Songwriting Advice
Erykah Badu - On & On Song Lyric Breakdown For Songwriters
This is your fast pass into the genius of Erykah Badu On & On. If you write songs and want to steal ideas ethically from a master, you are in the right place. We will pull this song apart like a sax solo at three in the morning. You will get the lyric anatomy, the melodic moves, the prosody secrets, the production choices that support the words, and practical exercises you can use the next time you write. Expect humor, real world scenarios, and language you can actually use in a songroom.
Quick Links to Useful Sections
- Why On & On Still Matters
- Song Snapshot
- First Listen Checklist For Songwriters
- Line by Line Lyric Breakdown
- Opening lines and setup
- The chorus as ethos
- Verse two and the camera detail
- Bridge and the moral pivot
- Imagery That Works
- Prosody and Why It Makes The Lyric Feel Natural
- Rhyme Choices and Internal Rhyme
- Melodic Economy and Vocal Delivery
- Production Choices That Support Lyric
- Lyric Themes And How They Translate To Songwriting Lessons
- Songwriting Exercises Inspired By On & On
- Exercise 1 Voice as Observer
- Exercise 2 Internal Rhyme Pass
- Exercise 3 Prosody Surgery
- How To Use The Song Ethically In Your Writing
- Real World Scenarios For Applying These Lessons
- Common Questions Songwriters Ask About This Song
- What makes the chorus feel like wisdom instead of preaching
- Why does the song feel so intimate
- How can I make my chorus feel like a proverb
- Lyric Editing Checklist
- Example Rewrites Inspired By The Song
- Songwriter Action Plan You Can Use Today
- Frequently Asked Questions
This guide speaks to millennial and Gen Z songwriters who want lessons that do not feel like a textbook. We explain any music term and acronym so nothing reads like secret code. We will also give you real life prompts so the ideas stick. If you know the song already you will hear it differently after this. If you do not know the song, you will want to listen immediately and take notes.
Why On & On Still Matters
Released in 1997 from Erykah Badu debut album Baduizm, On & On announced a voice that felt both ancient and brand new. The song sits in a soul tradition while speaking like a late night philosopher with a side of blunt truth. For songwriters the track is a goldmine because the lyric is specific but not heavy handed. The message is spiritual and street level at the same time. The melody is relaxed but turns sharp at exactly the right moments. There is a lesson in restraint here. Less is often more.
Context is important. 1997 was a time when neo soul artists were reshaping R and B. R and B stands for rhythm and blues. Neo soul fused classic soul values with modern production and jazz influence. This matters for lyric tone because it allowed room for poetic lines inside groove oriented arrangements. Understanding context helps you mimic the feeling without copying the words.
Song Snapshot
- Artist: Erykah Badu
- Title: On & On
- Album: Baduizm
- Released: 1997
- Key themes: spiritual karma, self acceptance, cyclical living, personal responsibility
- Instrumentation highlights: warm electric piano, elastic bass, mellow percussion, subtle string pad
First Listen Checklist For Songwriters
Before you analyze we want you to listen actively. Play the song once and answer these quick questions. They focus your ear on the elements we will unpack.
- What is the emotional temperature of the performance? Is it angry, amused, resigned, celebratory?
- Which lyric line feels like the thesis of the song?
- Where do you hear space used as a musical element? Note rests or breathy vocal moments.
- What single melodic gesture sticks in your head after one listen?
These answers will guide how you borrow the technique rather than the exact lyric. Copying technique is the point. Copying text is plagiarism. We teach craft not theft.
Line by Line Lyric Breakdown
We will go through the opening verse, the chorus, and the subsequent verses. I will quote lines for clarity then explain the craft move beneath each quote. Keep a pen ready. Replace quoted text with your own details when you try the exercises later.
Opening lines and setup
In the first verse Erykah introduces voice, stance, and a worldview. The opening phrase establishes character. The delivery sounds casual. It sounds like a conversation with the universe. That tone matters for the rest of the song.
Songwriters should note how quickly the song sets an expectation. The opening lines do three jobs at once. They present a personality, a rule book, and a hint of humor. That triple hit keeps the listener curious and grounded. For your songs try to set voice, promise, and a small complication within the first two lines.
The chorus as ethos
The chorus feels like a proverb. Instead of repeating the phrase like a pop chant, Badu layers meaning into the line through subtle prosody and melodic emphasis. A chorus is not just a catchy lyric. It can serve as the song morality. In On & On the chorus is both a personal confession and a universal observation. That double use gives the line replay value. You can text it to your friend at 2 AM and it will land.
Notice the placement of the chorus title on long vowels and how the melodic contour supports the phrasing. The melody often rests on consonant or vowel shapes that amplify the word weight. When you write a chorus, choose a title that benefits from an open vowel shape if you want it to feel singable. Open vowels are sounds like ah and oh. They sit well on longer notes and are easy to repeat in a crowd.
Verse two and the camera detail
Later verses supply camera details that transform a philosophical chorus into lived experience. You see objects and small actions. This prevents the song from becoming preachy. Instead it feels witness like. For example small actions like brushing hair or picking up a phone anchor the listener into a life they can imagine. When you write, give the universe one or two specific props that say more than a paragraph of explanation.
Bridge and the moral pivot
The bridge is the place where the song can change perspective. In On & On the bridge offers a mild shock to the narrative. It is a reveal with emotional logic. A bridge does not need to be dramatic to be effective. A subtle turn in pronoun or tense can feel like a revelation if the verses prepared the ground. Songwriters should use bridges to lean into consequence of the chorus promise rather than just repeating the chorus in a new key.
Imagery That Works
Erykah uses images that feel both mundane and symbolic. That is a powerful combo. For example an image of walking with a purpose can double as a spiritual metaphor for destiny. This technique lets the lyric be literal and metaphorical at the same time. The listener can choose their level of engagement. That choice increases replay value.
Three pragmatic ways to use this technique in your own writing
- Pick one ordinary object and imagine its personality. Turn the object into a co conspirator in your story.
- Write one line where the object performs an unusual action. The unexpected verb upgrades the image.
- Place a time crumb. A specific time or weekday makes the scene feel lived in.
Real life scenario. You are at a coffee shop and you notice someone stirring their drink with a pen. That small odd detail is a tiny human movie. Use that instead of saying how you feel. It will feel fresher and more memorable.
Prosody and Why It Makes The Lyric Feel Natural
Prosody is the alignment of natural speech rhythm with musical rhythm. If a lyric reads well but feels wrong when sung, check prosody. In On & On prosody is immaculate. Consonants and stressed syllables land on strong beats. Unstressed syllables occupy the in between. This gives the performance a conversational feel without the words slipping off the groove.
Exercise to train prosody
- Pick one line from a song you love.
- Speak it aloud at normal speed. Mark stressed syllables.
- Sing the line over a very simple beat. If stressed syllables do not align with strong beats, tweak the line or move words until natural stress and strong beats match.
Real life scenario. In a songwriting session you have a killer phrase but the singer keeps rushing it. You will fix that by moving the key word to a longer note or by rephrasing the sentence so natural speech stress lands on the beat. That is a prosody save. It takes five minutes and you will sound like a pro.
Rhyme Choices and Internal Rhyme
On & On does not need obvious end rhyme to be memorable. It uses internal rhyme and repeated consonant sounds to create musicality in the lines. Internal rhyme is a rhyme that happens within a line rather than at the end. This allows lyricists to avoid forced end rhymes that damage the honesty of a line.
Example technique you can use today
- Write a line without worrying about rhyme.
- Read it aloud and circle words with similar consonant or vowel sounds.
- Add one optional internal rhyme to create motion. Keep it optional so you do not over polish the soul out of the line.
Melodic Economy and Vocal Delivery
Erykah often sings like she is telling you a private story. The melody in On & On sits in a comfortable range. It rarely strains to show off. That restraint is a deliberate aesthetic choice. When a melody sits in a comfortable range listeners relate to it quickly. Save your biggest jumps for emotional turns.
Two songwriting moves from the melody
- Keep verse lines mostly stepwise to feel conversational. Use small leaps in the chorus to create lift.
- Use rhythmic space. Silence is as important as sound. Let phrases breathe. Those pauses feel intimate and make the next phrase land harder.
Scenario. You are demoing a song in your bedroom and you think a huge run will sell the song. Hold back. Try a quieter delivery first. The production can add power later. Often the quieter demo is closer to what will emotionally connect on first listen.
Production Choices That Support Lyric
On & On uses warm, sparse production that never competes with the voice. The instruments create a bed that supports the lyric like a soft couch. The mix keeps space around the vocal. Especially in the chorus, subtle pads and background textures widen the sonic field without crowding the lead.
Production takeaway for writers
- When writing consider how much room the vocal needs. If the lyric is dense, leave more low mids for the voice to sit in.
- Use a signature sound that returns. In On & On it might be a particular electric piano tone. That small consistency becomes the song character.
- Think about dynamics. A small production change at the chorus can feel like a lift without changing the chord progression.
Lyric Themes And How They Translate To Songwriting Lessons
On & On is about cyclical life patterns and acceptance. It does not preach. It observes. For a songwriter this suggests an approach where the lyric invites the listener to witness rather than instruct. That is a healthier posture for modern listeners who are suspicious of authority but open to companionship.
How to write using this posture
- Make your chorus the observation not the command. Example. Instead of saying You must change, say I keep circling and learning.
- Write verses as case studies. Show one episode that proves the chorus statement.
- Use a friendly narrator voice. Imagine you are writing a letter to someone you love but are not trying to fix them.
Songwriting Exercises Inspired By On & On
These are practical drills you can use during a session or on a bus. They will help you internalize the techniques used in the song.
Exercise 1 Voice as Observer
- Write a single line that states a recurring life pattern. Keep it short and plain.
- Write three two line scenes that demonstrate the pattern with objects and actions.
- Make a chorus line that restates the pattern as a proverb. Keep the chorus melody comfortable and repeatable.
Exercise 2 Internal Rhyme Pass
- Take a verse you wrote and read it aloud slowly.
- Add one internal rhyme per line. Do not change meaning. Just add sound ties.
- Record it and listen for flow. If the line becomes sing songy, remove the extra rhyme.
Exercise 3 Prosody Surgery
- Pick a line that feels off when sung.
- Speak it naturally and circle stresses.
- Move a word or change a syllable until the stressed words land on strong beats when sung.
Do these exercises three times a week and you will notice lines fall into place faster. Real world songwriting needs repetition. These drills are mental pushups.
How To Use The Song Ethically In Your Writing
Influence is how music evolves. Copying lyrics is not influence. It is plagiarism. If you love On & On use it as a template for voice and structure. Replace spiritual references with your own lived references. Borrow the pattern not the words. If you plan to interpolate or sample a recording, consult a music lawyer and clear rights. Interpolation means taking a melody or lyric and re recording it in your new song. Sampling means using the actual recorded audio in your song. Both require permission if they are recognizable. It is fine to be inspired. It is not fine to rip verbatim.
Real World Scenarios For Applying These Lessons
Scenario one. You are writing a song about breaking a cycle of bad relationships. Use the On & On approach by making the chorus a resigned observation. Then write two verses as small scenes. In verse one show a pattern at home. In verse two show a pattern on the road. Keep the chorus simple and singable.
Scenario two. You are producing for an artist who wants a soulful vibe. Avoid overdoing the drums. Use space. Add one signature sound that can be used in the intro and as a motif. Keep vocal doubles sparse and let the lead breathe. The producer is the listener. Always ask what helps the lyric breathe.
Common Questions Songwriters Ask About This Song
What makes the chorus feel like wisdom instead of preaching
The chorus uses first person combined with universal phrasing. That blends personal confession with general truth. The delivery is calm and accepting rather than accusatory. The melody does not shout. The combination of voice tone and lyric perspective makes it feel wise.
Why does the song feel so intimate
Intimacy comes from delivery and space. Badu uses soft consonants, close mic technique, and small melodic intervals. She leaves room for breath and uses conversational phrasing. Add a camera detail and you will get the same intimacy in your songs.
How can I make my chorus feel like a proverb
Write a short line that summarizes the song idea. Use simple language. Ensure the line can stand alone as advice. Repeat it with slight variations rather than rewriting it each chorus. The more it reads like a saying the more it becomes quotable.
Lyric Editing Checklist
When you finish a draft run this checklist. It will help you keep the spirit of On & On without copying it.
- Does the chorus state the song idea plainly?
- Do verses add specific details rather than repeating the chorus?
- Is prosody aligned with the musical beats?
- Are there one or two images that carry symbolic weight?
- Does the production leave space for the vocal?
Example Rewrites Inspired By The Song
Theme we will work with: breaking a pattern of leaving notes unsent.
Before: I keep sending you messages and you do not reply.
After: My drafts folder smells like you at midnight.
Before: I am stuck repeating mistakes.
After: The same train keeps taking me back to your station and I still buy a ticket.
These after lines illustrate how a specific object or scene can upgrade an abstract feeling into something you can touch. That is the songwriting move Erykah uses throughout On & On.
Songwriter Action Plan You Can Use Today
- Listen to On & On twice. Use the first listen to feel, the second listen to take notes on the chorus thesis and two camera details.
- Write one one sentence chorus that states a cyclical truth from your life. Keep the language simple and conversational.
- Write two verses. Each verse must include one object doing an action and one time crumb.
- Do a prosody pass by speaking each line and marking stressed syllables. Align stresses with strong beats in your demo.
- Record a quiet vocal demo. Leave space. Listen for where the listener needs to breathe. Edit to remove any competing instrumentation in those spots.
- Share the demo with one trusted friend and ask what line they remember. Fix that line if it did not stick because the chorus first impression matters.
Frequently Asked Questions
Can I use the melody from On & On in my song
If you use a melody that is recognizable you must clear the usage with the copyright holder. If you are practicing at home and not releasing the track it is fine. For commercial release get permission. The rules are clear. Original melody equals protected content.
How do I make a chorus that feels wise without sounding preachy
Focus on first person observation rather than imperative statements. Keep the chorus short and make it function as a reflection. Use a calm delivery and avoid moralizing language. Let the verses show consequences rather than the chorus telling the listener what to do.
What production elements should I prioritize when making a soulful track
Prioritize space, warm low mids, a clear vocal center, and one signature sonic motif. Avoid heavy compression on the vocal that removes dynamics. Small tasteful reverbs and analog style textures can add warmth without clouding clarity.
How can I create memorable internal rhyme like in On & On
Listen for repeated consonant groups and similar vowel sounds inside lines. You can add a small consonant alliteration or a vowel echo. Do not overdo it. The goal is to create a subtle musical thread without calling attention to the technique.
What should I do if my chorus does not lift enough
Try raising the chorus range by a small interval such as a third. Simplify the lyric to one clear idea and lengthen the key word on a sustained vowel. Add one harmonic or textural production element at the chorus to create a sense of lift without changing the core melody drastically.