Songwriting Advice
How to Write a Song About Alien Encounters
You want a song that makes people look up from their phones and wonder if their neighbor just abducted a synth. Maybe you want to write a spooky anthem, a tearful first contact ballad, a comedy about backseat UFO sightings, or a political track using aliens as a metaphor for feeling othered. This guide gives you ideas, craft moves, production hacks, and actual exercises so you can write a song that lands hard whether you are making bedroom indie, campy pop, or radio ready alt rock.
Quick Links to Useful Sections
- Why an alien encounter song works
- Pick your angle before you reach for the synth
- First contact wonder
- Abduction horror
- Alien love story
- Conspiracy party banger
- Political or social allegory
- Choose perspective and narrator voice
- Find the one idea that your chorus will promise
- Structures that serve alien stories
- Structure A: Verse Pre Chorus Chorus Verse Pre Chorus Chorus Bridge Chorus
- Structure B: Intro Hook Verse Chorus Verse Chorus Post Chorus Bridge Chorus
- Structure C: Intro Verse Chorus Verse Chorus Instrumental Break Chorus Outro
- Write a chorus that clicks like a radar ping
- Verses as camera shots not essays
- Use lyric devices that fit the cosmic tone
- Ring phrase
- List escalation
- Callback
- Unreliable narrator device
- Rhyme choices that avoid cheeseball sci fi
- Melody strategies for alien songs
- Prosody and why it matters
- Sound design and production tricks to make it alien
- Tools and acronyms explained
- Textures to try
- Production scenarios
- Arrangement moves that tell a story
- Examples: lyrical before and after
- Exercises to write fast and true
- Object as probe
- Vowel pass
- Time stamp drill
- Found audio rewrite
- Perspective swap
- Melody diagnostics that save hours
- Vocal performance notes
- Polish like you are in a government clean room
- Ways to avoid sounding like a sci fi B movie
- Promotion ready ideas
- Common mistakes and fixes
- Songwriting checklist you can copy
- FAQ
Everything here is written for artists who want results fast. You will get angles, a clear writing workflow, melody and lyric craft, arrangement blueprints, and production tricks that scream spaceship but still let the chorus stick. We explain jargon like DAW and prosody. We use real world scenarios so you can stop thinking and start doing. Bring your curiosity and your terrible late night theories about Area 51.
Why an alien encounter song works
Alien content taps into big emotions: awe, fear, loneliness, betrayal, longing, conspiracy, and wonder. That range lets you choose a tone and then commit. You can flavor the same premise many ways. The secret is picking one emotional promise and delivering it with clear imagery, a sticky melodic gesture, and a production palette that supports the idea.
- A single emotional promise that a listener can text to a friend and feel clever about.
- Strong sensory images so listeners can picture the UFO, the humming, the lights, the smell of ozone.
- Memorable melodic motif that acts like a beacon. A short motif is easier to hum than an encyclopedia entry.
- Production that signals sci fi without becoming cartoon. Think textures not clichés.
Pick your angle before you reach for the synth
Alien songs work best when the writer chooses an angle early. The angle is your lens. It gives direction for lyrics, melody, and arrangement. Here are the most effective angles and what they ask from you.
First contact wonder
Feels like standing on a cliff and being handed a new map. Use wide vowels and sustained notes in the chorus. Lyrics should include sky imagery and tiny human reactions. Production can be spacious with long reverb tails.
Abduction horror
Short notes, displaced prosody, surprise changes in the chorus. Use staccato rhythmic hooks. Describe dislocation with tactile detail. Production can be claustrophobic with close mic vocals and sudden digital glitches.
Alien love story
Make the alien a metaphor for someone who is different and beloved. Keep it intimate and tender. Use warm pads, intimate lead vocal, and personal details that root the cosmic in the kitchen sink.
Conspiracy party banger
Turn the topic into a club song that riffs on paranoia and memes. Use a chanty chorus, short repeated phrases, and production that invites crowd call and response.
Political or social allegory
Use the alien as an outsider to explore immigration, racism, mental health, or being a misfit. Keep specifics to make it feel true and not preachy. Soulful melodies and a serious tone can amplify the message.
Choose perspective and narrator voice
Decide who is telling the story. Choices matter.
- First person gives immediacy. Use present tense to drop listeners into the event.
- Second person makes listeners suspects or recipients. Use it for confrontational or intimate songs.
- Third person allows cinematic distance. Good for narrative, anthology, or comedic takes.
- Collective we makes the chorus a chant or anthem. Great for party songs about conspiracies.
Real life scenario: You are in your car at 3 a.m. Roadside LEDs are blinking. You see a light hover. You write the chorus in first person because you want the listener to feel the immediate queasy euphoria of seeing something impossible. The verse can be third person to set scene. Mixing perspectives can be cool but do it deliberately or people will be confused by the emotions.
Find the one idea that your chorus will promise
Before you write any line, answer a simple question. What do you want the chorus to promise? This is your core promise. Keep it short and plain speech.
Examples of core promises
- I was taken but I came back different.
- They are not here to hurt us they want to listen.
- We blinked and the sky rewired itself.
- My lover is literally an alien and I am fine with it.
Turn that sentence into a title or a short chorus line. The chorus should say it plainly and then give a twist. A good chorus is textable. It should survive being reduced to a tweet or a TikTok caption.
Structures that serve alien stories
Pick a structure that supports your angle and keeps momentum. Here are three reliable forms and how to use them for this theme.
Structure A: Verse Pre Chorus Chorus Verse Pre Chorus Chorus Bridge Chorus
Use this for emotional stories like first contact or alien love. The pre chorus builds dread or wonder and the chorus hits the promise. The bridge provides a reveal or a change in perspective.
Structure B: Intro Hook Verse Chorus Verse Chorus Post Chorus Bridge Chorus
This is great for club or meme songs. Use an intro hook with a vocal chop that sounds like static and returns as the track tag. The post chorus can be a chant that fans sing along to at shows.
Structure C: Intro Verse Chorus Verse Chorus Instrumental Break Chorus Outro
Use this for instrumental heavy or cinematic tracks. The instrumental break is where you go full spaceship and let sound design tell the story.
Write a chorus that clicks like a radar ping
Your chorus is the thesis. It needs a short direct line that listeners can sing back. Keep vowel choices in mind. Open vowels like ah oh and ay are easier to hold and sing. Use a leap into the title if you want a lift. Repeat the title once or twice for earworm power.
Chorus recipe
- State the core promise in one short sentence.
- Repeat or paraphrase it for emphasis.
- Add a small twist or image to land the emotion.
Example chorus seed
I saw the light. It named me by my old street. I came home with new hands and the same bad jokes.
Verses as camera shots not essays
Verses should supply concrete details that make the chorus feel earned. Avoid explaining cosmic rules. Show small human actions that imply the larger event. Use time crumbs like three a m or Tuesday night. Use place crumbs like the gas station on Route 9 or the balcony by the dumpster.
Before and after lines
Before: The night was weird and I felt scared.
After: The liquor store clock blinked three a m. I counted receipts until a light counted me back.
Real life scenario: You are writing about an abduction. Instead of telling us you were frightened describe how your jacket tasted like coins and metal, how your left shoe had a receipt folded into it, how the dog refused to look at the sky. Those concrete details make listeners feel the loss of normal more than any adjective can.
Use lyric devices that fit the cosmic tone
Ring phrase
Start and end the chorus with the same short line. It creates memory. Example: Do not blink. Do not blink.
List escalation
Use three items that build in weirdness. Example: lights on the freeway lights on the river lights inside my coffee.
Callback
Bring a line from verse one back in verse two with a small change. It makes the story feel circular. Example: You said I was gone. I came back with a pocket of night that still plays your name.
Unreliable narrator device
Let the narrator doubt. Use a line like Maybe they dream about us too to leave ambiguity. That can be haunting and clever.
Rhyme choices that avoid cheeseball sci fi
Perfect rhymes can feel forced if everything is tight. Blend perfect rhymes with family rhymes and internal rhymes. Family rhyme uses similar vowel or consonant families without an exact match. Use a perfect rhyme at the emotional turn for impact.
Example family chain
sky buy eye high sigh
Melody strategies for alien songs
- Signature interval Pick one small interval that repeats like a motif. A minor third can feel eerie. A fourth can feel open and heroic.
- Leap into the title Use a small leap into the chorus title to create lift. The ear loves forward movement.
- Vowel pass Improvised melody on vowels only. Record two minutes and mark the moments you want to repeat. This helps find singable shapes without words getting in the way.
- Range management Keep verses lower and more conversational. Save the highest notes for the chorus and the bridge reveal.
Prosody and why it matters
Prosody means how the natural stress of spoken language aligns with your melody. If a strong word falls on a weak beat you will feel friction even if you cannot explain it. Speak each line out loud at normal speed. Circle stressed syllables. Make sure those stresses land on strong musical beats or longer notes. If they do not, rewrite or move the melody until they align.
Sound design and production tricks to make it alien
Production can sell the concept immediately. You do not need a thousand dollars of gear. You need intent. Here are practical tips and what the terms mean.
Tools and acronyms explained
- DAW This stands for digital audio workstation. It is the software where you arrange, record, and mix like Ableton Live Logic Pro or FL Studio.
- BPM Beats per minute. It sets the tempo. A slow 70 BPM may feel like a nightmare. A fast 120 BPM could be party paranoia.
- MIDI Musical Instrument Digital Interface. It is the data your keyboard sends to virtual instruments. Use it to sketch synth lines.
- EQ Equalization. It shapes frequency content. Remove mud in the 200 to 400 Hertz range and add air above 8 kilohertz for shimmer.
- ADSR Attack decay sustain release. It describes how a sound behaves over time. Long attack can make a sound swell like a spaceship appearing.
Textures to try
- Vocal doubling and pitch shift Record your vocal then copy it and tune it up or down slightly. It creates a sense of otherness. Be careful to keep the lead clear.
- Granular delay and stuttering Use small audio grain effects to make consonants shimmer like radio static.
- Theremin style lead Use a portamento synth patch with wide reverb for a classic eerie effect. There is nothing wrong with leaning into tropes if you give them a modern twist.
- Reverse reverbs Reverse a vocal ad lib and place it before a chorus to sound like memory or interference.
- Low end sub bass Use a sub that hums under the verse. Make it felt rather than heard to create unease.
Production scenarios
Scenario one: You want a tender first contact ballad. Use a clean piano with long reverb. Add a pad that comes in at the chorus with slow attack. Keep percussion minimal. Let vocal breath and human cracks tell the story.
Scenario two: You want a glitchy abduction horror. Use staccato percussion, heavy automation on pitch and formant, abrupt cuts, and close mic distorted vocals. Use white noise sweeps to mimic engine noise. Place harsh consonants forward in the mix so they sound like static.
Scenario three: You want a club conspiracy banger. Use a driving four on the floor beat. Add a chopped vocal hook that repeats a short phrase like They know or Look up. Keep bass heavy and vocal hook minimal so it loops like an earworm.
Arrangement moves that tell a story
- Intro as report Start with a found audio clip, a radio report, or a voicemail. It sets the world.
- Verse as scene Keep instruments sparse. Let the vocal be close so listeners feel confiding.
- Pre chorus as rising suspicion Add percussion or a synth riser. Shorter words and quick rhythm increase tension.
- Chorus as contact Let the arrangement bloom with pads, harmonies, or the signature motif.
- Bridge as reveal Strip everything back to voice and one instrument or go full sci fi with a synth solo. The bridge is your reveal moment.
Examples: lyrical before and after
Theme: Abduction memory that feels fake and true at once.
Before: I woke up after they took me. It felt weird.
After: The pillow still smells like warm pennies. My timestamp says three am but my phone refuses to tell me the date.
Theme: First contact that changes identity.
Before: The ship touched me and I was different.
After: They pressed a light on my palm. It taught me the word for hunger in a language I had never eaten.
Theme: A messy break up where the ex is labeled alien because they were distant.
Before: You were distant like an alien.
After: You left your shampoo at my place but your fingerprints were all in different seasons. The dog stopped eating like you left in winter and never came back.
Exercises to write fast and true
Object as probe
Pick one object in your room. Write four lines where that object is used by the alien. Ten minutes. Example prompt: The toaster reports back what it saw.
Vowel pass
Play two chords in your DAW. Sing on pure vowels for two minutes and mark the moments that want to repeat. Those gestures become your melodic motif.
Time stamp drill
Write a chorus that includes a specific time and a day. The tiny detail makes the event feel anchored. Five minutes.
Found audio rewrite
Pull a five second radio clip or voicemail. Use its words as the hook. Build a verse that explains where that clip came from. Fifteen minutes.
Perspective swap
Write a verse in first person and rewrite it in third person. See what new metaphors appear. Ten minutes.
Melody diagnostics that save hours
- If the chorus feels weak raise it a third and add a short leap into the title.
- If the verse is boring add rhythmic variety with syncopation or internal rhyme.
- If prosody feels off speak the line and mark stresses. Move them to beats or change the word.
Vocal performance notes
Alien songs often work best with vocal choices that reflect the concept. You can be fragile or confident. The trick is to commit.
- Intimacy Sing as if you are whispering to one person. This works for first contact and love stories.
- Detached cool For conspiracy bangers lean into deadpan vocal delivery.
- Horror screams Use short, controlled bursts. Do not throw your voice away. Record multiple takes at lower volume and layer them for intensity.
- Effects as character Use a vocoder or formant shift to suggest the alien singing back. Keep it sparse so it feels like a character cameo.
Polish like you are in a government clean room
- Lyric lock Run the crime scene edit. Replace abstractions with concrete details. Add a time or place crumb.
- Melody lock Confirm the chorus sits higher or more open than the verse. Make sure the title lands on a long note or a strong beat.
- Arrangement map Print a one page map of sections with time stamps. Make sure the first hook appears within the first minute.
- Demo pass Record a simple demo with the vocal, a reference pad, and the hook instrument. Keep it honest.
- Feedback loop Play for three trusted listeners. Do not explain anything. Ask one question. What line did you remember most.
- Last mile Fix only the change that raises clarity or emotional impact. Stop before you invent problems in pursuit of perfection.
Ways to avoid sounding like a sci fi B movie
- Avoid jargon overload You do not need to describe warp cores or Theta protocols unless you are satirizing. Keep language grounded.
- Use human detail The alien encounter is a scaffold for human emotion. Use actions and sensations rather than exposition.
- Beware of melodrama A single concrete image will hit harder than a paragraph of adjectives.
- Check your rhyme Do not force a rhyme that makes the line absurd. Replace it with a family rhyme or change the cadence.
Promotion ready ideas
- TikTok hook Make a 6 to 15 second clip of the chorus or the call back. Use a visual that sells the concept like a flashlight in a cereal box or a dog in a tinfoil hat.
- Visuals For streaming platforms create a thumbnail with a strong image. A simple silhouette under a light beam works better than a collage of stock planets.
- Live Teach the crowd a chant or a simple call and response that references the alien line so shows become participatory.
- Remix opportunities Make stems available so producers can make club or ambient remixes. Clubs want the chant. Cinematic playlists want the pad heavy version.
Common mistakes and fixes
- Too many ideas at once Fix by committing to one emotional promise and letting details orbit that promise.
- Vague cosmic language Fix by swapping abstractions for tangible objects and actions.
- Over doing the sci fi sound Fix by choosing one alien texture and using it as a character rather than a wall of effects.
- Chorus that does not lift Fix by changing melody range, simplifying language, and adding a harmonic or arrangement elevation.
Songwriting checklist you can copy
- Write one clear sentence that states the chorus promise. Make it the title or the chorus line.
- Pick the angle and the narrator perspective.
- Make a two chord loop and do a vowel pass to find a motif.
- Draft the chorus with short repeatable lines and an image that grounds the cosmic.
- Write verse one as a set of camera shots with object and time crumbs.
- Use a pre chorus to raise tension and point at the title without saying it.
- Design one alien sound and place it as a motif in the intro and chorus.
- Record a demo. Ask three people what line they remember most. Fix only what hurts clarity.
FAQ
How do I make an alien theme feel original?
Originality lives in detail and purpose. Use personal objects places and sensations. Anchor the fantastic in the domestic. A single fresh image like A credit card stuck to the ceiling fan will feel more original than a paragraph of invented tech. Use the alien as metaphor when you want emotional depth and literal when you want spectacle.
What vocal effects make voices sound alien?
Use pitch shift for slight detuning. Use a vocoder when you want machine like clarity. Use formant shifting to change vowel color without changing pitch. Add a subtle chorus and long reverb tails for distance. Remember that effects are characters. Use one or two and place them sparingly so the lead vocal remains intelligible.
Do I need expensive gear to make it sound sci fi?
No. Most DAWs have delay reverb and pitch shift plugins that can achieve professional results. Use a cheap mic with good performance practice. Layering and thoughtful arrangement matter more than a single boutique synth. You can make something believable with free or low cost plugins and smart mixing choices.
How do I write a chorus people will sing back?
Keep it short use strong vowels and repeat the title. Place the title on a note that is easy to sing and repeat it. Use a ring phrase and give the chorus a simple rhythmic foot to latch onto. Test it on strangers by humming it through a grocery store playlist in your head. If it survives, you have a hook.
What tempo should a song about alien encounters have?
There is no rule. Slow tempos allow space for awe and dread. Medium tempos around 90 to 110 beats per minute can create anthemic feeling. Fast tempos make the concept playful or frantic. Choose based on emotion not expectations.
How literal should the lyrics be?
Both literal and metaphorical approaches work. Literal lyrics create spectacle and are great for cinematic or comedic songs. Metaphor allows emotional depth and social commentary. You can combine both by telling a literal story on the surface while letting the underlying line speak to a human truth.
How do I avoid cliche alien imagery?
Avoid overused tropes unless you are being ironic. Instead of describing the ship write about the smell the memory leaves which might be cold pennies or fried batteries. Use small domestic images to ground the cosmic. That contrast makes the song feel fresh.
What instruments create an alien vibe?
Synth pads long reverb guitars bowed guitars theremin like leads granular texture and processed vocals are reliable choices. Use unexpected acoustic instruments like kalimba or glass bottles processed through reverb to make textures feel unfamiliar.
How can I make an abduction scene believable in a song?
Focus on sensory detail and time fragments. Use short choppy lines in the verse to mimic disorientation. Use sudden silence and then a single sustained vocal note to represent the moment of lift off. Keep the narrative tight and avoid exposition explaining the alien tech.
How do I make a comedy alien song land?
Commit to the joke. Use specific absurd details and short punchy lines. Keep the chorus chantable. Use deadpan delivery or exaggerated vibrato for contrast. Visuals and performance matter a lot for comedy so plan a memorable video or live stunt.