Songwriting Advice
How to Write Intelligent Drum And Bass Lyrics
Drum and Bass is fast, furious, and brainy when you let it be. You want lyrics that ride those breakbeats like a stunt driver, that still say something clever, human, and real. You want lines that slam in a club and translate to headphones on the bus. This guide gives you the craft, the exercises, and the real world tricks to write drum and bass lyrics that are punchy, poetic, and built for the tempo.
Quick Links to Useful Sections
- What Is Drum and Bass and Why Lyrics Matter
- Pick a Smart Theme
- Write to Rhythm First
- Map the rhythm
- Use short phrases and crates of silence
- Rhyme and Internal Rhythm
- Examples
- Storytelling That Fits the Moment
- Before and after rewrite
- Voice Choice and Persona
- Hooks That Work in Drum and Bass
- Prosody Doctor for DnB
- Building Flow and Breath Control
- Word Play Without Being Cryptic
- Collaboration With Producers
- Arrangement Maps for Lyrics
- Liquid map
- Jump up map
- Neuro map
- Recording Vocals That Match the Energy
- Lyric Editing Checklist
- Exercises to Make You Faster and Smarter
- Two bar improv
- Object drill
- Vowel pass
- Borrow and twist
- Before and After Examples You Can Model
- Common Mistakes and Quick Fixes
- How to Test Your Lyrics
- Performance Tips
- How to Write Intelligent Lyrics Without Sounding Pretentious
- SEO Friendly Title and Hook Tips for Streaming
- Action Plan You Can Use Today
- Drum And Bass Lyric FAQ
Everything here assumes you are a songwriter, an MC, a vocalist, or a producer who values words. I will explain every term and acronym so nobody has to feel like they wandered into a secret DJ handshake. Expect concrete exercises, before and after rewrites, recording tips, arrangement ideas, and real life scenarios you can steal and adapt immediately.
What Is Drum and Bass and Why Lyrics Matter
Drum and Bass, often abbreviated as DnB, is electronic music that usually sits between one sixty and one eighty eight beats per minute. The drums are complex, often chopped from classic breakbeats like the amen break. Sub bass is heavy and focused. DnB can be instrumental, but when lyrics work they provide an anchor for the listener in a high speed world. Lyrics give a human pulse to mechanical drums. They can provide narrative, mood, or a chantable hook that people remember between drops.
Here are common DnB substyles and what lyrics usually do for them
- Liquid is smooth and melodic. Lyrics here are spacey, emotional, and cinematic. Think of late night confessions and vivid weather imagery.
- Neurofunk leans dark and mechanical. Lyrics can be terse, technical, or paranoid. Use tight phrasing and imagery that feels like circuitry and pressure.
- Jump up is raw and party focused. Lyrics work as hooks and crowd chants. Short lines and repetition are gold.
- Rollers are groove oriented. Lyrics are hypnotic and cyclical. Repeated motifs work well to lock the listener in.
If you are an MC the expectation is different from a singer. MC stands for Master of Ceremonies. In the DnB context MC also means someone who raps, chatters, or hypemans over the track. Singer simply sings melody and sits inside the mix rather than riding every drum hit. Both approaches are valid. Choose the one that fits your voice and the track.
Pick a Smart Theme
Intelligent lyrics come from interesting premises. Pick a single emotional or intellectual idea and let every line orbit that idea. This is your core promise. Say it in one sentence. If you cannot make a single sentence, you do not have a promise yet.
Examples of strong core promises you can turn into titles
- I ran through abandoned stations to hear my heartbeat again.
- Memory loops like a scratched record and I am learning to listen.
- We are noise and we are the quiet between the snare hits.
Turn the promise into a short title. Drum and Bass needs titles that are easy to sing fast. Prefer strong consonants and open vowels. Avoid long clunky phrases unless you plan to use them as spoken word.
Write to Rhythm First
Drum and Bass moves fast. You cannot fit too many slow syllables into a rapid bar without choking the delivery. Treat the beat like a narrow hallway. Your words need to walk, run, and sometimes sprint without tripping.
Map the rhythm
- Load a two bar loop of the track or a representative drum pattern into your DAW or phone recorder.
- Clap along and mark the strong beats. Because the tempo is fast strong beats will include not just the downbeat but anticipated snare placements and off beat cymbal hits.
- Speak your line at a natural speed while tapping the grid. Mark which syllables land on the strong beats. Those syllables should be the strongest words in the line.
This process is prosody. Prosody means aligning the natural acoustic stress of spoken words with musical stress so the performance feels inevitable. If a strong word falls on a weak beat it will sound wrong even if your lyrics are brilliant on paper.
Use short phrases and crates of silence
Short phrasing gives the beat room to breathe. It also creates space for drums to speak. Imagine the lyrics as a snare that shares space with the drum kit. The listener needs places to exhale. Silence or micro rests are as musical as notes. Leave half beats empty sometimes. Let the drums tell part of the story.
Rhyme and Internal Rhythm
Rhyme in fast music is not about tidy couplets. Rhyme is about momentum. Use internal rhymes to create a rolling feeling. Internal rhyme means rhyming words inside the same line rather than at the line end. Multisyllabic rhyme means matching patterns across multiple syllables. Consonance and assonance give you texture without predictable endings.
Examples
Internal rhyme
Glass in my pocket, past in my pocket, I keep the echo locked in.
Multisyllabic rhyme
Tell me the protocol, tell me the protocol, tell me when the night calls.
Assonance and consonance
The low glow rolls slow like ocean code.
Use an ear first approach. Say the line out loud and listen to how vowels stretch and consonants snap. If the line trips when you say it, rewrite it. Faster tempos punish awkward shapes. Smooth, singable vowels make a line easier to land under pressure.
Storytelling That Fits the Moment
Great DnB lyrics do not always need a full narrative. You can build an image sequence, a long metaphor, or a set of related scenes. The key is coherence. Each line must add a new angle or intensify the emotion. In high tempo music the listener will not parse long streams of exposition. Instead, give them sensory crumbs they can assemble.
Real life scenario
Imagine a late train ride after a bad breakup. The carriage is half empty, the speaker is on, and the lights keep blinking. Instead of writing a 500 word explanation you hand the listener three moments: a flicked lighter, a song on repeat, and a catalog receipt in the ashtray. Those three details carry a world of feeling.
Before and after rewrite
Before: I miss you and the nights feel cold.
After: Your jacket on the seat smells like summer and the overhead lights blink apologetically.
In the after version the detail gives weight and specificity. The listener writes the missing lines. That is smart lyric writing.
Voice Choice and Persona
Decide who is speaking. Are you the narrator, a character, or a collective voice? A direct address works well for club settings. A detached observational voice is better for cinematic liquid tracks. An angry first person can crush a jungle or neurofunk track if the delivery is precise.
Real life scenario
For a rollers track imagine a commuter who learns to love the motion of the city. For a jump up track think of someone hyping a crowd while also being slightly self aware. A persona gives you constraints and those constraints are your friend because they make choices faster and stronger.
Hooks That Work in Drum and Bass
Hooks in DnB can be melodic chants, short repetitive lines, or staccato slogans. Because of the tempo keep hooks short and punchy. A three word hook can be more effective than a ten word hook if it lands in the right place. Hooks should be easier to remember than the verses because they are your anchor.
Hook recipes
- Start with one strong image
- Repeat it twice or thrice with a slight variation on the last repeat
- Place the hook on a wide vowel or long note for singers or on a rhythmic pocket for MCs
Sample hooks
Keep the light, keep the light, let the city breathe.
We go wrong and we go loud, loud like the foxes in the town.
Prosody Doctor for DnB
Prosody problems ruin DnB tracks quickly because the tempo amplifies friction. Use this routine
- Read your lines aloud at normal speech speed. Mark natural stresses.
- Sing the lines slowly over the track. Move stresses so they land on beats that feel strong.
- If a stressed syllable lands on a weak beat change the word or the note.
- Prefer strong content words on the beat. Function words like to and the can sit off beat.
Example problem and fix
Bad: I am feeling so small in the back of the room.
Why it fails: The word feeling is longer and pushes the stress awkwardly.
Fix: Small room, loud clock, I fold my voice into the bass.
Building Flow and Breath Control
Breath control is crucial. You will not win a DnB bar war if you run out of air. Practice with these drills
- Two bar breath drill. Rhyme for two bars then stop. Record and check where breath points fall. Rework lines so natural breaths fit into rests in the drums.
- Half bar sprint. Deliver a burst of lines in half a bar and then keep quiet for a full bar. This trains pocket timing and makes your silence musical.
- Long note training. Hold vowels on sustained notes over sub bass to learn pitch stability under pressure.
Real life tip
When performing live or recording put a small mark on your lyric sheet where you will breathe. Practice starting from that breath so your first syllable snaps into place like a strike.
Word Play Without Being Cryptic
Intelligent lyrics can include clever word play. Word play is a play on words. It wants to reward an attentive listener without making others feel left out. Avoid opaque references that require a thesis to decode. Use double meanings that reward repeat listens.
Example
Line: I log out of memory like a user closing tabs.
Why it works: It uses modern digital metaphor to describe emotional closure. The image is clear and clever even on first listen.
Collaboration With Producers
Producers and lyricists must speak the same language. Give producers clear guidance on where to leave space and where to add pumps. A producer may want the hook to happen after a bar drop or to be doubled with a vocal chop. Communicate like this
- Mark the bar numbers for hooks, pre hooks, and drops
- Say whether the hook should sit on top of the mix or be mixed behind percussion
- Offer options for placement. For example you can place the hook on the off beat or on the downbeat depending on energy.
Real life scenario
Send a rough demo with your vocal performance and indicate a single sentence such as Please cut the synth at bar 17 so the hook can breathe. This helps avoid endless redoing and keeps the session moving.
Arrangement Maps for Lyrics
Here are three arrangement templates you can steal and adapt. Mark each section with time or bar numbers. Remember at high tempo the listener wants payoff early and early again.
Liquid map
- Intro with ambient sample and a whispered line to set mood
- Verse one softly delivered
- Build with percussion and a short pre hook
- Chorus with melodic line doubled and long vowel
- Instrumental roller with vocal adlib as texture
- Verse two with added detail and slight variation
- Final chorus with stacked harmonies
Jump up map
- Intro with a high energy chant to set the chantable hook
- Verse one short and punchy
- Build with snare rolls
- Hook drop for crowd to shout along
- Breakdown with a spoken bar
- Final double hook with adlibs
Neuro map
- Cold open with a cryptic line
- Verse one clipped and precise
- Mechanical build with filtered vocals
- Impact where the lyric repeats a technical phrase as a mantra
- Bridge with spoken word and sound design
- Return with modified hook to add a new detail
Recording Vocals That Match the Energy
Recording for DnB is half performance and half engineering. The vocal should sit where it supports the drums and the sub. Here are production ideas that help lyrics land.
- Double the chorus. Record two or three takes and stack them to create width. For very fast hooks consider one tight double and one slightly delayed double to create movement.
- Use parallel processing. Send a vocal to a compressed bus to add presence and to another bus with reverb to add space. Mix them to taste so the vocal reads sharply in the mix and still breathes.
- Delay for rhythm. A short quarter note or dotted eighth note delay can create a bouncing echo that locks to the tempo. Automate it out when it muddies the verse.
- Formant and pitch shifts. Slight pitch shift on backing vocals can create tension without sounding unnatural. Be careful not to use extreme shifts that make the voice sound like a cartoon unless that is your aesthetic.
- Vocal chops. Chop a line and turn it into rhythmic elements. This works well in neuro and rollers where the vocal can become percussive.
Lyric Editing Checklist
- Remove any abstract sentence that does not contain a concrete image.
- Circle every multi syllable word. If it slows the line replace it with shorter words or split the idea across two lines.
- Highlight the strongest word in each line and make sure it lands on a strong beat.
- Check breath points. Insert micro rests if necessary.
- Run the crime scene edit. Cut anything that repeats information without adding an emotional or visual shift.
Exercises to Make You Faster and Smarter
Two bar improv
Play a two bar drum loop for one minute and free rap or sing nonstop. The goal is to find rhythmic gestures you can repeat. Record and pick two magical bars to refine into a hook.
Object drill
Pick one object in your room. Write eight lines where the object performs eight different actions. The object becomes your metaphor anchor. Use this for liquid storytelling or dark neuro imagery.
Vowel pass
Vocalize on a single vowel over the main hook and record. Find where your mouth naturally wants to shape words. This helps you place titles on singable vowels.
Borrow and twist
Choose a common phrase like holding on or running out. Rewrite it into two versions that are literal and one that is unexpected. Use the unexpected version in a hook.
Before and After Examples You Can Model
Theme: Moving through the city to restart.
Before: I walk the streets at night and I feel lonely.
After: My shoes count the pavement, neon blinks a steady beat, I leave my old name under the bridge.
Theme: Internal loop and memory.
Before: I keep thinking about the same moment.
After: Replay stuck on frame two, your laugh rewinds like a scratched single, I learn the chorus by heart so I forget the verses.
Theme: Crowd and anonymity in club life.
Before: The club is loud and I am lost.
After: The floor dissolves into footsteps, faces blur into a low light tide, I shout my name until it becomes new.
Common Mistakes and Quick Fixes
- Overwriting Use fewer images. Pick the strongest one and let it echo. Too many metaphors equal confusion.
- Bad prosody Speak the line out loud and adjust. If it clicks in conversation it will click in the track.
- Too slow Cut long multisyllabic words or break ideas across bars. Keep space for drums to work.
- Cliché heavy Swap abstract feelings for a physical object. Replace I feel alone with The umbrella counts me as one more ghost.
How to Test Your Lyrics
- Record a scratch vocal over the track and listen with headphones. Does the vocal jump out or fight the kick?
- Play the track in a loud environment. Does the hook still cut through when the bass thumps?
- Sing only the hook without words. Does it still feel like a hook? If not rewrite to focus the melody or the rhythm.
- Ask two people to hum back the hook after one listen. If they can hum it you are in business.
Performance Tips
- Save energy for the hook. Do not rap every bar at full intensity. Use dynamics so the hook feels like a release.
- Learn to drop consonants without losing clarity. At high tempo some consonants will muddle the mix. Practice softening where needed.
- Use call and response. A shouted two word line and a crowd reply can turn a club into your instrument.
- Time your adlibs. A short echo after a hook can become a signature. Longer adlibs belong to liquid tracks or recorded mixes.
How to Write Intelligent Lyrics Without Sounding Pretentious
Intelligent does not mean complicated. Write lines that reveal a thought in a tidy way. Use imagery that feels novel but accessible. If you reference an obscure idea explain it with a small image. Your job is to reward listeners not to test them.
Example
Instead of name dropping a philosopher write a short image that illustrates the idea. For example replace existential dread with a lighter that never sparks. The image is concrete and carries the same weight.
SEO Friendly Title and Hook Tips for Streaming
If you want your DnB song to be discovered think about the title and the very first vocal moment. Streaming algorithms favor songs that get skipped less in the first thirty seconds. Put a recognizable hook, title line, or vocal stamp inside the first thirty seconds so listeners either commit or decide early. For playlist placement catchy short titles help searches and shares. Titles that hint at theme work: Night Station, Loop City, Quiet Between Hits.
Action Plan You Can Use Today
- Write one sentence that states the core promise. Make it short and concrete.
- Pick the target substyle. Decide on voice and persona.
- Map the drums and mark four strong beats in each two bar phrase.
- Do a two bar improv over the loop for two minutes. Capture every idea.
- Choose one hook from the improv and refine it until it is three words or a single vivid image.
- Write two verses of three lines each. Use specific objects and time crumbs.
- Run the prosody doctor. Align stress with beat. Adjust breaths.
- Record a scratch vocal with basic processing. Test in headphones and loudspeaker. Tweak.
Drum And Bass Lyric FAQ
What tempo should my lyrics aim for
Drum and Bass usually sits between one sixty and one eighty eight beats per minute. Your lyrics should be written to the feel of the track. For faster tempos use shorter words and more internal rhyme. For slightly slower rollers give yourself longer vowels and more melodic phrasing.
Should I write lyrics before or after production
Either approach works. Writing after production helps you land prosody perfectly. Writing before production can give the producer clear direction on energy and structure. A useful compromise is to create a two bar beat sketch then draft lyrics so both parts evolve together.
How do I make a hook that people can shout in a club
Keep it short, repeatable, and easy to pronounce. Use hard consonants that cut through the mix and open vowels that carry. Place it right before or after a drop and keep a small silence so the crowd can respond. Test it at low volume and then at club volume to make sure it travels.
What if my lyrics are too long for the tempo
Shorten phrases. Split ideas across bars. Remove filler words and prefer strong nouns and verbs. When in doubt cut a syllable. The drums will thank you.
How can I incorporate spoken word into DnB without sounding pretentious
Keep spoken lines short and connected to imagery. Use a conversational tone and place the spoken moment in a breakdown or a bridge. Think of the spoken line as a camera zoom not an essay. Make it vivid and let the music do part of the explanation.
Is autotune acceptable in DnB vocals
Autotune is a tool. Use it for effect or to correct pitch. In liquid tracks subtle tuning can make the vocal float. In neuro and jump up it can be used aggressively for character. The rule is use taste and avoid obvious processing that distracts from the lyric unless that is your artistic choice.
How many times should I repeat a hook
Repeat enough that it becomes memorable but not so much that it grinds. Three to five repeats across a track is typical depending on length and substyle. In jump up you can repeat more because the energy supports it. In liquid one or two strong repeats with variation often works better.
How do I keep my lyrics interesting across repeats
Add micro variations. Change the last word on the third repeat. Add a layer of harmony or a countermelody. Introduce a new adlib. Small shifts keep the listener engaged without breaking the hook.