and how it will vary
- Do the one image ten repeats drill. Pick the best three lines and place them in order.
- Work with your band. Mark anchor words in the lyric and agree on sections where the instruments answer the voice.
- Record a demo with minimal production. Listen back and remove any line that does not add new texture or new meaning.