Songwriting Advice

Occult Rock Songwriting Advice

Occult Rock Songwriting Advice

You want a song that smells faintly of incense and scares your ex into thinking you joined a cult. You want riffs that feel like ritual, lyrics that read like a midnight journal, and a stage presence that makes your audience check their group chat for a safe word. Occult rock is theater, texture, and mood wrapped in guitar amp warmth. This guide gives you the tools to write occult rock songs that are believable, memorable, and not unbearable cringe.

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Everything here is written for millennial and Gen Z musicians who want work that lands on first listen and grows teeth by the third. Expect practical riff blueprints, lyric devices, chord palettes, topline methods, production pointers, stagecraft, ethical notes, and exercises you can do in ten minutes or ten hours. We explain any term or acronym you might not know. We give real life scenarios so you can apply these ideas without needing a PhD in occult studies. And yes, we will be outrageous, because the genre begs for it.

What Is Occult Rock

Occult rock is a blend of rock music and occult imagery or themes. That means references to magic, ritual, mythology, mysticism, secret societies, tarot, astrology, and the aesthetic of the dark and mysterious. The music can be heavy, psychedelic, folk derived, or glam. The constant is atmosphere and a clear identity. Think of it as mood first and label later.

Quick term explainer

  • Riff means a repeated guitar or bass phrase that forms the backbone of a song.
  • Topline means the vocal melody and lyrics that sit over the instrumental.
  • BPM means beats per minute. It tells you how fast the song is.
  • DAW means digital audio workstation. That is the software you record and produce in, like Ableton Live, Logic Pro, or Pro Tools.
  • EQ means equalization. It is a tool used to boost or cut frequency ranges.

Core Ideas For Occult Rock Writing

Occult rock works when the music, lyrics, and visuals are aligned. Use these core ideas as a checklist whenever you write.

  • One strong image anchors the song. Pick one object or scene and return to it.
  • Textural contrast between sections keeps attention. If the verse is whispered, let the chorus be declamatory.
  • Ritual repetition in the arrangement. Repetitive motifs feel like incantation when you space them correctly.
  • Language that is specific and slightly uncanny rather than vague mystery words.
  • Respectful use of symbolism so you avoid cultural appropriation and lazy shock value.

Define Your Ritual

Before you write any chord or lyric, write one sentence that states the ritual or scene. Keep it plain like a text to a friend. This is your core promise.

Examples

  • We hold the candle and trade our names for rain.
  • He reads my palm and finds a scar that is not mine.
  • I learn the old chant to make the moon listen.

Turn that sentence into a title or a repeated phrase in the chorus. The phrase might be literal or poetic. The important thing is that it is repeatable and singable.

Song Structure That Serves Ritual

Occult rock can be sprawling. Keep it intentional so even long songs feel earned. Here are three structures that work well.

Structure A: Build to Revelation

Intro motif, verse, pre chorus, chorus, verse, pre chorus, chorus, bridge, final chorus. Use the bridge to reveal an emotional twist or a literal revelation like a name or a symbol.

Structure B: Hypnotic Loop

Intro riff into verse that repeats with small variations, a chant chorus, an instrumental drone section, a final chant. Great for psychedelic occultism where repetition becomes the ritual.

Structure C: Spell Cycle

Short intro, verse one, chorus as incantation, verse two with new detail, chorus again, breakdown where the chant is stripped to vocals, final chorus with full band. This structure treats the chorus like a spell that becomes more powerful each time.

Riff Writing For Occult Rock

Riffs are the altar. They can be simple and effective or complex and hypnotic. Occult rock riffs often use modal choices and repetitive rhythms that sound archaic or exotic to western ears. Here is how to get one that sticks.

Scale choices that feel occult

  • Phrygian mode has a flat second that gives a Spanish or ancient flavor. It is like lowering the second note of a natural minor scale.
  • Harmonic minor creates a raised seventh that gives a sinister classical edge. The interval between the sixth and the raised seventh can feel dramatic.
  • Double harmonic sometimes called the Byzantine scale, gives a very exotic, otherworldly feel because of its augmented second interval.
  • Pentatonic minor with added chromatic neighbor notes is great when you want to keep it simple and singable but slightly eerie.

Real life scenario

You are on a late night coffee run after practice. Hum a two note pattern while walking. Add a third note from a scale above. Try repeating it four times with a slight change on the fourth repeat. Record on your phone. That little walking riff is often better than an overthought studio take.

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  • Shout-back chorus design
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What you get

  • Riff starters
  • Scene prompts
  • Chant maps
  • Tone-taming notes

Rhythm and groove

Make the riff feel like ceremony. Use syncopation to create a sense of unease. Keep the tempos for occult rock fluid. Slow and heavy works. Mid tempo with swing works. Fast and frantic works if the song is about panic or exorcism.

  • Try a 6 8 feel for ritual sway.
  • Try odd accents like ghost notes on the snare that feel like a heartbeat under the ritual.
  • Use call and response between guitar and bass so the riff sounds like a conversation between altar and flame.

Chord Progressions That Support the Mood

Occult rock does not require complicated chords. The right color is what matters. Use sustained chords and voice leading that moves slowly to suggest weight.

  • Try i to VII to VI in a minor key for a slow descending mantra.
  • Try i to iv to V with a raised seventh for tension before the chorus resolution.
  • Use pedal tones where the bass holds a note while the chords above change to make the harmony feel ritualistic.

Explain term: pedal tone means holding one bass note while other chords change. It creates drone like effect.

Lyrics: Writing Incantation Not Nonsense

Bad occult lyrics lean on vague words like darkness, shadows, and blood in every line. We want sensory specifics that feel ritual and intimate. The point is to make the world vivid. Make the listener feel they are stepping into a ceremony rather than being told about one.

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Lyric devices and examples

  • Object focus Use an object as a symbol. Example: The pewter bowl is warm with names. Repeat bowl in each verse with new detail.
  • Timecrumbs Add specific times to make scenes feel grounded. Example: Midnight on the bus home is different from midnight on a cliff.
  • Ring phrase Repeat one phrase at the start and end of the chorus. Ring phrases create incantation.
  • List escalation Use three items that escalate. Example: candles, coins, and the old coin that holds your father s name.

Before and after examples

Before: I call the spirits because I miss you.

After: I whisper your first name into the ash jar and close the lid like a promise.

Before: The house feels haunted by memory.

After: The coat rack still faces the door like remember me and laughs when the wind moves it.

Real life relatable scenario

You just broke up with someone at twenty nine. You are too tired to be poetic. Use small domestic details. The way their hoodie still smells like their shampoo. The receipt from a diner taped to the wall. Make those domestic objects the portal into bigger ritual imagery. That contrast is interesting. It tells the listener you have a foot in the ordinary world and a foot at the altar.

Learn How to Write Occult Rock Songs
Write Occult Rock that really feels built for replay, using loud tones without harsh fizz, concrete scenes over vague angst, and focused lyric tone.
You will learn

  • Riffs and modal flavors that stick
  • Concrete scenes over vague angst
  • Shout-back chorus design
  • Three- or five-piece clarity
  • Loud tones without harsh fizz
  • Set pacing with smart key flow

Who it is for

  • Bands chasing catharsis with modern punch

What you get

  • Riff starters
  • Scene prompts
  • Chant maps
  • Tone-taming notes

Vocal Delivery and Topline Tips

Occult rock performance lives in texture. Vocals can be whispered, half shouted, spoken word, or full chest. Think of the voice as a ritual instrument. The topline is the chant and needs to work on vowels and stress.

  • Sing on open vowels for long held lines. Vowels like ah oh and ahh are comfortable to sustain.
  • Use spoken word in the verse to create intimacy. Move to a sung chorus for the incantation payoff.
  • Double the chorus with a whispered harmony under the main vocal to create a halo effect.

Prosody explanation

Prosody means matching natural speech stress to musical stress. If the most important word in a line falls on a weak beat the line will feel wrong no matter how poetic it is. Say the line out loud. Mark where the voice naturally stresses words. Put those stresses on strong beats.

Arrangement and Dynamics

Arrangement is how the song breathes. Occult rock wants space. Use dynamics to make the chorus feel like a ritual release.

  • Intro Start with a simple motif or a found sound such as a creaking door to set a physical space.
  • Verse Keep instrumentation sparse. Use a low organ pad or clean arpeggiated guitar.
  • Pre chorus Add percussion and background chant that tightens energy.
  • Chorus Open the band. Let the lead riff roam. Add gang vocals or a chant to increase impact.
  • Breakdown Strip to a single instrument and voice for the ritual moment. Reintroduce layers for the final chorus.

Production Tips For That Dusty Cathedral Tone

Good production can turn a decent song into a ritual experience. Here are quick production moves and what they do.

  • Room reverb on drums and vocals to simulate a big space. Room reverb makes the song feel like it was recorded in a hall of bones.
  • Plate reverb on vocals for vintage shimmer. Plates are a type of reverb unit that sound dense and classic.
  • Analog tape saturation adds warmth and slight compression that can make guitars sound lived in.
  • Fuzz and octave pedals on guitars to create thick, otherworldly textures.
  • Lo fi samples like vinyl crackle and tape hiss at low levels to give age and atmosphere.
  • Reverse reverb tails on vocal phrases to make them sound like they are coming from somewhere else.

Explain term: tape saturation means the subtle distortion and compression that happens when recording to magnetic tape. Digital plugins emulate this effect.

Guitar Tone Recipes

One tone recipe for occult rock

  1. Guitar through a fuzz pedal set to thick drive.
  2. Into a mid scooped amp model for downward frequency emphasis.
  3. Add a subtle chorus effect in the verse for shimmer.
  4. During the chorus add an octave up or an envelope filter to cut through the mix.

Another option for folk driven occult rock

  1. Acoustic guitar with a light room mic for presence.
  2. Add a low end drone synth under the verses.
  3. Use harmonium or pump organ for chorus weight.

Stagecraft and Visuals

Music is half sound and half what the audience remembers later in a photo. Stagecraft is where occult rock becomes cinematic.

  • Lighting Keep it directional. Backlight the band and let smoke reveal shapes. Use a single moving spotlight to create ritual movement.
  • Props A table with a candle, a bowl, or a deck of cards is enough. Props should feel used by you not randomly placed.
  • Costume Stick to a palette. Too many symbols look like a thrift store gone wrong. One strong element like a cloak or a ring is better.
  • Movement Choreograph small gestures. A repeated hand motion during the chorus becomes an audience cue to join in.

Ethics note

Occult imagery borrows from cultures and practices with history. Do not use sacred symbols as shock props without research and permission. If you reference real rituals, give credit and avoid caricature. The goal is mystery not mockery.

Marketing and Brand Identity

Your songs need a context beyond the stage. Build a consistent story that lives across your artwork, social posts, and shows.

  • Visual language Choose two colors and one texture motif. For example black, deep violet, and paper grain. Use these consistently.
  • Short form video Show ritual rehearsal clips, behind the scenes of building a prop, or the making of a riff. Keep each clip under 60 seconds for better engagement on most platforms.
  • Playlist strategy Consider playlists for dark rock, occult rock, and psychedelic rock. Pitch to independent curators. A single playlist placement can drive discovery.
  • Narrative posts Share a short story or the thought behind a lyric line to let fans feel like witnesses to the ritual.

Songwriting Exercises For Occult Rock

The Sigil Exercise

Write a one line intention in plain language. For example I remember her laugh. Turn that sentence into a sigil by removing repeated letters and drawing a small symbol that combines the remaining letters. Use that sigil as the chorus ring phrase visually and as a lyric motif. The point is to force condensation of a complex feeling into a repeatable sign and phrase.

The Candle Drill

Light a candle and set a timer for ten minutes. Write five concrete images you notice in the room. Use one of those images to write a four line verse. Do not overthink. Time pressure forces specific details which are better than abstract mood words.

The Chant Build

Make a four syllable phrase that is easy to repeat. Say it on vowels over a drone for two minutes. Record on your phone. Play it back and find a melody or a rhythmic placement that fits your riff. This becomes your chorus or a background chant.

Micro Prompts You Can Use Tonight

  • Write a chorus about a lost key that opens a different life.
  • Write two lines of verse where the narrator admits a minor theft of memory.
  • Find a household object and write three lines where it becomes a talisman.

Melody Diagnostics

If your vocal melody does not land, check these elements.

  • Range Keep verses lower and make the chorus sit at a comfortable sung range for most people. If your chorus is too high you will lose sing along potential.
  • Leap placement Use a leap into a key word to create emphasis. The ear notices leaps and expects resolution.
  • Repetition Repeat a short melodic motif to make the chorus feel like an incantation.
  • Vowel comfort Test lines by singing them on AH OH EE and choose the vowel that feels best for sustain and clarity.

Crime Scene Edit For Lyrics

  1. Underline every abstract word. Replace each with a concrete detail.
  2. Circle every filler phrase such as you know or like and delete them.
  3. Ask does this line add new information. If not, cut it or rewrite it to raise stakes.
  4. Read aloud. If you stumble, rewrite for clearer prosody.

Example edit

Before: The room is full of old pain and I remember.

After: A moth unfurls from the lampshade and lands on the receipt with your name.

Finishing Workflow

  1. Lock the core promise sentence. Make sure this idea appears as the chorus ring phrase or title.
  2. Finalize the riff and the chord palette. Print the chord names for your band so everyone knows the palette.
  3. Record a rough demo with basic arrangement. Keep it raw. The demo is for decisions not perfection.
  4. Play the demo for two trusted people and ask what line they remember. If they cannot recall a single line the song lacks a hook.
  5. Polish one element that raises the hook. Avoid changing everything at once because you will lose identity.

Common Mistakes And Fixes

  • Mistake Using too many occult references in a single song. Fix Commit to one strong image and let other references orbit it.
  • Mistake Being vague to seem mysterious. Fix Replace vague words with sensory detail and a small domestic object.
  • Mistake Overproducing so the ritual feels fake. Fix Keep one raw element like a hand percussion or a creak to maintain authenticity.
  • Mistake Copying famous occult bands instead of finding your voice. Fix Take one element you admire and combine it with something personal from your life.

Real World Writing Case Studies

Case 1: The One Riff Cure

A two piece band on a limited budget had one guitar riff they loved. They looped it and wrote five different chorus ring phrases to test which one felt like ritual. The winning chorus was the simplest of the five. They used a single candle on stage and asked the audience to bring anything small to leave at the foot of the amp. The ritual became a live participation moment and the song took on meaning beyond the studio take.

Case 2: The Ferry Confessional

A songwriter rode the ferry at night and noticed a life jacket that had been painted black. They imagined a secret society of ferrymen who paint life jackets to remember lost names. That image became a verse with specific names and a chorus that repeated the phrase paint the jacket. The local venue loved the story and created a companion visual which increased streams after the show.

Do not encourage dangerous activities in your lyrics or stage shows. If your song references substances or harmful rituals keep the tone symbolic. If you invite audience participation make safety plans. If you use other people s religious symbols ask for consent when appropriate. Mystery is not a license for harm.

Occult Rock Songwriting FAQ

What tempo works best for occult rock

There is no single tempo. Slow tempos create ceremony. Mid tempos work for groove based occult rock. Fast tempos can convey panic or exorcism. Choose tempo based on the emotion of the ritual you want to portray. Try three tempos with the same riff and pick the one that gives the most visceral response when you play it loud.

Can I write occult lyrics without being literal about ritual

Yes. You can use occult imagery as metaphor for relationships, personal change, or memory. The key is to keep detail specific. Metaphor gives the listener multiple levels of interpretation. The same lyric can sound literal to some and symbolic to others, which can be powerful.

How do I avoid cultural appropriation when using symbolism

Research the symbols you use. If a symbol belongs to a living tradition ask practitioners how it might be perceived. Use universal or invented symbols if you cannot responsibly use a real one. Always aim for respect rather than shock value. Credit sources in your liner notes or posts when it matters.

What instruments define the occult rock sound

Guitar and bass are core. Hammond organ or pump organ, vintage synths, analog pedals, and percussive found objects are common. Anything that adds texture can work. The instrument list supports mood not genre rules.

How do I make a chorus feel like a spell

Repeat a short phrase with strong vowels. Layer vocals for density. Use a steady rhythmic pattern that becomes predictable so the audience can join in. Add one surprising word or chord at the last repeat to create a twist in the ritual.

Should I actually practice rituals for authenticity

No. You do not need to practice real rituals to create authentic songs. Use imagination, observation, and research. If you choose to explore real practices do so respectfully and with consent when you are in someone s space. Authenticity comes from honesty not from claiming authority you do not have.

How do I create a memorable riff quickly

Limit yourself to three notes. Repeat them with a rhythmic change every four bars. Try adding a minor variation on the fourth repetition. Record on your phone. If you find yourself humming the riff the next day you have something.

What production tools are essential for this style

A reverb with room and plate options, a saturation or tape emulator, a fuzz or distortion pedal for guitars, and a simple sampler for found sounds are the essentials. You can get a convincing sound with a minimal setup if you use space and contrast wisely.

How do I make a live show feel like an immersive ritual

Focus on pacing. Start small and build to a collective moment where the audience is invited to chant or gesture. Use lighting and a small prop table. Keep the narrative consistent across set list, visuals, and between song banter so the audience follows the ritual thread.

Learn How to Write Occult Rock Songs
Write Occult Rock that really feels built for replay, using loud tones without harsh fizz, concrete scenes over vague angst, and focused lyric tone.
You will learn

  • Riffs and modal flavors that stick
  • Concrete scenes over vague angst
  • Shout-back chorus design
  • Three- or five-piece clarity
  • Loud tones without harsh fizz
  • Set pacing with smart key flow

Who it is for

  • Bands chasing catharsis with modern punch

What you get

  • Riff starters
  • Scene prompts
  • Chant maps
  • Tone-taming notes

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About Toni Mercia

Toni Mercia is a Grammy award-winning songwriter and the founder of Lyric Assistant. With over 15 years of experience in the music industry, Toni has written hit songs for some of the biggest names in music. She has a passion for helping aspiring songwriters unlock their creativity and take their craft to the next level. Through Lyric Assistant, Toni has created a tool that empowers songwriters to make great lyrics and turn their musical dreams into reality.