Songwriting Advice
How to Write Big Band Lyrics
You want words that fit a swinging band and make people stand up and clap. Big band lyrics are a different animal from indie bedroom songs and from pop hooks that live on TikTok. In a big band tune your lyric must breathe with brass, leave space for saxes to do their thing, match syncopation, and still tell a clear story. This guide will teach you how to write lyrics that sit right on the band chart, give singers rhythmic confidence, and make arrangers want to add a shout chorus just to hear your line again.
Quick Links to Useful Sections
- What Makes Big Band Lyrics Unique
- Core Terms and Acronyms Explained
- Start with the Story or Start with the Groove
- Choose the Right Form for Your Idea
- 32 Bar A A B A
- Verse Chorus Verse Chorus Bridge Chorus
- Twelve Bar Blues with Horn Riff
- Prosody First
- Write for the Singer and for the Band
- Vowel Choice Matters
- Syllable Economy
- Rhyme and Internal Rhyme That Swing
- Imagery That Players Can Play
- Hook Types for Big Band Songs
- Examples: Before and After Lines for Big Band Context
- Write with an Arranger in Mind
- How to Demo for a Big Band
- Common Big Band Lyric Mistakes and How to Fix Them
- Lyric Writing Exercises Specific to Big Band
- Rhythm First Drill
- Horn Picture Drill
- Title as Rallying Cry
- Full Lyric Example With Form Notes
- Working Through Co writing and Splits
- Demo Etiquette With Bands and Bandleaders
- Modernizing Language Without Losing Authenticity
- Performance Tips for Singers on Big Band Lyrics
- Editing Passes That Make a Lyric Road Ready
- Punchy Exercises to Finish a Chorus in 30 Minutes
- How to Get Your Big Band Lyric Heard
- Common Questions Answered
- Can I write big band lyrics if I cannot read music
- Do big band lyrics need to use vintage language
- How long is a typical big band lyric section
- How do I make the band notice my lyric
- What is the best tempo for a big band ballad
Everything here is written for modern songwriters who also love old school swing. Expect practical workflows, quick drills, explainers for terms and acronyms, and real life examples you can steal or remix. We will cover forms, prosody, rhythm, toe tapping syllables, lyric images that read like film frames, collaboration with arrangers, demoing tips, and how to make your lyric land in a section with brass so loud they will feel it in the back rows.
What Makes Big Band Lyrics Unique
Big band songs are performed by a group that usually includes saxophones, trombones, trumpets, a rhythm section with piano guitar bass and drums, and sometimes multiple vocalists. The arrangement is a big part of the personality. A lyric for that setting must do several things at once.
- Fit the form so the words line up with the chart. If the chart is 32 bar A A B A then your words need to respect that structure.
- Groove with syncopation which means that where you put syllables matters more than in straight pop. The band will accent and push off beats.
- Leave room for instrumental statements so an instrumental break can tell part of the story without verbalizing it.
- Speak in images that players can play with dynamically. Bands love lines that suggest a shout chorus or a muted trumpet lick.
- Be singable in a room with loud instruments. That means open vowels and clear stressed words.
Core Terms and Acronyms Explained
If you do not know these words you will be lost at the rehearsal. Here they are in plain language and with a relatable example so you do not feel like you are reading a music history textbook.
- Chart is the musical score or arrangement that the band reads. Think of it like the map the band follows. A singer needs lyrics to fit the map.
- Head means the main theme of the song. In jazz the head is often the composed melody and lyrics if present. It is the hook the band returns to. Imagine the head as the chorus you hum on the way out of the gig.
- AABA is a common 32 bar form. That means you have two similar A sections, then a contrasting B section, then A returns. A is the main idea and B is often called the bridge. If you like movie structure, A is the scene and B is the plot twist.
- Shout chorus is the big loud section in a big band arrangement where everyone plays a punchy riff together. It is the confetti moment. Your lyric should encourage a shout chorus if the singer can land a simple call before it.
- Trading fours is when the band and the drummer trade four bar solos back and forth. Lyrics do not play here unless the singer purposely stops to let it breathe.
- Comping is what the rhythm section does behind the singer. It means accompanying with rhythmic chords. When you write lyrics you must imagine the comping pattern and leave syllable room for it to groove.
- BPM stands for beats per minute. It tells you the speed. Big band tempos vary wildly. A ballad might be 60 BPM. A swing stomp might be 220 BPM. Pick a BPM that supports the lyric mood.
- Voicing is how the arranger stacks notes in the horns. A lyric with tight internal rhyme can sit well under dense voicing. A lyric with long vowels may ask for sparse voicing so lyrics are not swallowed.
Start with the Story or Start with the Groove
There is no single correct starting point. Some writers begin with a lyric idea that is basically a mini movie. Others begin with a rhythmic phrase or a horn riff and build words around that groove. Both work. The important thing is that once you commit to a start you do not pretend the other start does not exist. Test both directions fast so you see what the song really wants.
Relatable scenario
- Start with story. You have a line in your head like I wore your coat to keep your smell. That is cinematic. It suggests a slow tempo, brushes on drums, a tender trumpet solo, and a chorus that sighs. Label the emotion and map it to a tempo range.
- Start with groove. You hear a snare pattern and a horn stab. That suggests a medium uptempo swing. Your lyric should speak short punchy lines that can land between the horn stabs. Think campaign slogan meets late night bar banter.
Choose the Right Form for Your Idea
Big band charts commonly use these forms. Pick one that serves story and groove.
32 Bar A A B A
Classic and elegant. Use when you have a compact narrative and a hook that is worth repeating. Each A is eight bars. The B or bridge offers contrast and a different image. Example scenario: you have a clever title that you want to hear three times.
Verse Chorus Verse Chorus Bridge Chorus
Modern pop fused with big band energy. Use when you want the chorus to hit hard and be chantable. This works well for big bands that fuse swing with contemporary vocals. Example scenario: you want a stadium style shout chorus after the second chorus.
Twelve Bar Blues with Horn Riff
Use for bluesy big band numbers. The lyric can live in the repeating 12 bar cycle and build with small variations. This is great if you want call and response sections and trading fours with the band.
Prosody First
Prosody means placing stresses in the right musical spots. If you do not align natural word stress with the strong beats the line will feel off even if the melody is great. Singers will improvise to fix bad prosody and that can wreck an arranger's chart. Fix this early.
How to do a prosody check
- Speak the line at conversation speed and mark the stressed syllables.
- Map those stresses onto the chart beats. Strong beats are typically the one and the three in a 4 4 bar. In swing feel the one is often heavier but the band will push and pull so test with a metronome set to the intended BPM.
- If a strong word falls on a weak beat move the word or rewrite the phrase. If you must keep the word, change the melody to give it a longer note or move it to an accented syncopation.
Relatable example
Bad line: I will meet you by the corner of thirteen and Pine. That is two heavy words in a clumsy place.
Better line: Meet me at Pine and Thirteenth at midnight. The stress lands cleaner and midnight is a cinematic vowel to sing on.
Write for the Singer and for the Band
These are two separate but overlapping jobs. Singers need lines they can phrase emotionally. Bands need space to insert figures and hits. When you write, ask yourself who is getting the spotlight at each moment.
- When the singer leads keep vowels open and consonants light. The band will comp so the lyric can sit on the top.
- When a horn riffs give the singer a short line or an interjection to tie the riff back to the lyric idea. This keeps narrative cohesion.
- For shout chorus a short call that the band echoes works best. Think of it as a slogan that everyone can clap to.
Vowel Choice Matters
In a room where trombones and trumpets compete with your vowel space you will be grateful for a strong vowel plan. Open vowels like ah oh and ay carry through the band better than clipped vowels like ee or ih. Place your emotional weight on open vowels when the lyric needs to be heard. Use closed vowels for quick passing lines or for percussive effect.
Example
Close vowel line: I feel so free. Might be swallowed at high volume.
Open vowel line: I am wide awake and singing. The long ah and ay will cut through.
Syllable Economy
Big band charts move fast. If you cram too many syllables into a bar the singer will run out of air and the band will start to step on the words. Learn to say more with less. Replace long clauses with tight images and active verbs.
Before: I am so completely and utterly in love with you tonight.
After: I am all in tonight for you.
Rhyme and Internal Rhyme That Swing
Rhyme is your friend but use it like salt. In big band lyrics sprinkle rhymes to create momentum and surprise. Internal rhyme is great for swing because the rhythm can accent a surprise rhyme in the middle of a bar.
Example of internal rhyme
Line: The trumpet winks and the whiskey sinks the evening into night. The internal rhyme of winks and sinks gives the line motion you can play with.
Imagery That Players Can Play
Write images that suggest sound. Drummers and horn players will respond to words that actually feel like instruments. Use verbs and objects that invite musical punctuation. A coat flapping, a streetlight blinking, a cab door slamming these are sounds musicians can accent.
Real life scenario
If you write the line The neon coughs in the rain a drummer might play a light cymbal splash. If you write The trumpet sneers like it knows your secrets the arranger will probably add a muted trumpet figure.
Hook Types for Big Band Songs
- Lyric title hook where the title is the emotional statement and repeats. This is classic and easy to stitch into an A section.
- Punchline hook a witty line that lands at the end of the chorus. Great for swing novelty numbers.
- Melodic hook with lyric tag a memorable instrumental riff that the singer tags with a short phrase. This is the modern big band trick that blends band power with vocal identity.
Examples: Before and After Lines for Big Band Context
Theme Classic regret and in person bravado.
Before: I miss the way you laughed. That is bland and vague.
After: Your laugh left my coffee trembling on the table. The image is physical and the band can accent trembling with a brushed snare.
Theme Playing it cool at the club.
Before: I am pretending not to care.
After: I keep my chin high and my jacket low like I do not notice you watching. The jacket low image gives a physical cue for the horn section to punctuate.
Write with an Arranger in Mind
Big band singers rarely arrange their own charts. If you are writing lyrics for a band you need to make the arranger happy. That means labeling repeatable hooks, suggesting where you want a shout chorus, and including performance notes such as dynamics and vocal effects. Keep notes short and musical. Do not write a novel. The arranger will love specificity not vagueness.
What to include for an arranger
- Section labels like Intro Verse A Chorus Bridge Shout Chorus
- Suggested tempo in BPM
- Vocal range suggestion like low to high notes so the arranger can set the horn keys
- Notes on vocal style such as tongue clicks or spoken phrase
- A sketch of a call and response idea if you want one
How to Demo for a Big Band
Arrangers will hear your demo and decide yes or no. A strong demo does not need to be a full production. It needs to be clear about what you want and confident about how the lyric sits in the form.
Demo checklist
- Use a simple piano or guitar skeleton to prove chord changes and form.
- Record a vocal that demonstrates phrasing. Do not fix everything. A human take shows where the lyric breathes.
- Include a guide for tempo with a click track or a beat reference so the arranger knows whether you imagined slow medium or fast.
- If possible, include a short bar of the instrumental riff you imagine so the arranger can hear how it fits with the lyric.
Common Big Band Lyric Mistakes and How to Fix Them
- Too many syllables Fix by cutting to the noun and the verb. Keep modifiers for lines that need color.
- Awkward prosody Fix by speaking lines at normal speed and moving stressed words to strong beats.
- Weak images Fix with sensory specifics. Replace general words with objects that have attitude.
- Clashing vowels Fix by placing open vowels on the strongest notes and closed vowels on passing notes.
- Over explaining Fix by trusting the band to tell some of the story. Let horns say the rest.
Lyric Writing Exercises Specific to Big Band
Rhythm First Drill
- Set a metronome at the BPM you want for the song.
- Clap a groove you hear for eight bars and record it.
- Speak nonsense syllables over the groove focusing on placement not meaning for ten minutes.
- Mark the moments that feel like a hook and turn those into real words.
Horn Picture Drill
- Imagine a solo trumpet line. Hum it for eight bars.
- Write one phrase that the singer can drop in after the line. Keep it short and cheeky.
- Repeat the phrase later as a call that the band completes.
Title as Rallying Cry
- Write a short title no more than four words.
- Make three alternate titles that mean the same thing but use different vowels.
- Pick the title that feels the most singable and place it on the last bar of the chorus.
Full Lyric Example With Form Notes
Tempo 120 BPM. Form: Intro 4 bars Horn motif Verse A 8 bars Verse A repeat 8 bars Bridge B 8 bars Final A 8 bars Shout chorus 8 bars Outro 4 bars
Title: Back Alley Carousel
Intro Horn motif on two short stabs
Verse A
Streetlight folding like a paper fan
Your coat smells like rain and old brass bands
Taxi laughs and coughs a sleepy tune
I count the seconds under a neon moon
Verse A repeat
Your laugh wears shoes that click on the curb
My pockets full of cigarette words
We trade our silences like cards at play
You place your heart where my wallet lays
Bridge B
Spin me slow through the alley of our names
We skimp on promises and burn the frames
Hold my hat where the midnight whispers loud
Let the brass confess what we keep proud
Final A
Streetlight folding like a paper fan
Your coat smells like rain and old brass bands
Taxi laughs and coughs a sleepy tune
I count the seconds under a neon moon
Shout chorus Band shouts motif Lines repeat by singer with band echo
Back alley carousel keep turning me around
Back alley carousel keep my feet off the ground
Outro Horn motif then soft piano tag
Notes: Place title on the final line of chorus as a vocal punch. Arrange a muted trumpet fill on the bridge second bar. Keep vowels open on words like carousel and around. Leave space for a trombone lick after second A.
Working Through Co writing and Splits
If you are co writing the lyric with an arranger or another songwriter you will need to decide splits early. Splits mean how much ownership each contributor has. Be reasonable and decide before sending the lyric to a band. A common split structure is 50 percent for music and 50 percent for lyric when both are original. If the arranger changes melody or harmony significantly the split may change. Use a simple email agreement and confirm before the first paid rehearsal. This avoids drama and keeps the focus on the music.
Demo Etiquette With Bands and Bandleaders
When you send your lyric demo to a big band remember they get more submissions than they have rehearsal hours. Be concise. Provide a short PDF with lyrics and form labels. Include tempo and a brief note about where you imagined the shout chorus. If you have a reference recording play it for them before rehearsal rather than live. That shows respect for rehearsal time and keeps the band excited not frustrated.
Modernizing Language Without Losing Authenticity
You can write a modern big band lyric that does not feel like a museum piece. Use current slang sparingly. The more specific the image the less dated the lyric will feel. Replace tired phrases like heart of gold with a small modern object and an action. Example replace heart of gold with last call receipt folded into a pocket. That is vivid and has attitude.
Performance Tips for Singers on Big Band Lyrics
- Project vowels. The room will be loud. Let your open vowels do the heavy lifting.
- Use articulation for consonant punches. Short consonants like t k and p read well against stabs.
- Breathe early. Plan breaths before long horn phrases or after lines that demand a shout chorus.
- Talk to the band. Eye contact with the drummer or the lead trumpet keeps timing tight when the arrangement is full of syncopation.
Editing Passes That Make a Lyric Road Ready
- Prosody pass speak every line and align stresses to beats.
- Vowel pass circle open vowels and ensure the emotional peaks use them.
- Image pass replace abstractions with camera ready objects.
- Space pass remove words where horns will say the same idea instrumentally.
- Range pass confirm your vocal reach is safe for the singer and note if transposition will be needed.
Punchy Exercises to Finish a Chorus in 30 Minutes
- Write your title on top of a page. Under it write one sentence that explains the whole idea in plain speech.
- Set a metronome to a tempo you feel. Clap a simple groove for eight bars.
- Sing the title on different vowels until one feels natural. Lock that vowel and phrase a two bar melodic tag around it with nonsense syllables.
- Replace nonsense with words. Keep only the words that align with the clap accents.
- Trim to one repeat and one twist. You just made a chorus the band can shout.
How to Get Your Big Band Lyric Heard
- Network at local jam sessions and ask bandleaders for a read through. Live rehearsal is the fastest way to test prosody.
- Send a clear demo and a PDF lyric with form labels. Keep it to one page if possible.
- Offer to pay for a rehearsal slot if you are asking a working band to sight read for you. Time is money.
- Volunteer to sing at a rehearsal. Singers who bring their own material are valuable assets to bands.
Common Questions Answered
Can I write big band lyrics if I cannot read music
Yes. You can write lyrics and sing them over a simple chord grid. Many lyricists are not trained readers. The arranger will translate your melody to the chart. Still it helps to provide a clear demo with tempo and a sense of phrasing so the arranger does not guess.
Do big band lyrics need to use vintage language
No. Use modern language. Focus on strong imagery and singable vowels. A modern word used well beats a vintage line that sounds like a costume party.
How long is a typical big band lyric section
Many big band sections follow 8 bar phrases because they fit 32 bar forms and 12 bar blues. Think in units of eight bars. If you write a verse that is 12 bars the band will likely rearrange it. Keep your phrases tidy and predictable unless you want a creative twist and you tell the arranger.
How do I make the band notice my lyric
Write a strong hook, give the band a clear call, and demo with an idea for instrumentation. Bands love lines they can echo. If your title can be a two bar call the arranger will likely build a riff around it.
What is the best tempo for a big band ballad
Ballads range. A slow ballad may be around 60 to 80 BPM. A medium swing ballad may sit around 90 to 110 BPM. Pick the tempo that lets the singer breathe on long vowels and gives horns room for expression.